Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Yaar im super confused!

Geet car me so k apne aap ko dhund rahi thi!

After the party!

Maan is unpredictable as usual. ..

phir heer ka flash back!

End me gadi me heer thi!

Phir maan kaha hai?????😕

Babaji!!

Hum prir se starting se karte hai...

party k baad geet starts feeling she has lost herself!

Phir background score kya se kya ho gaya bewafa tere pyar me!

Questions maan tho kisi angle se bewafa ya jo bhi ho nahi lata!!

Phir I think wo bachi geet thi but nahi wo heer hai!

Ab ye heer koun hai??

Oh yes wo tho geet ki friend hai!!

Hmmm ab sab clear😃

That was an awesome part yaar!!

Matlab too good!❤️

Ab hum age badte hai😊

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Wow!

what a chapter!

Had to gather my thoughts on this before I can come up with a semblance of a decent comment

not sure if I still can.

Heer is the rebel

fighting authority everywhere she can

seeking acceptance somehow

there is betrayal too for a child who tries too hard and cannot conform to society's standards of achievement

it is like clipping a birds feather

now the bird is flying

wow!

what a great writer you are Z

amazing

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

They both fought

babaji kitna ladte hai dono

i was so scared with all those words that came out !

maan ka nightmare was well written

but the nest part was what i loved!

its ok to have fights unless n until u realize n step back at some point!😊

i believe there fight wouldn't be much larger than the empty life they would lead alone, if parted ways!!

par even if one tries a tiny miny bit things will start falling into place, provided one is ready to let bygones be ...😉

tum tho mujhe story me drown hi kardo gi😆

chalo with geets decision to leave to Darjeeling hope some thing good, better, ya phir best would happen😳

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#264

aaha, Felu da's stories !! I have read some, not in Bengali, translated ones..adventurous, detective, exciting they are..😃
about the update...Lovely bonding the father-daughter duo share..that's why at many times Heer remembers her father...but unfortunately the same cannot be said about the bond between herself and her mother...
did I get it correct, is it the same house which belonged to Heer's family once, or was she driving towards it...and is that another reason for her to come to this place..
oh no! looks like an accident, they are falling..😲

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Dona

@Donnaa

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#265

part 36-40

nice updates...

heer's childhood...rebel heer...

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#266

I am starting my short story 'Smoke and Mirrors' again, right from the very beginning with some changes. Join the fun and please click here for an important goodbye/hello again note and link to the new thread.

(Haven't forgotten Gehraiyan, by the way! Will get back to it in due course.)

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Nahiii!!

mera shout karne ka bhi koi faida nahi

my voice will not be heard by the writer n bonus im getting all weird looks from my colleagues😆

babaji maine bhi kya story choose kiya

jiss ko again break laya gaya🥺

Will be waiting!

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: spoorthi28
Nahiii!!
mera shout karne ka bhi koi faida nahi
my voice will not be heard by the writer n bonus im getting all weird looks from my colleagues😆

babaji maine bhi kya story choose kiya
jiss ko again break laya gaya🥺

Will be waiting!

I put Gehraiyan on a break? Since when? 😆

Thought you were many chapters behind anyways. Your comments stopped before they even reached Darjeeling ;)

(I'm not a fast updater. Believe me. Everyone on this thread will vouch for it!)