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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

finally caught hold of something tht hasnt gone too far of my reach...after ibaadat!!😆

beautiful start dolly..with the poem..it actually gave me the whole essence of the story
and prologue was just too gud and too surprising...
i wouldn't say too shocking because i can handle such stuffs well..
actually was prepared reading the poems in the beginning but vengeance by ruining an innocent... that is unacceptable be it maan...
ok i know anger n vengeance blinds ppl... but like this??
poor geet.. no fault of hers yet she is punished!
waiting for u to start...
super excited about it

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minelove24

@minelove24

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

omg omg maan raped geet..nd geet lost her voice..nd geet/s family is so cruel..nd maan was so ruthless..he misunderstood geet as real sis of her so calld brother..eagerly waiting for next

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

awesome concept..

maan did this to geet😡??????for revenge????😡

update soon waiting ...

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

congrats for new story...
prologue was scary...
poor geet...
nd her family was accusing her ...
her sister Rajji is so bad... she is jealous her geet's beauty...
nd howz that man?
he is not maan for sure...

waiting for next...
update soon...

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Sonali

@maaneetkisonali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

that was an outstanding start di..
congrats for a new awesome story...
ufff prologue me hi itna pain wat will happen wen we'll get to read more parts...
gosh hating rajji so much and her family to...
did geet lost her voice??
babaji wat maan did...
wat will happen now???
me waiting for.more...
me as.always in luv with your work...
update soon

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Ayeshaateeq

@Ayeshaateeq

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

1st congrass 4 new story

itz name is awsum

but maan rape geet itz shocking

i know u have a goo story all the best

n continue soon

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Intense. Who was he. Pls continue soon

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Why???? What was geet's fault... I m feeling too bad for geet...

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manahil535

@manahil535

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

first of all congrats for starting new ss. now comin to prologue it seems like its goin to be sad story though i hope its just my thinking w8ing for 1st part now... 😊