MG FF- STILL WAITING #3 Part 39 Page 104 (5/7)

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PART 27 PAGE 3
PART 28 PAGE 8
PART 29 PAGE 18
PART 30 PAGE 29
PART 31 PAGE 38
PART 32 PAGE 47
PART 33 PAGE 57
PART 34 PAGE 67
PART 35 PAGE 76
PART 36 PAGE 83
PART 37 & 38 PAGE 93
PART 39 PAGE 104
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MAAN SINGH KHURANA
26 yrs old...ruthlesss but yet gr8 man
loved his family n gf sooo much
worlds no.1 buissness tycoon

GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA
18 yrs old married wid maan
never got love in life after the death of her mother
only nani maa loved her but she too left her
n now in-laws too hate her...n maan too
but married her for something
no bubbly girl...always aloof from worls wanna to doc. but circumstances
never let her do what she want

ARMAAN GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA (AMMY)



badmash singh khurana u all can say that, naughty yeh cute..apni mumma ki jaan h
n papa ki shaan



GOONJ GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA (MITHI)


mithi... her mumma call her lyk that, she is really replica of geet, same in attitute, smile n face feauters tooo


(past pic)

both ammy n goonj are born in past n in present they are of 1 n half years


(present pics)


SNEHA SINGH KHURANA
maan n aniee mom
isske bare me bad me bataugi

ADITI HANDA
geet's chooti maa...dont love her, hate her becoz most of handa property is on her name...n had two sons

AARAV N AAYUSH
twins bro,,,,,they too dont like geet as their mother say to stay way from her

ANNIE PUNJ(ANWESHA)
sweet n lovable daughter,sister ,wife
she likes geet n care for her
lives wid khurana's only

ARJUN PUNJ
nyc man...maan's best frnd
loves aniee...so married her...
have no family but a big industrailst
n lives wid them

SAMMERA KHANNA(SAM)
maan's gf
n puri garbar issi ke wajah se h story me ...pitna h toh isse pito

DEV SINGH KHURANA
maan elder brother, sweet n calm
married to tara

NAYANTARA SINGH KHURANA(TARA)
dev's wife...as always arrogant,selfish, n alll
had a 3 year son name

AADIL SINGH KHURANA (DIL)
dev n tara's son 3 year old n
shaitan no. 1

MOHINDAR HANDA
geet's dad
selfish person ...after 2nd marriage started hating his daughter

SURAJ SINGH KURANA
maan's dad, good person by heart, love his family to the core

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this is a story of a girl, whose fate is playing wid her life her dreams. GEET SINGH KHURANA wife of biggest tycoon of India MAAN SINGH KHURANA but dying to get love, happiness, from childhood everyone is snatching every single happiness from her, the day her mom left her her happiness dies with her, her chooti maa, make her away from her papa, n after marriage too she didn't get any single happiness, her husband hate her, her in-laws hate her.

the only love n care she got is from maan's sisterANVESHA PUNJ n ARJUN PUNJA, arjun love her like sister n annie too love her care her.

now she is gng to become mother, but nobody cares her, no body loves her, everyone is making her carve for single single things for food, for clothes, for care.

she is waiting for some love, some happiness, her babies

M still waiting for my love

M still waiting for his one look

M still waiting to be known as his

M still waiting for a family

M still waiting to be mom of my kids

M still waiting to go to my mom

M still waiting...n will wait till last breath



my eyes searching for you

my soul wants to be with you

why it is happening to me

ask my heart it will tell you

its you that resides in my heart

it wonna tell you that



when ever i reminds you

there is some unknown excitement

my hear not listening to me

i am scared for consequences

to get pain and hurt again as

it was in my fate to get that



if you reach me with love

i will give my heart to you

as my heart is nothing without you

i will make our love journey beautiful

it was only you that was residing in my heart

it wonna ssay it to you



silence is not leaving my lips

fearing for the hurt it got

how can i ask your love now

my steps bacame heavy

in this love journey

the pain is also getting sweeter

it was only you that was residing in my heart

it wonna ssay it to you


in this love which giving hurt pain to me

i am waiting for you on my tomb

with heavy heart like a dead soul


i am still waiting for you


(BEAUTIFUL POEM BY POOJA DII)
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Part 27

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dadi laughed n said while loking at maan or glaring at him "yes a gal of 19 years haina mr. & mrs.handa" mr. n mrs. Handa were shocked to know that dadi knows all. Aditi tried to defend but was cuted by dadi "no need to say any other story, my grand-son never hide anything from me" on which sneha said "mummy ji jo v ho bt galti toh ki hai na iss geet ne" on which dadu said "sneha beta, bt y she will do it beta, we all know she always keep herself away from everything, yaha tak she never came for any family gather, neither for bf, lunch or dinner, she is always in her room, then y she will have prob. With u all n y with disha, I have seen her she never go near disha, without the presence of maan or aniee, beta she is gng to become mother in some days ...so y she will harm our doll" all were busy in discussing about geet but nobody look at her condition she was crying silently in pain of hurt, pain of wrong blame, pain of ignorance and most importantly she is having pain in her belly, which was bearing becoz the pain which was maan n all were giving her more deep, nobody was trusting her, she sat in corner holding her belly n crying "mumma y everybody blaming me mumma, I didn't did anything sachiii mumma, I love disha like my own baby, y all are telling lie mumma, kya galti ki hai maine...(sob)...kya galti ki hai maine jo bachapn se humpe har who illjam lagaya gaya jo humne kavi kia hi nahi, bachpan me v hum..(sob)...aayush or aarav ke sath khelne gae the mumma, dekhne gae the mumma unhe pehli bar, bht kush the hum mumma ki humare do bhai aae h, but jab chooti maa ne kaha ki humne unhe choot pauchae h...(sob) or papa ne hume bht mara tha mumma..(sob) bht mara tha..or hume sabse alag kar dia, hume phir kavi nahi milne dia tha un dono se (sob)aaj v wahi hua mumma..bina koi galti ke (sob) sab hume dosi ban dia koi nahi sun raha h meri baat..koi galti ki nahi kia maine...(sob)...maan ji, aniee dii, arjun bhai sab shant hai...(sob)baby aapki mumma gandi nahi h, nahi hai gandi" she was sobbing continuously n pain was to increasing whereas, all were still in discussion where sneha retorted after long silence n said while coming near maan n keeping her hand on his hand n said with crocodile tears "beta u believe ur mom na, y I will tell lie she tried to harm our doll beta" maan looked at sneha n then looked for geet, n saw her sitting on stairs n crying continuously, sneha again gained his attention n said while gng near geet n held her arm tightly n pulled her harshly that geet screamed in pain..but she ignored her n dragged her harshly n left her arm abruptly that she was about to fall but maan held her in his secure arm, while geet flinch in pain...n it was too much aniee gave disha to dadi n ran toward her n hold her n said while caressing her face "sorry geet ...sorry for my silence baby but I trust u geet, more than anybody geet, I know u can harm urself but u won't let anything happen to ur gurdia, she is ur daughter too geet, don't think anything beta mai ya arjun kabhi bhi yeh nahi soch sakte h, tumhara n mera rishta bas nanand bhabhi ka toh nahi, tu toh meri sabse aachi dost hai na geet, sorry dear sorry" geet looked at aniee when arjun too came near her n supported aniee.

Geet with teary eyes looked at them n asked with soo much hope "sachii" on which aniee n arjun nodded their head n said together "muchii" but still geet was crying. Sneha came near aniee n said "beta u r dng big mistake by trusting her" she came near maan n said "maan beta m saying when she can hurt disha, then she can hurt our babies too" before sneha should say a anything maan shouted "enough is enough mom, enough of all drama, I m silent it doesn't mean u r saying everything is correct" sneha was confused with maan's behaviour n said "what are u talking maan".



"M saying what u r hearing mom, if u have said anything else,I have believed but u saying that geet tried to harm disha, which I wont believe in my dreams too, she loves disha like her daughter mom, I have seen her love for disha, n what u was saying yeh... she will harm my babies but for ur kind information mrs. Sneha khurana, more than my babies they are hers, bht der se sun raha hu mai sab kuch but not saying anything becoz I respect u all, but all crossed ur all limits" he came near mr. n mrs. Handa n said dangerously "don't cross ur limit otherwise u know what I can do n not" but today sneha was not stopping she came near geet n hold her again harshly n dragged her harshly n said angrily "due to this witch maan, u shouted at me, ab yeh mere ghar me ek min v nahi rahegi" with this she started dragging geet n she was moaning in pain, maan hold geet another hand n said dangerously "leave her mom, she will stay here only, n one has damn, ri8 throw her out of this mansion" but this tym sneha left her too harshly that she banged with maan n shouted in pain "aaahhhaaa" maan looked at her she, holded her belly tightly n started shouting more painfully "aaahhhaa.hhhaaa...aaahhhaa" dadi n aniee came near her running n looked at her n said to maan "maan she is in pain take her to doc." maan scoped her in his arm while meet was moaning "maan ji mere bache..plzzz inhe bacha lo... plzzz...aaahhhaaa...meri wajah se in dono ko kuch nahi hona cahie plzzz...aahhaaa" maan made her lye on back seat while dadi kept her head in her lap n consoling her n saying continuously to take deep breath but geet hold her tummy n said "mere bacho ko kuch nahi hoga na dadi maa...aahhhaaa...plzzz inhe bacha lena...mujhe nahi jeena hai or...aaahaaa dadi maa"




"Geet tum asi baate mat karo plzz, kuch nahi hoga tumhe bacha kuch nahi hoga" dadi consoled her but geet smiled faintly n said in pain "nahi dadi maa, bht jee lia maine bht kuch dekh lia...aahhhaaa...ab nahi...Muujjjheee...pura bharosa h maan...j..jii bacho ko bht pyar dege" till then they have reached hospital, maan scoped geet in his arm n ran toward hospital, while geet kept her hand on his cheek n said "aapse ek baat kahu, aap bht aache ho...ahhhaaa...thanku for everything maan ji" maan looked at geet who was losing her consciousness due to pain, her face has turned yellow hen maan said "stop ur talking geet, tumhe or bacho ko kuch nahi hoga, believe me" geet smiled at him n said "after me u can marry ur love sam, maan ji aachi h woh n bht sundar v, n mujhe bharosha h mere bacho ko ek bht aachi maa v mil jaegi" n smiled n faint in maan's arm.


Maan shouted for doc. as arjun has informed already doc. came with their team n maan made her lye on stretcher n doc. immediately took her inside opd, maan sat there lifelessly n looked at dadi "mai kya karu dadi maa, use kuch hogaya toh maaf nahi kar paauga mai khud ko" n kept her head on dadi shoulder. Aniie arjun dadu all were standing there n waiting for doc. response, after 10 mins doc. came out, maan came near her n asked "hows is geet n babies doc." doc. took a deep breath n said "jiska daar tha wahi ho raha h mr.khurana, kitni baar maine kaha tha geet se or aap sab se v plzz keep her away from any mental tantrums but u all didn't heard me, see she is not reacting on anything or I can say didn't wanted to react, ek toh uski umar itni kam hai n dusra she not physically fit n then lots of mental pressure m not getting what to do" said frustrated doc. maan came near doc. n said in broken words "plz save her n my babies doc. plzz save them" on which dadi asked doc. "is there any way for her safe delivery doc." on which doc. nodded n said "yes mrs. Khurana, hume uski premature delivery that too we have to do operation(me-ab jada pata nahi h humko in sab ke bade me soo bas operation likhing) but there is some risk on geet's life", when maan said "plzz doc. save all three plzzz" doc. kept her hand on maan shoulder n said "I will try my best mr.khurana till then plz compete the formalities" maan nodded n went to comp. formalities with arjun where as doc. started their operation after an hour of operation all head the cries of babies n their lips curved into smile. Maan's eyes got teary hearing the cry of his babis n looked at dadi on which she said "badhai ho beta aap papa ban gae" maan nodded with tears, after 10 mins doc. came out n all family ran near her n aniee asked "hws geet doc.?" n maan to asked "boleiya na doc. geet kasi h n babies?" on which doc. smiled n said "mr.khurana it was magic, I can say only, geet n both babies are alri8, but still geet is un conscious will again it in 4-5 hrs, n both the babies are healthy n fit n fi9 just need lil. Care n they will me gud, but most imp. Things which I m gng to say plzzz u all hear it n follow it" maan asked on it "what doc." when she continued "maan, geet need extra care, love n lots of pampering, becoz she is too much weak, she need to again weight becoz now the two small life are dependent on her, soo she needs more vitamins, proteins n lots of healthy food n most imp. No more mental pressure maan, this tym we saved ur wife but she is in critical stage need to be handled with care n love like a small kid, maan" on which dadi said "don't worry we will take care of her" n maan to nodded n then impatient dadu asked "doc. hume yeh toh batae humare ghar me do nahi pari aae ya rajkumar" doc. smiled n said "mr.khurana aapke ghar me ek nanhi pari or ek nanha rajkumar aae h, she gave birth too a boy n gal, sisters avi laa rahi hogi unhe", n doc. left from there.

All were happy with this news that geet n babies are f9 after some tym two sisters bring the babies near maan,


maan was looking at both without blinking his lashes, n asked softly "who is my princess n who is my prince" on which sisters smiled n said"one in pink is ur baby princess n one in white is ur prince" maan smiled n forwarded his hand toward his princess 1st n took her in his arm n kissed her forehead n then sat on chair n asked another sister to pass his prince, n sister gave his prince to in his arm, he kissed his forehead too n said too dadi "dekhiye na dadi maa, kitne choote choote h yeh dono n kitne cute bhi h" on which dadi smiled n said "haan maan aapki beti bilkul geet jasi dikhti h n aap beta aapki tarah" on which maan asked sachii, n dadi nodded her head positively.

Dadi took baby boy in her arms while dadu baby girl n both kissed their forehead n said "hum wapash se pardada or par dadi ban gae" aniee came there n said "mujhe v dekhna h mere pyara se bhateje or bhatiji ko" n took gal in her arm while arjun took boy in his arm n both said in usion "geet ke ammy or mithi aa gae" while maan n dadi dadu looked at both when aniee said "dadi maa geet always wanted to have a girl baby n boy baby... She always said agar aesa hua toh who apne bacho ko pyar se ammy or mithi bulaegi" on which maan said "mithi toh samjah me aaya but yeh ammy" aniee smiled n said "bhai she wanted to give babies ur n her name soo she used to say if baby boy hua toh she will call him armaan and baby gal hui toh use goonj" maan was still confused then arjun said "maan its easy armaan me she gave maan... ur name n in goonj she used her 1st letter of name G wase v geet n goonj all are related to same thing, ab samjhe" on which maan smiled n said "soo aap dono ka name goonj or armaan hai" on which babies smiled in their sleep like knowing their name. but then again asked "y mitthi n ammy" on which aniee said "ooffo bhai ask this from geet, mujhe nahi pata utna".

Maan nodded his head n all went in ward where geet has been shifted, aniee n arjun made babies lye in crib n came near geet n maan sat beside her, aniee caressed her face n said "how much weak she is looking, n pale too" on which arjun said "she is too strong aniee, bht himmatwali h meri behan ghanto dard me thi par kisi ko ek lafj nahi bola" n kissed her forehead n said again "jaldi se theek ho jao geet, dekho tumhare bache duniya me aa gae h n waiting for their mumma". Dadi n dadu too caressed her face n went out as only one or two person can stay inside, aniee wanted to stay but arjun signalled her to come out n said "let ur bhai with her, she needs him more than us aniee" on which aniee smiled n said "plzz god now no more hurdles in their life".

Dadi stayed with maan in hospital to take care of geet n babies while aniee went home, becoz disha too need her n maan send dadi too after an hour as he knows she is also tired n promised he will take care of kids n geet both, after 5 hrs almost at 5 am in mrng geet got her consciousness on that n looked here n there n then touched her tummy n got panicked n tried to seat on bed, due to her movements maan too woke up n looked at her scared face n came near her n asked "what happened geet y u r scared" on which asked in meek n scared voice "mere bache kaha h, unhe kuch hua toh nahi na" maan stopped her from further talk n made her look at the crib where kids were sleeping, geet smiled n tried to get up but failled on bed due to weakness when maan said " don't try to get up geet be here" on which she said with longingly "mujhe unhe dekhna h plzzz" maan smiled n said "be here I m giving u them"


he made her seat properly 1st on bed n then handed her ammy, she looked at maan n again at crib, maan understood she want her both babies, maan handed her mithi too, she carefully took both cuties in her arms n said while kissing them "mere bache, I can touch them, I can play with them na maan ji, nobody will stop me na, or balme me na for touching them" maan 1st tym felt her pain n sat near her n said "yes geet they are ur kids, u can play with them, touch them, love them, pamper them nobody will stop u, they will be with u" geet smiled at babies n then at maan n kept her head on his shoulder n said "are they gals or boys" on which maan smiled n said " what u wanted" geet looked at both babies n said "a boy n a girl" on which maan said keeping his hand on mithi "yeh tumhari mithi h geet" geet looked at him n then at mithi n then maan kept his hand on ammy n said "this is ur ammy geet" geet looked at both kids n smiled widely n said "mere mithi n ammy hai" on which maan nodded n geet kissed her kids n caressed her face while maan said "geet mithi bilkul tumhari tarah dikhti h" n geet too said "or ammy aapki tarah maan ji"both smiled whole heartly, geet almost forgot her all pains n accuse n lost in the smile of their kids.

After sometym ammy started crying n sister too came to check geet n said to geet "mrs.khurana ur babies need ur feed, as u haven't feed them till now, soo feed them one by one n one.. then doc. will come to check u" both maaneet nodded, sister came near geet n took mithi from her n about lye her on crib when geet said "let her be with me plzz" sister looked at her n said "u can't hold both together becoz u need to feed them" on which geet looked at maan lyk saying plzz keep my babies near me n maan nodded his head n said "sister give her to me" he took mithi in his arm n sat near geet while sister opened the zip of geet dress n adjusted ammy near her bossom, while geet was shy, becoz maan was too near her sitting beside her n looking at her. Maan said to sister "sister we will manage now u can go" sister smiled n went away closing the door of ward while maan said "geet don't be shy from me, u r feeding our babies, I too wanted to stay with u on every small experiences which are related to our babies" geet smiled with tears in her eyes n nodded while geet again kept her head on shoulder due to weakness. After feeding ammy, maan took him in his arm n gave mithi to her n helped geet in feeding her. Both were happy to have their angels in their life.

After babies slept maan made them lye on crib n doc. came to check geet, gave her some injections n prescribe some medicines n suggest her too take proper food n rest. After doc. left maan made geet drink juice n eat fruits to have some energy then feed her medicines, geet was looking at maan with awe, after sometym geet said "thanku maan ji" maan looked at geet n asked "for what u saying thanku geet, thanku toh mujhe bolna cahie to give two angels in my life" on which geet said "for trusting me" maan looked at her teary face n sat beside her n said "geet, Itna trust toh hai hi mujhe tumpe that u won't hurt a small life, n now stop thinking about all this n think about them n about ur health okk, n now sleep for sometym" geet nodded with tears in her eyes to see concern for her in man's eyes n closed her eyes, while maan went in washroom.

Precap- some cute moments with babies n maaneet

It is longest update m giving u all n that too one after another, soo I need big big comments n all likes. N happy news yeh h ki ab thora rona dhona kam hoga past me v, so enjoy maaneet n babies part from now but itna v khush hone ki jarurat nahi h avi v pain h iss SS me ... n one more things someday before I said u all I lost maan's pov n now wanna to say u all I got another idea soo writing according to it, n don't worry jaldi hi sab pata chal jaega aap logo ko...now enjoy update n next update will be after 23 as my sem exams gonna to start soo pray for me thoda sa

N if u all complete likes n comment till tomm. Then be ready to get another pakka promise from my side.

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CONGRATS DEAR ON NEW THREAD
loved the update
how could sneha drag geet like this that too when she is pregnant
but glad maan for the first time stood for geet against his family
i just want to kill mr and mrs handa😡
oh geet gave birth to two cuties her ammy and mithi😊
hope now maan will take care of her and not hurt her in anyway
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Very emotional update! very well written.. tears brimming in eyes now...hopefully Geet gets the happiness which she is craving for... loved Maneet moments!

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