MG FF- STILL WAITING #3 Part 39 Page 104 (5/7) - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
chalo maan se hum bhi janna hahte hai...

superb n cute update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for next part , it's long time know that u update
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Part 36


There were many questions in geet mind which she wanted to know.. but she don't know how to ask anything from maan, he has changed totally. The person who don't like to see her face, don't like to hear anything from her is today asking about her likes n dislikes, is giving her shoulder to cry, is sitting with her hearing her pain, is consoling her that she will be allri8 n will live happily with her kids n him, what had happened in this 1 n half year she don't know. Through aniee n arjun she got all info about her kids but she was unable to ask about him ever n they too didn't give any info. The relation which she always wanted in her life is now, her husband is loving n making her feel spcl., pampering her, is it all reality or another dream she is living, but one thing she know this dream is beautiful n she wanted to live this dream forever.

Maan came out after shower n saw his cuties playing n geet sitting lost in her thoughts, he know she need time to digest all facts that he is there for her in every problem, in every happiness, the crime which he did was not forgivable but she accepted him, she is really an angel whom, he have given immense pain in life, made her cry n sometimes raised his hands too, whenever he think about those moments he wanted to kill himself for giving her that pain but only he know how he did all this, parting kids from her a sin which he committed her let her n his kids cry due to some reasons, he wanted to confess his love, his crime to her n he know its her ri8 to know every damn things y he did, he wanted to give her happiness which was never in her life after her mother, today he saw a small child in her who was happy to see foods that were spcly cooked for her n was her fav. He know every damn things about her life, he know how terribly she miss her mother n wanted someone to share her pain, which was never in her life. He has seen her looking at her chooti maa with hopeful eyes to get some love, some warmth in her eyes for her. He had seen her crying for her father's some love words, a strength which a father provide to their child. He have seen her looking at his family with some kind of jealous n hope, jealous of not having anyone love her accept her n hope to be one of them once in her life, to smile with them n to eat with them. This all things are small in compared to what he saw love in her eyes for him, which she always wanted to reciprocated, some love filled words, some warmth, n soo many filling which he never gave her. He still remember when he used to spend time with her sometimes at the time of pregnancy, how cutely she used to stare at him like asking ad wanted to tell so many things but in fear she never said anything to him. Now he wanted to give her childhood which she missed due to her parents n her teenage which she lost in marriage. He wanted to give her every feel to relive her life with him n babies.

Both maaneet thoughts broke with cuties shouting and laughing.. who were playing with ball. Maan smiled at cuties n sat beside geet n hugged her n asked "did u had ur milk" on which geet nodded n then she kept her head on his shoulder

n after thinking lot she asked "ek baat bolu aapse" maan sadly smiled at her as she was hesitating to say anything but nodded his head n said "bolo" geet in lil. Afraid voice said "u have changed a lot" maan understood what she was hinting n said "sometime its situation geet which makes us hard n its same situation which make us soft, i know what u wanted to ask n know geet, y i have changed soo much, the man who doesn't like ur face is pampering u n doing everything for u, but i promise u geet i will tell u each n everything but not now give me some more time, will u give me that time" he looked hopefully at geet. She didn't looked up but said "i will wait like i was waiting maan ji, i always desired ur love which m getting from u n our kids n nothing else i need, if u feel not to disclose it too i will happily live with but this time don't broke ur promise plzz, i can't live more without u n kids its only my wish in this life now plzzz" before she tell more maan cupped her face n made her look in his eyes n said " this tym i won't break it in any situation" he wiped her tears n kissed her forehead n once again geet rested her head on his shoulder when but cuties came running n sat in maaneet's lap n rested themselves on their mumma papa. When maan said "lets have bfast my loves" n carried ammy n mithi together till small table near pool n made them seat there n went toward kitchen counter to bring foods, geet to helped him in setting table n then they feed babies fruits which maan had decorated only for them so they can eat it without any fuss n they too had.

Day was rolling with happiness maan took care of his 3 kids who showed tantrums while eating food or medicines, pampered them. Maaneet to spend some time together when kids were sleeping, he talked with geet asked her about health n told her everything about their babies which geet heard with excitement but he can feel her pain when she spoke "kaash mai v hoti" these words from geet pricked him, he know the damage is too big n it need too much tym to heal it but he will give his 100% to heal it to recreate every moment for them their family to cherish lifetym.

Maan's pov

After dinner my 3 cuties were sitting together n were doing mischief as my wifey was not telling them to sleep n smiling with them. I entered in room n sat beside them n all 3 went mum, i raised my eyebrow n asked "what" when geet signal amy to say, i was looking suspiciously at them when mithi came n sat in my lap n then amy to came n sat n what shocked me was geet to came near me sat close to me keeping her head as usual at my shoulder. I at last asked them "kya hua..kuch cahie kya?" on which trio nodded his head. Then mithi said cutely "papa we want ite-cleme (ice-cream)" maan looked at them when amy make him look at him n said "papa me mummy n miti wlant ite-cleme" then geet to said cutely "maan ji ice-cream khani h plzzz". Now how can i deny my 3 jaans who are looking at me with cute puppy faces. I smiled at trio and asked which one n what shocked me was mithi love same fav. Which i love n amy is purely mumma's son n i think have same taste like geet. I smiled n went in kitchen to fulfil their demand. I brought them their fav.Ice-creams with strawberry topping as spcl. Demand. When i went in room, they were shouting giggling playing with pillows, 1st tym in my life i felt blessed to have this cute family. I entered inside room n shouted "ice-cream aa gaya" all three gave me broad smile n i gave them their ice-cream which they eat cutely but best part was too see geet smiling i know she missed this all things in her life, i still remb.Her pregnancy days when 1st tym she asked to get her ice-cream.

Then trio feed me too with their ice-cream n we all slept like a perfect family hugging each other hearing geet's melodies voice in which she was singing lullaby for kids, but hearing that lullaby i missed by mom too, i have too much to share with geet but i m just searching for ri8 time, i m waiting once geet will be cure i will tell her each n everything to her. Tomm. Is big day for us its geet appointment in hospital, her therapies will start, the tough phase are gonna to start i need to handle kids, with need to give my 100% to geet, be there for every minute, in this phase of her life i will give her the love which she always wanted in her life, not will live her for single second, never let her feel she is alone more in her life, i will be her pillar from now onwards, she will overcome from this disease n will leave with, i need to made her feel secured, loved.

With this thought maan kissed trio forehead n slept hugging his princess.

Precap- geet's treatment start n some part from past about geet n maan telling about some things about kids too.

Hope m doing justice with it, if u readers somewhere feel m lacking u r free to tell me, i will accept it happily. But just need u all in my still waiting journey

This is spcly. For my all readers who keep me asking always when i will update, but m really held up in college n wanted to share with u all m creating my own 1st collection on home decor soo running loss of tym.

Happy belated holi to all n happy womens day to all womens and girls here.

Edited by geetsmile - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet was her own thoughts she want know what is the reason he changed totally maan seeing cuties played geet was her own thoughts he was guilty she was suffered a lot she asked him about him he want some time told to every thing to her she trust him now maan arranged bf her choice days went he sensed some thing 3 cuties finally knows his ids want ice cream including geet too maan came with ice cream seeing lovely scene all palying pillow he was happy his thoughts want geet missed her child hood happy missing care he promised himself fullfilled her demand lovely update
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wow lovely emotional heart winching update..te way geet ki thought thinking wat made my maan to change and still she is thinking tis is dream was lovely emotional..te way my maan watching his geet who lost in her thought and cursing him for breaking his geet and hurt her was lovely emotional..te way geet asking abt his past but my maan asking her to give some time was lovely.. te way geet and jaan ki demand and my maan fulfilling it and te way he admiring his angels ki bond and his guilty was emotional..now geet ki treatment and my maan ki biggest task to take care of his three angels and being with his geet was lovely emotional..i will blame my maaneet ki destinty which made my maaneet to drown in their pain..i love te update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Family time before the starting of hard face of geet's treatment,.and maan fulfilling her each wish and he missing his mother i think something is there in the past between maan and his mom,waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
There's nothing tat can lessen geet's pain and loss and no reasons from maan can say tat he had done this for some reasons.. but waiting to know why...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan still waiting to cure geet and
than he share his life and past with
geet

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan wants to shares his past with
geet but waiting fr hr to b cure soon

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