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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi congrats in the new SS! Awesum banner! Fab cs! Interesting prologue! Bt I am bit confused! update soon n do pm! Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

"Ladies & Gentleman, the moment has come for which we were waiting since last few hours... Yes it's the time to announce the winner for this year's Businessman of the Year Award" the audience waited with heavy breathes for the name to be announced. All businessmen from all over the country are present today in this auditorium, to know who will win this year's most prestigious award in whole country.

"well people, it is not a surprise, as it is again Maan Singh Khurana who won Businessman of the Year since last three years" some hooted while other looked jealous and angry, as the man himself stood up and walked on stage to receive his award. His walk itself oozed the attitude and Charisma he possessed, his looks still made girl swoon with just his one gaze, but still there was not a single flash of happiness in his eyes. His orbs were blank, soul less, as if all this is just nothing for him while others just wished to live a minute of his life.

"mr khurana this is great, since last three years you are the unbeatable winner of this award, the name and fame which you won in these few years, no other businessman could do that in such a short period of time. It would be great if you say few words of wisdom for our guests today" said the host.

Maan looked at the host with his same angry look and then at the mike, and then said, "I don't need to speak to prove that I am capable for this award, my work and my team is sufficient enough" with the same arrogance he took his award and walked down the stage leaving all stunned. People and media termed it as his overconfidence and arrogance, but for him it was all just bullshit. Never had he cared what people thought about him and his acts nor he did now.

He walked down to his Audi that was standing on the door; a valet was standing there with the door open for him. Without even glancing at the valet, he got into his car, turned on the ignition and with a sudden hit on accelerator; he was out of anyone's view.

He raced through the roads, his car zooming past the cars and trucks, almost hitting two trucks, yet his quick turn saved him. He opened the windows to let the cold gushing wind flow in, letting his hair flow in wind, the dark night and twinkling stars were just his companion. He looked at the award that was kept in the seat next to his and thought about the person who actually used to own that passenger seat of his car, his wife suhana.

Three years, three long years had passed since she left him forever, yet he was alive... how can that be!!! For three years he was working hard, working so much that he forgot the difference between night and day, but he never cared. She wanted him to be the best... and he is today the best in his field. He did fulfilled his promise to her, yes he did made her proud today... it was she who wanted that award back in their house, on the shelf that was in their drawing room where she had made a special place for this award... and see suhana not just one but three... three awards are there today.

He thought about mansi, his mansi, his life, his daughter... how excited she would have been today to see his papa with this award, probably she would have wrapped her hand around his neck and jumped in his arms smiling and then run in entire house and show each and every person, let it be dadi or servant, his achievement and would have said mere papa is the best... she would have been 7 now...

Tears filled his eyes as he thought about his mansi, he hit the gas more, accelerating at 100 km/hour and removed his legs from the brake, and turned left and right as fast as he can, missing many hits.

"mansi baby please say your mumma to end my anguish, to call me with you both... daddy can't live without you guys anymore!!! Not a second more... three years is a long time na baby, daddy misses her baby and mumma a lot" he cried, croaking in his hoarse wife as he pleaded to nothing in particular.

And with a swift left, he zoomed towards the road end that leads to a chasm a real deep valley. He closed his eyes with a smile, he knew all his anguish is going to end, yes everything will end and probably a new beginning will be for him, he thought and opened his eyes only to get shocked as he saw a girl running, coming in his path from the right side.

He tried to honk, and control the car, but the girl seemed ignorant of his car, as she ran, her face unclear with his fast speed... he held the steering wheels tightly, at his one foot hit the brakes, while he turned the wheels left, to change his path... but when the car actually turns left, the girl hits the car from right side, her body crashed with the car side badly and fell down.

Soon he stopped the car and came out, and looked at the body that was lying far in blood. He made a dash toward her and sat on his heels beside her, his hand turned her body to make her lie on her back as he tried to look at her face. Her hairs were messed up in blood, as he tried them off her face and looked at her.

Her eyes were still open as she looked at him, in daze. "save me please... mujhe bachalo" she said, her voice barely audible, her eyes were still open as she looked at his face, at him. he was so shocked that he didn't knew what to do, god he was in panic as he nodded and tried to find his mobile in his pockets and pulled it out and called for an ambulance urgently.

"kuch nhi hoga tumhe... I will let nothing happen to you samjhi" came out of his mouth as he looked into her eyes that were still open, just looking at him as she winced in pain. He held her face in his hands and kept it on his laps, his mind flashing the day, three years back when he held suhana in his arms waiting for ambulance while she just asked him to be happy always even if something happens to her.

He looked at the girl's body, she was injured in so many places, his mind playing tricks and imagining suhana in her place. "Kuch nhi hoga tumhe... mai kuch nhi hone dunga" he repeated continuously, his body tensed, as it turned cold. He saw the blood running from her head and got dead scared, and lifted her in his arms and placed her inside the car backseat, not having in him to wait for ambulance too and on the other hand dialed police number and called them in hospital.

He was zooming past again, but this time he had a motive in hand, to save her, to not let anything happen to her!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
loved the part...quite interesting story..maan missing his family was emotional
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
maan missed family
girl is geet who had an accident
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Amazing start of the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
congrats for the new story

Interesting concept

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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
so thats their first meeting...awesomm start...eager to read more...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
interesting episode...

maan is in depression..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
awesomm start...eager to read more..maan missed family
girl is geet who had an accident .continue soon

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