Maaneet SS BROKEN BY LOVE prt5 updtd on pg 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
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P.S.:Hello Friends am back well everyone of you dun know me and for those am Alisha_Gurti with my new SS on Maaneet and before you people tell me that my prervious ff is incomplete so this one is completed but every part will post on demand...Now coming to story...
Prologue
A man in his middle twenty sitting on the ground outside I.C.U of City Hospital Delhi.He
He is crying like someone has snatched his soul and force him to see the torture they are giving to his soul.Well he is unfotunate man who himself is a muderer of his soul his life.He is begging for the life of that soul less and life less body.
Meanwhile in I.C.U a girl of twenty three years lieing on bed and numbers of machines are conected with her body, doctors are busy with her but failing in retriving the life in that lifeless body.It looks like that she don't want to live and she want to get free from this cruel world.
Outside I.C.U he is feeling suffocated and feeling heart renching pain in his heart.Tried of this torture he stand up and peek from the window and what he saw took his breath away.Doctors are giving her el ectric shocks to retrive her heart beat and her lifeless less body is jerking with the shock powers.He can't tolerate any more and open the door and run to her without caring about anything or anyone and he reach to her and hold her hand and a painful scream left his mouth.
Geeettt and at the same time beeping of the pulse machine start as life bonce back in her body.A lone tear left her eye as she wisper the name of man who is looking towords her.(his eyes are showing multiple emotions as love,pain,guilt,hate,fury and many more...) Maan...

Well thats prologue am waiting for your response.Please tell me you people like it or not should i continue it or not,If u can not comment pleasr press like button and for pms please add me.




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Part 4:pg14 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752804&TPN=14
Part 5:pg15 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3752804&TPN=15&#p105699840

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnks dear well.should i continue.it?
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very interesting...

I have send buddy request...

please pm me whenever u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue... seems interesting. do continue... and add me in pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting prologue
update 1st part sooon
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awesomre plzzz continue
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nice but a request do not make it too sad !!
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Nice. 😊 would love to read more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Character Sketch
Khurana Family:
The respectable family of Delhi involve in Construction bussiness.

Yash Singh Khurana:

M.D of Khurana Construction,Maan's father.
He is very nice person.

Shalini Khurana:


A house wife love her family so much but angry on Maan

Savitri Devi:
Obviously Maan's dadi same as GHSP

Anvisha Rathod:

Elder sister of Maan and happily maried.

Arjun Rathod:
Husband of Anvisha


Naintara Rathod:


Arjun's sister love Maan as her obsession and has major hand in doom of Geet

Maan Singh Khurana:


Bussiness man.A person who regret his mere existance on universe and have ton of remorses.Still in search of his long lost love and wife.

Geet Khurana:
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The Young bussiness tycon hard ,tough,arrogant.heartless stone.
This poem will define Geet's condition
why the fate is so cruel
why the world is so cruel
i wanna die buh force to live
why i forced to grow so early
why i forced to pay so heavily
Dun know buh fate sets its path
whyyy
my soft heart turn to stone
buh really m I a stone??
I am happy in my dreamland
buh brutally force to face harsh reality
They got nothng from their doings
Except
turning love to hatred
smile and tears to blank
simplicity and innocence to arrogance & harshness
now time change
fate want the old time innocence back
buh don't u think it's too late
now there is nothing left
Except
a life less personality
or a ruthless girl
who don't know how to smile & cry
buh why
now the only think is left
Is remorses
Now it's their turn to feel the same pain
Now they have to shed the tears
Tears of remorses
Tears of regret
Tears of repent
But now nothing can change
They have to live the way they choose
They have to repent every sec of their life
They have to burn in the same hell
Which they make for me
aaahhh
Now am a living Zombie
But nothing can change the reality
Why the fate is so cruel
why the world is so cruel


Muskan Khurana:


four years old darling daughter of Geet.love to irritate her mom.

Kabir Khurana:

four years old.twin of Shanaya,two minutes elder than her.

Handa Family:
The Middle class family of Delhi Do Bussiness of import and export before the establishment of their company Handa empire.

Sukhdev Handa:
A man with high principles.Love his daughter very much but now hopeless to get her back.

Rano Handa:

A typical house wife and love her daughter very much and unlike her husband she is hopeful to get her geet back...

Brij Handa
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Rajji Handa:


Mutual Enemies of Maaneet:
Ajay Kapoor:


Dev Shukla:


Tanya Shukla:



P.S here is C.S will update first part at night.


Edited by Alisha_gurti - 11 years ago
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very nice CS...

waiting for actual story to start...

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