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Posted: 11 years ago



me too waiting
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~BEZUBA~






Am overwhelmed with the response, thanks for showering your love😃





~PART 1~



Her eyes opened at the break of dawn, she was lying discarded. Standing up on trembling legs Geet walked out of the barn. Her clothes were torn n she didn't even take her dubatta from outside. Her mind was numb. Moreover, did she have anything to hide anymore? Before reaching the main road she lost consciousness again. Next she woke up to angry shouts n crying. As she sat up a violent slap met her cheek. Pure khandaan ka naam mitti me mila dia. She looked all around at everyone cursing her with their harsh gazes. Raji was there too, no sympathy in her eyes just scorn. Her dried eyes were unable to tear up n throat didn't had another scream to spare. She was tainted for life.



4 years later...
Honking of a car jolted her to attention but it was too late.
Maan didn't want to be here. The place reminded him too much of the dreadful past. Memories twisted n scraped him from inside making him bleed. It felt impossible to breath in this air. Maan looked outside the window into the thik darkness, wind blew n fat rain drops splattered on the window trying to hit him. He was going to leave the place as soon as his work was done.
The car honked n came to a sudden halt.
Maan- Kya hua?
Driver- Saabji ko gadi k saame kuch aa gaya hai. Koi jaanwar hai shayad.
Maan furiously- Tum dekhke nai chala sakte.
Driver- Meri galti nai hai, barish me kuch dikh nai raha tha-
Maan showed him a hand- Bahar nikal ke check kro.
Driver after checking came back hell scared for he knew how short-tempered his boss was.
Driver- Saabji yeh toh koi ladki.
Maan stepped out on the road in monstrous rain; thunder was crackling like it was the end of world. He moved towards the front of car where driver was examining the girl for injury. He couldn't see her clearly in dark so stepped closer to her limp body. The driver turned her around n he saw her face. His eyes widened seeing her face, the striking and carved features breathtaking. Her wet, milky skin shone white n sparkled in the glow of headlights.
Driver- Khoon nai beh raha hai. Aap tension mat lijiye, mai aisi ladiyo ko acche se jaanta hu. Khud hi gadi k saamne aa gai hogi taki ameer admi se paise le sake.
Maan's eyes were fuming- First you can't drive a bloody car n then opening your idiotic mouth. Jab bolne ko kaha jaye tabhi muh khola kro, samjhe.
Maan crouched down n pulled her soft body into his capable arms picking her up. Her cold form was delicate n light. As he stood up shifting her against his body, her softness compressed against his hard panes. He deposited her into the back seat n they drove back to where he was staying.
Geet woke in the unknown place. Her mind was foggy n she had no idea what had happened. She vaguely recollected about the rain n then the car. Fear gripped her. No she wasn't scared of this place or perhaps that stranger who must have brought her here. She was scared of what would happen when she would go back home. They would kill her.
She had gone out to buy some supplies. Taayi ji had sent her in the evening. But it had been a mistake to go to her favorite place. The old ruins. Generally kids played there but she loved it to ends. The land surrounding the ruins was covered in flowers whose bloom in air was detectable from far away. Geet wasn't allowed to go out without any work n unless she was asked to. So she always went there secretively and thank heavens was never caught. Only this time it had started to rain. She thought to wait for the rain to stop, last thing she needed was her family to see her in wet clothes. They wouldn't like that.
Her clothes had almost dried off by now, she noticed. It must have been hours. She didn't even know if it was still night or the sun had came out as heavy curtains hung over the window. Before she could go around, footsteps sounded outside the room. Geet panicked. She stood up n took the empty vase in her hand. The door opened n she raised her hand. Strong fingers curled around her wrist. She frantically tried to free herself, breathing hard. The lights were switched on. She could do nothing else but gasp. The man before her was exquisite. She had never seen a man as beautiful as him. His was tall n large, crowding over her. All his features from eyes to lips, from nose to jaws were perfect. And he seemed strong. So strong that he could do anything n she wouldn't be able to stop him.
She started to struggle again n he pushed her away as if she burned. Geet fell on the bed. Finally you are awake. His voice was taunting and then angry. Tum andhi nai lagti phir meri car ke samne kaise aai? She looked down. He didn't look like a bad guy, dressed in crisp business suit that was apparently very expensive. She had heard there was a big business man in Hosiyaarpur as some power plant was going to be built here. He must be the business man or may be his associate or something.
Maan's eyes roamed over her as if assessing. She was delicate like a bud ready to blossom. Her frame was thin but curves delicious. When she had wriggled in his arms, he had felt his gut stirring. Maan shook his head n gritted his teeth. Geet felt nervous under his scrutiny n instinctively adjusted her dubatta. The injury on her elbow caught his eyes. He moved towards the cupboard n took out a box, kept it on bed sitting beside her. Then he took her hand in his jaise uska haq banta ho n attended to the wound.
Aur kahi chot hai? His voice was firm n flat. Geet shook her head rapidly. A small whimper that sounded like nahi came out of her mouth then she looked down again. Jhut kehna zaroori hai? His jaw was clenched n he pulled her closer gripping her shoulder tightly. As her breasts pressed lightly against his chest Geet closed her eyes. Her breathing was rugged n heart beat fast ready to burst. Maan glided his hands over her sides, from the swell of her chest down to the curve of her waist. God, if he needed to rip her clothes to see if she was injured he would do that.





NEXT- Part 2




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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update osheen...
after the shocking start, i was wondering how its going to be...
am glad that u took this leap...
And Maan... am not able to relate him to a guy who can rape for revenge after reading this part.. he is angry person, but seems to have a heart that cares...
And Geet... she is so scared... not of him but of her family... her family seems to be nothing worst than animalistic ppl...
It was awesome.. and as always, am waiting for the next..
Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will come back n comnt after an hour or so
yet to read
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back and read the update...
it was just too gud dolly.. the way u described their conditions..
so it was a leap of 4 yrs that they met..
but maan doesnt seem that bad i guess..
but jo bhi ho.. she is very vulnerable and he seems to be very caring
i wanna know wht has happened that he had taken the extreme step..
and geet unable to speak out...
i really cant wait for the next parts.. uodt asap
Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome one,dey met.,and maan doing first aid not bad..,waiting for nxt part.
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wow lovely emotional update.. wat happen to geet in tis 4 years.. te way my maan thinking abt te past and te way geet came in front of te car was lovely emotional.. te way my maaneet scenes were lovely emotional cute.. te way my maan dressing her wounds making his geet ki nervous weak was lovely..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Osheen congrats on the new story 😊
so maan had raped geet 😡 just for some revenge hmmm
he has probably not so much memory of the girl he had raped, so thats the reason he was not able to identify her hmmm
wondering how geet was treated by her family, and looks like she is still scared of them... cant wait

will maan ever know what he has done, or will geet know 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
After prolouge it was confusing... Why maan didn't recognized her????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.quite interesting
waiting 4r nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hm maan is guilty for wat he did years back but may b he was tooo drunk to realise wat he was doing den but he seems a good human but I guess its too early to judge anything. Poor geet wat would she have gone through dis 4 yrs.
Thanks for the update osheen 😊

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