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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



mera gala gaya kaam se


abi tak to nhi gaya tha but ab to pakka gya lakshy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


ahaa loking beautiful sweety!!!

thoda aur makeup kar till then i will update ;)






teek hai aur tayyar hokar aathi hoon tab tak ready rakhna😉😆😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

cant wait
jaldi karooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am dying to type..but cant😭

aur kitna tym lagega?
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Posted: 11 years ago
grrr neha
bata aur kitni der..
my neck is paining sitting like this now
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

grrr neha
bata aur kitni der..
my neck is paining sitting like this now


half hour ash
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Posted: 11 years ago


Part 8

He is living in this world with lifeless body

His path is covered with stones piercing his flesh

It was giving him satisfaction of immense pain

Which he is searching in every hollow region

Love is the word he worshipped in his entire life

That mere word makes his life like living tomb

He is getting lost in his search of love

Still there is no stopping his search is endless

Until she came like storm crossing his path

She is an angel entered in to his darkness

Untouched dew drop engulfing him in warm hug of love

Like rose petal makes his path adored with rose petals

Unleashing his wounds taking away his pain

Her innocence is her natural orment

She is mystery to him an unsolved puzzle

She wants nothing in this whole world

Except his care his warmth touch

It is the game playing by destiny

Her complete submission

But will he accept that ???

(Contributed by Twilightsparkle aka pooja⭐️)

As car stopped in front of the giant gates of mansion, geet's eyes turned wide. She looked at maan who was going to step out and held his hand and said, "ye itna bada ghar kiska hai??? Mera to nhi!!" "mera hai" he said as he removed her hand and stepped out and waited for her to come out too. He waited for a minute but she didn't stepped out and finally turned back and said, "now will you step out ya andar baithne ka hi irada hai"

"ye door nhi khulta mai bahar kaise aau" she said sticking her upper lip out and looked at him with a pout. Maan held his hair as he went back to the car and escorted her like a gentleman inside while she followed beside him, admiring the garden and porch which laid in their path. Her presence immediately caught the eyes of the gardeners and staff who were working over there and looked at her in shock.

Of course she was beautiful, so what it was hid between those marks and the bandages which covered her body. The hospital gown she wore gave a clear idea that she had come from some hospital, but what shocked them more was not her appearance, but was the fact that a woman was walking beside their boss who gave a damn to opposite gender.

Geet was still ignorant to the fact that so many servants resided in that grand building. She was walking happily admiring the place thinking it was only maan's home. As she stepped through the main door inside the grand and lavish hall of khurana mansion, she was astounded seeing the things. The cream shade walls were decorated with ancient paintings and vases. A large 12 seater sofa spread in the middle of the hall and a grand staircase at the other end of the hall lead to the insides of the mansion.

But it wasn't the cost and aura of the things that amazed her, but it was the beauty that caught her eyes. She hadn't seen something so beautiful in the age she remembered and it was all so much grand for her. The servants who were working inside also stilled seeing a girl walking in with their boss. And soon the news spread in the entire mansion, and all the servants gathered in the main hall to see their new guest.

Maan was walking in his same I-am-the-boss posture with geet following him in side, but suddenly he felt her getting rigid for a moment. He glanced at her side to see what stopped her chanter about the mansion and saw her eyes fixed on something ahead which had drained all the colour of her face.

He looked ahead of him to see a group of 9-10 servants standing in the main hall shocked seeing geet. He understood she got scared seeing all those men with the way she moved toward him holding his hand and hiding herself behind his broad back. He could feel the cold sweat forming in her hands with fear at the point her hand touched his.

"I think I don't pay you all to stare!!! Everyone back to their work now" he barked orders to them making them disburse to their places only nakul, his head servant stood there waiting for him to bark orders relating to the guest. Maan nodded at nakul at his greeting and ordered, "I had asked you to make the guest room upstairs ready, is it done??"

Nakul immediately nodded, his eyes fixed on ground. After that maan dismissed him and guided geet to the stairs, all the while she was holding his hand. "geet they are good people, kuch nhi hoga tumhe" he said to assure her but she nodded in no, not believing him. After the mental asylum incident, all the little bit of trust she had on others had gone, after all they did bad to her, so they were bad.

He knew he had to some way make her understand that they wont harm her or this way she will make servants life hell too and he cant disturb their life because of her, they were his loyal staff afterall.

He showed her the room and made her settle on the bed. Her face was already pale and she was tired with all that she had bared all day and it was already the time of dinner. "geet you lay on bed, soon dinner would be served downstairs" he said and left her to rest for a while.

He too went in his room and sat beside the portrait of suhana and mansi that was next to his bed and looked at them with a smile. "you missed me??" he asked as he kept his thumb on the lips of suhana, tracing the soft smile that played over there. "sorry baba, you know aj geet ke karan I didn't get time to give you today... but dekho am all yours now." He smiled knowing his suhana must have hit him on his rear for forgetting her whole day and then said, "I am sorry na, aisa wont happen again... accha seriously tell me it was right na to bring her here... I know you don't like other girls near me but jaan she needs help... tumhe kya lagta hai I did right or wrong??" he asked her in confusion and smiled bright as he got his reply.

"I know you always advice best!! I will try to give her some happiness, shayad your gad will get a little soft toward me and send you back... accha ha baba no emotional talks today!!! Come on hows my little girl today... missed papa??"

He traced mansi's pic and smiled in tears, "you know baby its only you who could make your father cry... but papa is still angry over you to choose mumma over papa... that's why you went with your mother instead of staying with papa na!!"

He was busy telling them about his day when he heard nakul telling him about dinner. He nodded and kept the frame back and freshened up. He went and informed geet to get up for dinner. She followed him behind as he showed her the dining area. He settled at the head of the family's seat and waited for geet to settle down.

"geet" sit down, ab yeh bhi mai btau kya???" he said irritated as he saw her standing on her place at the entrance of the room. He noticed her looking at the servants who were serving the food on table and understood her hesitance and immediately asked them to leave them alone. He was itself thankful that she didn't screamed like always, otherwise it would have given servants fair idea of her mental condition.

After all of them left, geet came and sat on the seat on the right side of him. His blood boiled seeing her taking that seat only, as it was where his suhana always sat. she just loved to sit on his right side and ensure that he is having his meal properly and no one else took that seat after her. "get up!!!" he roared.

Geet got shaken up seeing him angry and immediately stood up scared. Even the servants saw him shouting and knew the girl is in danger now seeing his very bad mood. But when his eyes fell on her shaken up form, he realized his tone was way too high and held the table in his fist to calm himself down. "sit this side, wha koi nhi baithta!!!" he said this time a little slower but his voice itself showed the anger that was still boiling in him.

She immediately obliged like a child and came and sits on his left side. After she settled up, he started filling his plate with his usual pasta, happy that atleast she obliged his order, but the next moment his relief went away when he heard her whisper, "tuti chair kyu rakha yha, mujhe faltu me data" she cribbed as she kept her chin on her hands that were folded on table, while her eyes glared at that chair as if it was it's fault.

"what did you said???" he asked with his stern voice making her bite her tongue and say, "kuch nhi!!!" "sach bolo" he said as he glared at her. "ek to you keep that broken chair over there and upar se mujhe data!!! Tumbi gande ho" she said looking away from him and made a face.

"that chair is very well geet!!!" he said nonchantly not getting her point.

"to kyu mana kia, I was just sitting na!!!" she said now in full obstinate form folding her hands on her chest. "wo kyuki..." he said and then stopped realizing what he was going to say "kuch nhi aisehi" he said cutting the topic off but she just pouted at that and said, mujhe aivehi data... tumbi gande ho" she said and looked away.

The servants who were standing on the door were stunned hearing the way their master calmed down even after the sin that girl did, ofcourse it was nearly a sin for them considering the way maan reacts on that, and above that girl was continuously arguing and he was patiently listening them!!! Otherwise if it had been someone else, he would have been out of house to speak like this to their master. They knew this mansion was in for some change, but what type off, they are still unaware.

"ha ha mai bhi ganda hu, chalo have food" he said, as he served a spoon on her plate while she just looked around the room scanning it. When she heard him she thought about it and then said, "waise mai ek secret btau???" she asked showing her one finger and laughing in excitement of revealing him something he don't know.

He looked at her inquisitively and asked with a raised brow, "umm bolo". she got more excited when he asked and came close to his ear and said, "kisi ko btana nhi, pata hai tum na itne gande bhi nhi ho, bas thode se ho" she said showing him a pinch by finger and said, "bilkul itne se" she said as if showing a small pinch her finger.

A instant smile came on his lip hearing the way she said that, it was a smile from his heart and soon it turned into a full laughter seeing her make a face seeing him smile. "haso nhi!!" she whined as if he offended her doing that and he started laughing more with her antics.

But soon he got back his senses and controlled himself and said sternly, "umm chalo have food now, warna it will be cold" she nodded and looked at him and tried to copy him. When he took a fork and started having it, she too took a fork in her hand as if its some dagger, holding its end in her fist instead of her finger. Then like him, she pressed pasta with it, but its slipped away on other corner with the force she applied on it.

She again tried and failed. He saw her antics and shook his head knowing she is one hell of a kid cum grownup. He called and her and then explained her the way she should hold fork and eat, but when she tried, it slipped off her hold and fell on the ground making a thud voice. He closed his eyes in frustration and said, "eat with your hands if you cant handle it."

She made a baby face hearing him chide her and dipped her hand in her pasta filled bowl and held a handful of it and tried to eat all of it in one go, making some of it spill on table and her hospital gown. "shitt" he cursed as he patted his forehead in frustration and said, "thoda kar ke, not in one go idiot".

She made a face at that and again took a morsel, this time a little lesser than previous but still more than the amount she could eat in one go. Maan saw her repeating that and immediately said, "just stop!!! I cant believe you cant eat yourself too... ek bacha bhi aisa nhi hota, tum to use bhi gyi guzri ho!!!" he said in frustration as he threw his own fork on table in anger making her jump at once.

She felt really hurt with his words and tears filled her eyes, flowing like an open tap. He immediately got alarmed seeing her tears and said, "ok ok calm down... fir se try karte hai" he said trying to calm her down but she just got more obstinate and refused to eat... "nhi khana muje khana.. mujhe bhuk lag rhi hai par tab bhi nhi khana... and tum bahut gande ho" she said and was about to get up from the seat when he held her hand to make her stop.

"geet lets try again, you are hungry na... chalo aao khao, be a good girl" he said trying to make her calm down but she totally was in no mood to give in. accepting defeat and realizing there is no other way to make her agree he said, "accha how about I will feed you.. tab to khaogi na???" he asked hoping she will agree but she again nodded no.

"pleaseee geet!!" he said dragging please a bit. She looked at him from the corner of her eyes and then at the pasta which was looking too good to eat. She thought a bit and said, "promise karo tum datoge nhi!!!" she asked pinching her neck. "ha promise baba" he said... "are buddhu aise nhi... yu promise karte hai!!!" she said as she showed him how she was pinching her neck.

He took a long breathe as he copied her and said, "accha baba ab theek, chalo khao!!!" she immediately got super happy and sat back on seat while he fed her spoon by spoon. After a full half an hour he was able to fill her and his stomachs and decided to retire early on bed today.

Precap: abhi evening me ye hall hai to raat me kya hoga!!!😆

Next update would be on next thread!!! So fill it soon to get the next part guys!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
this very awesome Superb update Love it
geet coming to the dinner all update is superb👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
precap..Nehaaa plz..next part jaldi updt karna...
😉
Edited by KINGKHANFAN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
this very awesomefrom geet coming to the dinner all update is superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update... so Geet finally in the mansion... Loved geet's antics... and how Maan fed her...plus the way he controlled himself...his anger...
Loved the way.. he first entered and a talk with suhana and mansi... continue sooo... this is really addicting... i don't know why.. i have never been like this...
Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago

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