Maaneet SS BROKEN BY LOVE prt5 updtd on pg 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
painful update
maan😡

take care of urself!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update.You updated after along time .Please update next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
awesome part
geet used to love maan but maan never acknowledge her love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! Intense emotional update! Past n present well incorporated! Poor Geet~! Maan hurt her! HE did nt listen to her bt js assumed things! Geet left! She was shattered n hurt! Geet thinking abt the past! update soon! Pls add me 2 ur pm list! Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so painful update
hate maan but more than that hate her family...
ek baar bhi apni beti ki baat sunni zaruri nahi lagi unhe...
Handa's ko apni beti se zyada kisi aur pe aur pictures pe zyada yakeen hai...
n maan disgusted with his behavior...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
get wel soon painful ud
she was heart broken wen maan said
he don't love her
geet tried but he not let her he mu her
like other and hurt her beyond repair
thanx fr pm and waiting 4 next hope soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting story... Waiting for more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes indeed she is brutally broken by her love...

how could he do this to her for just misunderstanding...

her parents and nobody knows that she was so big business women...she purchased 2 companies but never told her parents...

interesting update...

thanx for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5
Flash back
I left the room.Last time glancing it last time where my soul my innocene and my heart were brutally snatched and mudered.Promising my self not to comeback ever.It's just 4am.It's still dark I want to kill this body and free my wounded soul from the burden of body.
But no I can't be loser am not that Geet Handa anymore.Wo to mar gai ti usi din jis din usne un ankhon mein apne apko gira hua daikha ta.Nor I can be Khurana .But am Geet I had my belive still on my ALLAH.I know that one day they will know their grave mistake. My car is parked along with security as I completly have different avater for business world.But I start walking towards cafe and think to call my lawyer.And when i tried to open it was not my cell it was Maan's.When I unlocked phone I saw my intimate snaps with dev.As I look the sender of mms it was nun other than dev.And now I know that I had become the victim of revenge.I shut down the phone and start walking towards cafe.As I reached there I saw them sitting on bench as cafe is close.
Adi:Geet kaise hain tu sab thek h jo hua(Geet cut him in b/w)
Geet:Jo hua mujhe us barey mein bat nahe karni meine jo papers mangaye the wo laye hain ap dono.
Adi:Geet to kia karne ja rahi h
Geet:Kuch khas nahe am leaving India forever.Mujhe yahan sans bhi nahe leni.London wali company abhi hain aur acha he hua jo wo sell nahe hui.
Aleena:Ok Geet mein tmhare sath chalunge.
Geet:Hmmm,and she signed the papers transferring Handa empire to Handa's.As she is not Handa any more.Jab usse Handa surname ka adiqar nahe to Handa empire ki malik kesi bani rahe.Aur aj Geet her ek k liye mar gai hain Adi bhai aur agar apko mera sath nibhana hain to app ab kisi Khurana ya Handa c bt nhe krenge wese both families don't know you but company ki waja se.
Adi:Nahe Geet blkul bhi nahe mera wese bhi is duniya mein koi nahe mein yahan sirf formalaties puri karonga aur phir London ajao ga.
And she bid her final farewell and left India.
As soon she landed London she go to office.as it was early morning and after attending conference and discussing upcoming new ventures which they can take over.
She finished the meeting and left for home.
She is not that much strong financially now as with the left over money which she has in her account she want to make London Enterprises strong.
Aleena have done the arrangements for their stay.As soon she reached house.She went to take shower.Her body is completely briused with Maan's harsh treatment.She took a cold shower in chilly winter calming her nerves.
She want to sleep..As soon she close her eyes that night flashes start playing in her mind and she snapped open her eyes.And from that she stop sleeping and instead of sleeping she work in night.
And now it's more than a month since the disaster.It's normal day she was not feeling well.She was puking.
Aleena:Geet I will manage just take rest.
But Geet being stubborn refuse to stay back and start walking when she find her spinning she tried to control but failed and fainted.When her eyes open she find her self on hospital she tried to get up roughly but Aleena stop her saying that be careful not for herself but for the life breathing inside.She was shocked,happy.She got reason to live.She start taking care for her self while London Enterprises touching the new heights.It's fourth month of her pregnancy.She went for songraphy and come to know that she is carrying twins.She is happy but her face is blank.She don't know to show her emotions.She want her family badly mostly her mother but here she is abandoned by everyone .Soon the months passes and one night she give birth to twin a girl and boy.She name them Muskan and Kabir.And changed London Enterprises to K&M Empire.Kabir & Muskan Empire.As now it's not a company but a total empire.Which deals in construction,textile,import and export and even in Motels.And after that business world witnesed a new business tycoon or Magnet.In which project K&M empire put their hand it is clear cut that they are going to get deal.In two years Geet have power and fame.She is known as banded queen of business.Whose looks are soft than feather and heart of stone.She only see one thing that is profit.People fears her.She is second name of power.She hate liar and cheaters.She is ruthless,arrogant and aggressive.
As normal child her babies also ask her questions about their father and she showed him his snap.She don't want her babies to put a worst question mark on her character like her family did.And soon K&M Empire spread to all oveer the world.From Asia to Europe,States to Australia.In Last 2 years K&M Emprie reach only to new level of success.And now her brought her to the same place from where her doom start.
...End of Past...

She brought back to reality by the ring of cell.She recived the call and what the caller said is enough to enrage her and awaken the worst side of her...

Precape:Maan's side of past or some moments from present.(Keep guessing what caller said which enraged her beyond limits.Egarly waiting for your response and suggestions.

P.S:Am updating early and now next update will be what you want.Tell me that.Thanks for liking the part and commenting I will reply to you all tomrw.Luv you all and please suggest me as am confused in both things.And yes I promise that Maan side of story or past will make you understand his behaviour and also his suffering of his whole life.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet's past...n how she left everything...
she also saw her n dev's pics which dev sent to maan...
but i dont understand why maan behave like geet did all this to trap him !!!!!!!!
its her n dev's pic not her n maan's pic na????!!!!!!
geet went to london n made her life there...away from all...
atleast she got two cute reasons to live...
she missed her mother her family at her lifes most important moment...
now who is it call her that she is enrage????

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago

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