Maaneet SS BROKEN BY LOVE prt5 updtd on pg 15

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Alisha Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Thanks am updating at night and india forum is not allowing me pm the link sp tel me wad to do???

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

very nice CS...

waiting for actual story to start...

Edited by Alisha_gurti - 12 years ago

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Alisha_gurti

Thnks dear well.should i continue.it?

YES CONTINUE

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Alisha Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: punam2712

YES CONTINUE

thnks

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Alisha Shah

@Alisha_gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Note:First of all Thanks to everyone for liking this ss and ton of thank those who coment and sorry for not replying everyone but from tomorrow i will reply everyone and hyperlinks are not working in pms as am newbie so putting address and you have to copy paste the link on address bar now enough of my bak bak...

Part 1

Doctors force Maan to leave the I.C.U but as soon as he leave her hand her pulse start sinking and doctors have to allow him to be with her

as they were busy in treating her.

Remorseful tears spilt from his eyes witnising her divine love after whatever he did to her she still love him and he start thinking of that unfateful time month and specially that day and night which change their life completely...

...Flashback five years ago...

Maan Singh Khurana as well as Khurana family is called by Handa's at Handa Mansion and they beg him to marry Geet as their family reputation and family name is on stake and due to those snaps Khurana's reputation also question as these were the intimate pictures of Maan and Geet he was in furry and rage that how dare she use him when she herself and Dev but he agreed to marry her seeing his family asking to him and the wedding was held in a week and Handa's broke every single relation with Geet.During Grah Parwesh rasam he recived a call which didn't help except done the work as oil on fire.His love for her was long lost and hatred took the place of the love he had.

After all the rituals Maaneet were retired to the out house for the night.

When he enter in his room he see her standing near the window and his last thread of control was break.

He came close to her made her face him and what he spoke he know he has attacked directly to her soul.

Maan:Geet i haven't thought that you could so low to get me.(Geet mene socha nahe tha k tum itna gir sakti ho mujhe hasil karne k liye)Geetwas startled by his harsh words unknown to the fact that this is just the start and after some hours she will be left with nothing except her broken heart and bruised and deadth soul.

She tried to back off and say somthing in her defence but harshly stopped by the sudden slap and a abusive word.

Seeing her back off ignite his anger he pull her harshly towords him and place a tight slap on her face and throw her on bed.He hoverd on her and with out caring about her begging and numerous protest he forsed himself on her.He was hard agressive and harsh towords her.

When he is done with her he throw her down the bed without caring about her state as she is fainted due to his brutal act but in his raje he didn't notice it and face his back to her and went to sleep...

...Flashback ends...

In his trance he didn't notice that his grip on her hand is becoming tight continueously and her hand start bleeding.Doctors jerk him and as he come back to reality he is shocked beyond limits and he immediately left her hand mouthing sorry to her and saying i always only give you pain.

Precap:More of Past flashbacks and Present of MAaneet Condition...

P.S:well thats part one and as promise i update at night...now waiting for your response and please tell me should i unedit it...

Edited by Alisha_gurti - 12 years ago

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Hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

nice cs.. loved the characters...
1st part was scary...
maan forced geet how dare he?
may be that is NT 's plan.
awesome update... do update soon
thanks for pm

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namita25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

arghhh Moi hate Maan...
can't wait for the next part...

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

this mutual enemies of maanet n naina had done sth wrong

poor geet now she is dying

maan did nt deserve her

plzzz make an index inn the same post of prologue

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Zariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

this mutual enemies of maanet n nt had done sth wrong

poor geet now she is dying

maan did nt deserve her

plzzz make an index inn the same post of prologue

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sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Nice! 👍🏼 How dare he force himself on her?? I am sure their is some misunderstanding between them... waiting for more

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Alisha Shah

@Alisha_gurti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1
nice cs.. loved the characters...
1st part was scary...
maan forced geet how dare he?
may be that is NT 's plan.
awesome update... do update soon
thanks for pm

Thnks for liking it 😊

well this is painful story u can feel that by name...😭

In update i mention that he got a call which ignite his anger 😡

well i will answer some possible question but it will break the suspense but will add detail on 2nd part or else this story become confusing for you guys😃