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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
sad but this usually happened wuth the ladies in eastern region
when especially a middle clas girl marry a rich guy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok here is another part! Hope u like it... Its not a POV but are the thoughts that Maan is having.

Part 2

Maan hide behind a pillar so that Geet couldn't see him. His hands had turned into fist and had tears in his eyes with blank expression on his face.
After Geet was nowhere to be seen Maan quietly went to his room.
Maan threw his coat and bag on the bed and sat at the edge with his hands on his head
Maan(self-thought) Maan why did you do this at the first place... you took advantage of her situation...sahi to kah rahi hai us nai mera kia bagara tha... sirf us ki ankhe.. he just shrugged Maan she has changed you in this one month.
On the day of our marriage when you went into her room for asking she already didn't want to get married to you... then why did u forcefully made her do that. Why did you say that you will handle her house day to day expenditure... obviously any girl would do that especially after her father's death... She won't be able to say no...
Maan you have to agree that u were attracted to her innocent beauty when you first saw her on her wedding day.

Flashback:
Geet's father Mohinder was an officer in Maan's office... One day when Mohinder came to him to ask for a loan but he straight away refused but still Mohinder gave him the card of his daughters wedding... Maan ignored that and Mohinder left from there...
Maan didn't want to go to a down class wedding but they say even the rich have to give impression to the media that they are very caring towards their employees.
Maan went there... was waiting for the wedding to take place so that he can leave immediately but the situation entirely changed. A woman clad in red suit came out started crying loudly and then everyone started consoling her... Later Maan got to know that Mohinder died due to heart attack... Maan somewhere felt guilty...
Later when a few women started taunting at girl clad in a red and golden lehnga... his eyes saw a very slim figure. His eyes zoomed in and then he saw her messy hair... tendrils caressing her face, sharp nose and soft petal like pink lips. But when his eyes saw her hazel eyes dripping pearls continuously... His heart held an unknown emotion towards her. He doesn't know why he couldn't see tears in her eyes and the women taunting and therefore he asked her to come in privacy and proposed his proposal.
Flashback ends

And then after marriage when she was waiting for you in the room... instead of comforting her in this unknown space, when she needed you the most, a shoulder to cry on after her father's death... you ridiculed and hurt her to no extent just because you didn't want her to overpower your mind and thus your life, simply because you didn't understand your own feeling towards her.
After that you totally ignored her. She said the truth that you had bought a maid for yourself. But how could you tell her that the next day when she made breakfast for you... it tasted heavenly. You so much wanted to kiss her whole but your own arrogant, rude behavior made you to do the opposite. Instead of praising you hurt her. And this became a routine for you. There was no single day you did not ridiculed her.
Maan you didn't do the right thing... and then when she came to you room that day all happy for mere 50 rps... Couldn't you see the spark in her eyes when she asked you? It was as if a girls was pleading for her favorite toffee yet again you again hurt her... what had gone into you... you knew after living with her for one week that she is not that type of a girl and still you mocked her again and there she didn't say a word... she just wanted to have and ice-cream...At that moment too you wanted to confess her that all the things that belong to you are her... but why did you do this...Damn these feelings... Why Maan?? Why Maan Why??
Maan?? She is not like Sameera... she betrayed you for money but Geet did not and will not... My heart says that but my mind? How did you start comparing an innocent beauty with that witch? If she wanted she would have taken advantage of that till now... but she didn't... even her family didn't take take advantage... Her mother is clearly told me her expenses and asked not more a penny...
Maan what did u do? In your own confusing feelings you gave her pain. Just because of your past with that witch Samera
Maan its high time now... She has completely broken now...It's all your fault... don't know how she was bearing my inhumane attitude. Anyone would have lost it and escaped from here but she??You can't give her more pain now... First you didn't understand your feeling but now you understand...
And today... you shouldn't have said those things in the morning... She may have slept late...She should be treated like a princess and here... Ohh God what I have done??? God please help me... She always used to give you breakfast and one day she did not and you started scolding her... But why did she wake up late??? Is she okay??
And what did she do... she still was praising you in front of her mother... I have hurt her a lot but still she didn't say a word against me... She didn't even contact her family after I said so... and today she was hurt to the extent that she called her mother... she couldn't take anymore...my everyday taunting... I have exceeded my limits.
Maan what was that red mark on her hand... Did she hurt herself? No...no or did she get hurt? Yeah she woke up late in the morning as well... this can't be happening... If she got hurt then she must have screamed or something and I was right outside the kitchen and I didn't heard anything and yesterday too she served me dinner. She was okay at that time... But Maan she had tears in her eyes in morning... when you asked her about the breakfast...I should check her right now...
Maan rushed to her room and went in

Precap:
Thankyou all the readers for commenting and liking. Read each of your comments! Thankyou
Me biting my nails. Don't know how the part came. Please do leave me feedback! Will be waiting eagerly

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 11 years ago
zariya123 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
i think u have watched pakistani serial aasmano per hai likha
i too watch that serial
but ur portrayal is totally different
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i knew it this man what to do with him
how could he yaar
all because he couldnt control his attraction towards her is the reason for doing this
that was mean of him
even he knew it but didnt do anything about it
hope it isnt too late by now
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zariya123

i think u have watched pakistani serial aasmano per hai likha

i too watch that serial
but ur portrayal is totally different

Yes i watched only that scenes where her father comes to ask for money and got this idea!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
superb dear
It was maan's past which made him behave rude towards geet.
but it was too much
hope he now treat geet as his wife
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uff ye maan what I do with him
He hurted her too much just to control his feeling and for that gold digger witch sameera
Poor geet
Hope he made up with her soon
I want geet to punish him and make him difficult to win her
Cont soon
Waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
because of his past, maan is treating geet like this
hope he corrects his mistake soon!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
finally maan realize his feeling and how bad he have treated geet..hope geet is fine yaar...amazing update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awww nice update...
Maan is too much...moi don't like him...

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