Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

The next chapter is set five hours before Heer and Nayantara's accident, around the same time as when Dev received the phone call in the previous chapter. The 5 Series, so to say.


I don't I will sound stupid or not, but how come Dev receive the phone call ''before'' the accident?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos


I don't I will sound stupid or not, but how come Dev receive the phone call ''before'' the accident?



No you don't sound stupid at all! I wasn't very clear. This isn't set at the time of his phone call, it's set at the start of his chapter. The chapter spans a few hours and at the end of it, he receives the phone call.

For a second I was like 😳 How could I have been so stupid? I am going to double check now to be sure 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni



No you don't sound stupid at all! I wasn't very clear. This isn't set at the time of his phone call, it's set at the start of his chapter. The chapter spans a few hours and at the end of it, he receives the phone call.

For a second I was like 😳 How could I have been so stupid? I am going to double check now to be sure 😆


Thank God it wasn't me jumping to any stupid conclusion again! :-D.
Its okay. Thanks for clearing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
The awesome timing of powercuts in India

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Posted: 10 years ago
They say if you want to make God laugh, tell him your plans 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Barsaat ki ek raat. Heavy storm! Old villa and they got stuck. There is fire in the fireplace. And in the end she does that! I can't help but notice the important point.
Now before camera shifts to him, the episode is over. Wrong timing!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Barsaat ki ek raat. Heavy storm! Old villa and they got stuck. There is fire in the fireplace. And in the end she does that! I can't help but notice the important point.
Now before camera shifts to him, the episode is over. Wrong timing!





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Posted: 10 years ago

And the next update we will be like ...

Ye toh hona hi tha!

Unless you decide otherwise!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos


And the next update we will be like ...

Ye toh hona hi tha!

Unless you decide otherwise!



Like Geet, I too believe in showing, not telling 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Will people kill me if i say I miss Gopal Kaka?
Amongst all the sexual tension, I get a paternal figure. Kill me

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