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SAJDA


sajde kiye hai lakho,

to ek noor paya hai.

Waqt se hue ruswah,

to ye samah aaya hai.

Reh gye the akele hum,

jab sabne choda tha saath.

ek masum si pari ayi,

chod ke ye jag sara.

Badli kismat meri,

ab lagta hai ye jag pyara.

Hasta hu, muskarata hu,

Jivan ko apnata hu.

Bhool ke sari hadein,

sirf usse pyaar jatata hu.

Sajde ke hai mayne badle,

ab usko khuda hai maana,

pyaar ke hai maayne badle,

ab chah hai sirf use paana.

-by me



Sajda means surrender, surrendering yourself, to someone else, for someone else.

Kisi ko ishq ki had se jyada chahna sajda hai

To kisi ke liye khud mit jana sajda hai...

Par kya sajde me sirf aap sab khote hai..???

Kuch khoke ke bhi sab pana sajda hai...

Ek shabd par kisi paak cheej ko dil se apnana bhi sajda hai...

This FF is based on an old movie, but don't worry the story is changed.

I won't be revealing much, just need you to support me in this FF like you all always did in past. I am sure you will love it like you loved my previous works.

Note:

This FF would contain many +18 scenes, and thus I request people underage and who hate intimacy to avoid this as I don't want any bashing on my thread and those who have problems can PM me if you think that I am exaggerating things. I hope you will understand my view too and I welcome all kinds of criticism provided they are given in right way without making a scene or drama.

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Index

Character Sketch-Pg 1

Prologue- Pg 1

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

THREAD 2

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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana: 28 year old businessman, heir of Khurana empire and Sole Owner of Khurana Constructions. He lives in delhi. He is arrogant and rude but mostly he is alone and frustrated of his life. Has a dadima only in his family, whom he loves but his loneliness has drifted him away from her too.

Geetakshi Handa: 23 year old, lives in Mumbai. She is sole owner of Handa industries, a growing business but still is alone as she is orphan. she is bubbly and loving and lives life to fullest. Her Aunt shalini handa and her nanima Gaytri is her only family whom she loves a lot. But do they love her like that too???

Suhana Khurana: maan's wife who died three years ago in a car accident. She was maan's life. Though they had an arrange marriage but soon she won his heart. after her death, maan had shattered.

Mansi Khurana: maan's 4 year old daughter who died three years back with her mother in that car accident. She was her papa's girl and just did whatever maan said.

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Prologue



"maan wo log agaye geetakshi ko lene" said savitri khurana as she entered in his room which was completely dark. She opened the lights to see him standing near the window and looking out at nothing in particular.

His eyes were blank, empty, dark as if there is no soul left in his body. "maan aap sun rhe hai hmari baat... geetakshi ja rhi hai" but it felt as if didn't even heard what dadima is saying. She looked at him with tears and said, "use rok lo maan" but he was motionless.

Dadi somewhat knew he won't do that, he was guilty for him acts, or probably hurt because of his fate. She looked at the room which was filled with geetakshi's pictures and things, her toys dresses everything, he won't let anyone even touch them. she left with tears as she thought about her grandchild's fate.

Soon after few minutes, he saw the car pass away from the gates of khurana mansion and he closed his eyes, knowing finally that girl left... thank god she went away otherwise she would have made him mad, his geet was still with him this was geetakshi who left, he knew that.

He moved to his bed, umm sorry theirs, he corrected and laid beside the bunny that was lying flat next to him and kept his hand around it and said, "geet chalo so jao, itni late jagna is not a good thing.. so jao baby" he said cooingly in the ears of that bunny and started patting it softly, sometimes caressing its fur in mid.






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Congrats on the new journey of Maaneet..
Different character sketch from that of your previous stories... both do have a a pain in them ... one is lost in the pain of losing his precious loved ones.. and other seems to be longing for the love...

Prologue... its quite mysterious ... eager to know what it is...

Looking forward for Sajda...
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CONGRATS FOR NEW STORY
interesting
waiting for 1st part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new ff
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I feel really sad after reading the prologue, I hope the story itself won't be as sad!
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congrats for new one👏👏



concept is different but prolouge is confusing😉



update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intesting...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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