Os-Painful Love(Completed)

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Maan babu badi jaldi batti jali dimak ki!!

Beautifully written pa

Kuch missing laga I mean first part was good but there is some thing wrong with the second one

sorry!!!😳

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Lonely.Cat

@Raina123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Lovely story.
Please contiue, waiting eagerly.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb emotional update! Past n present well incorporated! Maan attracted to her! He gets marrid to her n den is so rude to her all cos he is attracted to her! Thinks she is like Sam! Bt thinks abt everything n goes to talk to her! well written! update soon!

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hemangigazal

@hemangigazal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Nice update dear
Maan realised his mistake

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

MAAN IS RUDE TO HER BECAUSE HE IS SCARED OF HIS OWN FEELINGS FOR HER

SO HE TRIES TO SHUN HER

BUT HE COULD SEE HER TEARS AND UNHAPPINESSS AND IS FEELING GUILTY

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Zeba702

@Zeba702

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Maan is behaving with geet coz of sameera

Maan is nt able 2 trust again and does not want the same mistake to happen

But some where his heart knws tht geet is innocent and will never hurt maan

But still his mind is winning over here

Pls pm dear i will b waiting 4 next part

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918644

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

nice part..oh now he realised that whatever he was doing with geet was not right..after making her suffer for these many days...😡

but iam happy that finally he will love her and take care of her and also will repent for his deeds...

so i hope the next part will be a happy one and u will update it soon right???😊

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Shalini Mogha

@shalinimaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Chalo maan ko kuch akl to aayi
wating for nxt
ab maan kaise geet se baat karega
kaise usse yakeen dilayega

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Pm me its amazing dear

Thanks! Accept buddy request so that i can Pm u easily

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: IshitaIrani
i want to suggest title for the os
1,A lonely girl

2.Suffogation

3.her lonely life

waiting for update

pls cont...

Thankyou for your suggestions!