Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
dekha i told u he will defo search for his geet😃
but geet ka outburst was a total speachless moment for me...
i dont want to get in to the blame game but talai tho dono hato se bajti hai na!

mujhe ye jaanna hai k aakir hua kya...
by know i know that it is not just one insident but a serese which lead to this situation

par fikar not

Hum Miley Na Miley, Hum Rahey Na Rahey
Rahegi Sadaa Yahan, Pyar Ki Ye Dastan!!❤️

i still beleave there will defo be one day
n i prefer waiting for that one day!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update I have to read again and I wonder at the two different halves of the update...two contrasting worlds...
Of the father who have had known her interests and stood by her, at least by feigning ignorance, being supportive in his own way.

And then there's a parent like most have, somebody who's practical to boot and who wants the kid in the rat race.

I don't blame Heer's mother, not really when most of the population is like that. Heer's mother was after all wondering about "Why nots"
Why cant her daughter do it? She was a lecturer's daughter. She had to be better than the best. There's a pedestal already. Exceeded expectations for being a teacher's kid. And when the kid doesn't reach the expectation, the blame is taken to heart.

The underlying reasons which shaped Heer break my heart since it isn't something very unreal. It is infact quite relatable. What is remarkable is despite of Anupamas, Heer still made friends like Geet. For me she has a heart which will be laid open to the ones who tried. Nayantara or Dev or anybody should just try... Though i can't say the same about Maan.

He needs a hair cut after all 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Wow!

what a chapter!
Had to gather my thoughts on this before I can come up with a semblance of a decent comment
not sure if I still can.
Heer is the rebel
fighting authority everywhere she can
seeking acceptance somehow
there is betrayal too for a child who tries too hard and cannot conform to society's standards of achievement
it is like clipping a birds feather
now the bird is flying
wow!
what a great writer you are Z
amazing



You saying that I can still make you feel this way gives me so much more than you probably realise.

Avi ❤️
Edited by kaamchorni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

dekha i told u he will defo search for his geet😃

but geet ka outburst was a total speachless moment for me...
i dont want to get in to the blame game but talai tho dono hato se bajti hai na!

mujhe ye jaanna hai k aakir hua kya...
by know i know that it is not just one insident but a serese which lead to this situation

par fikar not

Hum Miley Na Miley, Hum Rahey Na Rahey
Rahegi Sadaa Yahan, Pyar Ki Ye Dastan!!❤️

i still beleave there will defo be one day
n i prefer waiting for that one day!😉



How much closer are you to that day at the moment? 😉 Caught up or not?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

aaha, Felu da's stories !! I have read some, not in Bengali, translated ones..adventurous, detective, exciting they are..😃
about the update...Lovely bonding the father-daughter duo share..that's why at many times Heer remembers her father...but unfortunately the same cannot be said about the bond between herself and her mother...
did I get it correct, is it the same house which belonged to Heer's family once, or was she driving towards it...and is that another reason for her to come to this place..
oh no! looks like an accident, they are falling..😲



The house on top of the hill is the same house Heer grew up in.

@bold: I think you'll find in hindsight that the early chapters left many more clues about the characters than you'd think. Chapter two, with Heer's entrance, for example... 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

This update I have to read again and I wonder at the two different halves of the update...two contrasting worlds...

Of the father who have had known her interests and stood by her, at least by feigning ignorance, being supportive in his own way.

And then there's a parent like most have, somebody who's practical to boot and who wants the kid in the rat race.

I don't blame Heer's mother, not really when most of the population is like that. Heer's mother was after all wondering about "Why nots"
Why cant her daughter do it? She was a lecturer's daughter. She had to be better than the best. There's a pedestal already. Exceeded expectations for being a teacher's kid. And when the kid doesn't reach the expectation, the blame is taken to heart.

The underlying reasons which shaped Heer break my heart since it isn't something very unreal. It is infact quite relatable. What is remarkable is despite of Anupamas, Heer still made friends like Geet. For me she has a heart which will be laid open to the ones who tried. Nayantara or Dev or anybody should just try... Though i can't say the same about Maan.

He needs a hair cut after all 😆



😆 I think you already know how much I love that.

Maybe Anupama is part of the explanation to why Heer is so protective over Geet... possessive, sometimes... She loves Geet and she gives all her love to Geet.

I was looking back at some of the early chapters and realised a few things about Heer... there is a lack of the present in her life. In that haircut chapter (15?), she is either ruminating about her father/past or preoccupied with the lives of others.

Where and who is Heer Perera? That daytime woman with the fiery temper, who grumbles about her dream job and is almost cartoonish in her disapproval of her best friend's husband... or that sombre lady of the night who reminisces her past only because she knows that, come morning, that book will be hidden away... or this woman in between who slips through the cracks, but only and only unconsciously...

I don't know what I've just done 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whoops, double post. Eat greens, keep clean, buy bread, love this thread.

😆
Edited by kaamchorni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my God, accidental triple post 😲 I'm out of practice!
Edited by kaamchorni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Previously...

The car climbed the hill, higher and higher, faster and faster, rain dancing against the windscreen. Heer laughed, exhilarated. She felt as if they were flying.

She was free, she was finally free.

Her laugh continued, ringing joyously, until she suddenly felt Nayantara's fingers curl tightly around her arm.

Everything, all at once, came into focus. Heer's eyes widened in shock.

They... were flying.

* * *

5: Dev


5 hours earlier...


"F**k!"

He glared at the table while massaging his knee, as if doing so would cause the lump of wood to apologise.

Everything in this place seemed to have it out for him and after the morning he had had, he was in no mood for vengeful furniture.

First the nightmares and then that damn bloody bird on his balcony that just would not shut up...

If it wasn't for his brother, he would have left this godforsaken place a long time ago. Almost as soon as he'd arrived, in fact...

When it came down to it, however, it was for his brother.

After losing him once already, Dev knew well the value of the man he had grown up idolising. It wasn't just that Maan was his brother - he had been something of a trailblazer, the perfect role model that bratty young Dev had needed in his formative years. Long before any semblance of true ambition had stirred in him, Maan had inspired Dev to at least want to try... a little harder at his homework, a little longer during piano lessons, a little more when trying to replicate his bro's signature coif.

Even now, while he liked to believe that he was more of his own man and less of his brother's fanboy, Dev still felt as if he needed to do something special... something more to keep his brother from leaving him. It was a weakness he was quite happy to keep concealed.

He had been roaming through the corridors of the haveli quite unintentionally and it was only now, as he found himself at the front desk, that he stopped to really look at the place.

It was a musty, old building, if he were to be prosaic about it, but something about the place made him feel young again, which was ridiculous considering that the house he had grown up in had been bigger and far more grand. Well... grand in a modern, distinctly man-made way, he reasoned. It would be hard to replicate this sort of natural elegance. He ought to know; he had tried to do just that for his chain of hotels.

"I need to go into town. Do you think you can handle being alone for a few hours or is that too much to ask?"

Dev jumped at the sudden intrusion and turned to see Mr. Gopal watching him, petulantly at first and then with satisfaction at having given him a scare.

"Hours..." Dev made a show of tapping his chin. "They're the ones that occur seven times a week, right?" Without waiting for a reply, he scowled at the older man and sauntered back down the dark corridor.

He didn't know what the man's problem was but after noticing his emerging hostility towards him, Dev had decided to always be on the offensive when it came to Mr. Gopal. He would have chalked it up to old age crankiness - and the moodiness this beautiful but far too isolated place provided - had it not been for the way Dev had seen him interact with others. The man obviously doted on Nayantara and he had even struck up a strange sort of camaraderie with Geet.

It was only when he saw Dev's face - a face Dev personally found very agreeable indeed - that his mood seemed to sour.

Dev shrugged. His work here was to assist his brother. No more, no less. Especially no more.

Ten minutes later, he heard the heavy front door c lose, the sound reverberating through the empty house.

After Maan had left, it had been just Dev and their father. Dev and their father eating on opposite ends of the table. Dev and their father sitting through parent-teacher conferences in embarrassment. Dev and their father drifting apart because, try as he might, Dev was not Maan.

Thus, Dev was not unfamiliar with silences such as the one that stretched around him now but he was by no means a welcoming recipient.

He considered joining his brother and Geet at the construction site but something about the way they had been interacting lately made him resist. He would ask but some noses were better suited to their own business... They were fine, he was sure...

The next few hours passed in disagreeable solitude. He was a man of chaos and activity. This brand of aloneness offered too many opportunities to dwell...

The phone at the front desk rang through the house and had it not been for boredom and his incessant need for competition, he would have let it ring. As it happened, he raced through the corridors - barefoot and a child once again - in an attempt to beat the phone to its final ring.

"Hello."

The voice on the other end was clipped and clinical. "May I please speak to Mr. Gopal Parekh?"

"I'm afraid he isn't here at the moment. Can I take a message?" He made a face, wondering why he was even bothering.

"I'm afraid it's urgent. May I please speak with a family member of Ms Nayantara Rathod?"

A chill crept into his spine as Dev clutched the receiver a little tighter. "What... what happened to her?"

"I am calling from Joya Lekar Hospital. Ms Rathod was admitted here after a car accident earlier today. She is currently unconscious and we need consent from her next of kin..."

The woman on the other end continued but by now, Dev had already grabbed the keys Mr. Gopal had left by the door and begun rushing out of the house. If he had waited a little longer, he would have known the other reason for the phone call.

"...was travelling with. She is refusing treatment despite appearing to have sustained the more serious injuries. We need her to agree to let a doctor examine her." A pause. "Hello? Hello?..."

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for t pm

Umm dev

Very nice part

U left at t same wait
We still r in panic state
Wat happend
Why is she not wanting any treatment 😲
Edited by muskanp - 10 years ago

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