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Part 20
Maan was startled the way Geet hugged him...but he could feel the way she was frightened. Even when there was no light her face was predictable...Maan and Geet stayed in that position till the light came...Maan didn't ask any thing. It was as if their silence was speaking...After the light came Maan called his home that he would not be returning home today as there is some work in the office. He could not tell the exact thing to his family and he himself did not know the entire thing...
M: Mom...actually I called home because I won't be able to come home tonight.
MM: Why Maan... What happened??
M: Actually Mom I have to prepare blueprints for a project whose meeting is tommrow...by the time I will finish the blue prints. It will be quite late and then I will sleep in the office itself...Is that okay??
MM: Okay Maan take care of your-self...and do take rest...
M: Ok Mom bye...
Geet just sitting at the couch in the living room when Maan was talking to his mother...
As soon Maan finished his call.
M: Geet I am here you don't need to worry...
G...
M: You go to your room and sleep... I will sleep on the couch here itself...
Geet just leaned on the couch itself...and close her eyes...and just said..
G: Please don't go...sleep on the sofa...please...
It was as if a five year old kid was pleading him and Maan couldn't deny her seeing her situation...Maan came closer...sat on the couch and put her head in his lap...and caress her head...until she slept...Here Maan started to think...and finally slept...in the process that he will ask her tomorrow...

Next day:
Maan woke up a little early hearing the chirping of the birds and when the sunlight entered the large windows lightening the whole mansion. When Maan's eyes opened he saw Geet head was still on his lap and her hands were around his one arm and his other arm was on her head. As he was watching the sweet serene baby sleeping he felt a frown on her forehead. It was though she was remembering the bitter incident that took place. He raised his hand and softly caressed her forehead. Soon it went away and he could see a smile on her lips. Now Maan was curious as to what she was dreaming...Later he decided to ask her after she wakes up. He carefully picked her head and by softly releasing her hands from his arm got up and replaced a cushion so that she could sleep for a little more time. Here Maan caught hold of a sheet so that Geet could be covered...he tucked her in it and decided to roam around in order to find the kitchen.
He started moving to the corridor. The corridor in the mansion had two red rugs with a little distance. At one corner of the corridor was a huge vase, golden and bronze in color. On the other corner was lamp of copper color which was giving a very elegant feeling. On one of the walls of the corridor was an abstract painting, painted with bright colors. It was as if the painter had displayed the different colors of happiness. But right opposite that wall a painting there was the same painting with very dull colors...completely off-the track strokes. Since Maan had a passion for collecting paintings Maan really liked with those of bright colors...But thought that the painter has tried to convey some messages to the people by painting the two paintings in similar manner and also by the way they were put opposite each other. He came closer to the painting as if analyzing every detail of it... and more precisely finding the name of the painters that he can also buy them because this one painting created a strong liking for the personality that that person holds. Here he noticed that the abstract painting consisted of lines that took the image of the face. The painting with the bright colors consisted of a happy pleased face and the other consisted of a very depressed face. At the down right corner of the painting there were two letters AH'. He thought that he will Google the name of the person and finally find out that who is this person.
Similarly the wall also consisted of shelves which had very beautiful candle stands.
At the end of the wall there was a door which when he opened was a kitchen. The kitchen was a big place with everything placed accordingly...very neat and clean, with a wooden dining table at one corner with a very stylish plate which consisted of fresh fruits and right in the middle of the table there was a candle stand.
Here Maan since he was very hungry decided to cook something as he also did not have his dinner last night.
He started opening the cabinets and got hold of the relative things. He started make tea as he couldn't find coffee. And also put water for boiling pasta as he found the things from which he could only make pasta. Also he didn't know a lot of cooking except for making breakfast or some snacks. He also took out milk from the fridge in order to warm it because he thought that Geet's head may feel a little heavy due to all the crying and milk with a little of turmeric will also help heal her bruises. There he was waiting for the water to boil he heard a humming sound. He decided to look that who is humming a song and that too early in the morning and when no one in the house except for Geet and Him. He went back to the TV lounge thinking that may be Geet is awake but there she was sleeping as if nothing happened and also he couldn't hear the sound anymore. He thought that it was just a hallocation therefore he moved back to the kitchen to complete the task that he had left incomplete. Again he started hearing that sound. He lowered the flame of the oven and decided to search that where this sound is coming. There was another door in the kitchen which opened towards the backyard garden. He opened that door and found a very beautiful garden with colorful flowers planted on the edges. There was a pathway along the kitchen door and sitting arrangement. He moved towards the sitting area and here the sound became more shrill and squeaky but Maan was able to make out the words that were in the air.

As soon as he came to the edge of the sitting area he saw a golden cage which had an African Macaw. And the Macaw was humming the following lines:
You're my Honeybunch, Sugarplum
Pumpy-umpy-umpkin, you're my Sweetie Pie
You're my Cuppycake, Gumdrop
Snoogums-Boogums, You're the Apple of my Eye
And I love you so and I want you to know
That I'll always be right here
And I love to sing sweet songs to you
Because you are so dear
Maan was shocked to see a talking parrot. He had never seen one in his entire long life. Maan out of amasement...
M: You can actually sing???
P: Gata rahe mera dil...Tu he meri Manzil!!
M: Ohh My God!


So How's is the new entry?? Shocking haa... lols...
Will be waiting for ur feedback!!
Thankyou so much for liking and and commenting on last part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
will maan find about geet as his friend from childhood
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Posted: 11 years ago
unbelieveable new entry..parrot😲😲😲..correct me..talking parrot..simply a lovely update..cant wait for next part...👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb part
maan slept at geet's place
new entry...just loved it👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey awsum part
hey the song which parrot sing is my ring tone i love this
the new entry shooo cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaha omg fab.. hun.. talking parrot really? lol cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Who is after Geet??? Geet needs Maan badly. Maan don't know wat to do as he doesn't Hv any idea what happened with Geet.

Maan exploring her mansion. Impressed by it. Finds someone singing. N is surprised to know it's a bird.

Continue soon
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab updates! Sorry 4 late likes n comments! Js returned yday frm holiday! Love the way the story is progressing! well written!
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🤗 🤗 Hi dear...



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Part 21
M: You can actually sing???
P: Gata rahe mera dil...Tu he meri Manzil!!
M: Ohh My God!
On the other hand Geet woke up when she felt that the warmth beside her was missing. She noticed that she was tucked in a sheet and then her mind went back to last night. She thought that may be Maan left last night but when she saw his phone on the table she thought that she was wrong.
Geet (Self-thought): Where has Maan gone and that too early. His cell phone is also here. Geet what kind of a woman are you. Your friend came here for the first time and you even did not welcome him properly.
Geet got up from the couch and started looking here and there but she couldn't find him. Then she thought that he might be in the kitchen. She moved towards the kitchen and saw that the water is boiling and two cups of were already on the dining table. She moved closer and saw that one consisted of tea and the other with warm milk. Later she found that the door towards the back yard is slightly ajar. She put the pasta for boiling and came to the backyard and there she saw Maan completely astonished looking at her Macaw.
Here Maan was literally ogling at the parrot with mouth slightly opened and the parrot. This is when Geet came...
G: Ohh so finally you two met.
M: (whispering) Geet. The parrot sings...
G: (Whispers) Maan...I know he is my parrot!
Parrots was keenly observing both of them and leaning out so that he could hear their conversation.
Geet thought that her parrot wants to get out of the cage and Geet opened the cage and her parrot came out and stood at a nearby stand.
G: Maan this is Tito my parrot!!
P: Mujh ko pehchan lo mai ho Tito...
Maan and Geet both start laughing.
G: He's been with me since past 11 years you know.
M: Really?
Parrot interrupts and says mischievously
P: Geetu key sare raaz janta huin!
Maan starts laughing at Geet's nickname. While Geet pouts at Tito.
G: Okay Tito you wait I'll get your breakfast.
Geet moved to a nearby cabinet to take out his meal while Maan moved towards the kitchen to bring the breakfast.
Tito was eating when Maan came with tea, milk and pasta.
Geet sees the Pasta on the table...
G: Ohhh my God Pasta!!!
T: I'm lovin' it!
Maan turns towards the parrot yet again surprised.
G: Come on Maan let's eat the breakfast will get cold...
Maan took the tea...Geet saw the other cup...
G: Maan...milk...Yucky!!! You could have made tea for me as well..
M: Geet you need milk right now...it will help heal the wounds... Now come on drink it.
G: No I want to have tea and that's it!
Geet said that stubbornly. Maan knew that she wont have it so he said.
M: Fine I'll get it.
Maan got the tea and gave it to Geet.
M: Here is your tea Madame!!
Tito was looking at Geet and then started singing.
T: A B.B.G T.P.O.G I.P.K.I U.P.I.O.G!!!
Maan and Geet smiled at Tito's antics. Maan and Geet were silently having breakfast after that but Tito was not really used to quite atmosphere so he said
T: Itna sanata kyun hai bahi.
M: Hahaha. So Tito besides singing songs you have ratified ad lines too..
Tito randomly starts singing songs.. Giving Maan and Geet sweet entertainment.
Maan and Geet had breakfast silently... in between laughing at Tito antics. It was as if they have forgotten everything and living very special moments.
After breakfast Geet went back to the kitchen clearing the dishes etc and Maan decided to talk to his Dadi.
Tito flies on his shoulder and rests there.
M: Hey Tito.. I have to make an important call. Can u move back to your cage...
But Tito did not move therefore Maan decided to make the call..
M: Hellooo Dadi. How are You?? Hope u took your medicines at night.
Dadi: Haa Maan hum koi 5 saal kay bache nahi hai kay aap hume is tarha dant rahe hai.
In return Tito replied
T: Dil to bacha ha ji...
D: Maan yeh apki avaz to nahi lag rahi hai... maine aapko khabhi yeh song sunte we to nahi dekha... Wait a minute... yeh to Rahat Fateh Ali Khan ka hai... Jo kay aik mard ki awaz hai liken yeh awaz to kisi aur ki lag rahi... Maan mujhe isi waqt batae aap kidhar hai??? Kal raat bhi aap ghar nahi aye?
Dadi came in stern and protective mood.
Maan held Tito's beak so as that Tito cannot speak
M: Dadi maa mai bas ghar araha ho... aap fikr na kare... bye..
D: Maan meri baat ka jawab de...Maan ...Maan
And the phone died.
M: Tito aaj to tu ne marwa hi dena tha... Chal apni sahi jaga par..
Maan goes near the cage and puts the parrot in it and closes in...
T: Mai Qaidi ki zindagi guzar raha ho...
M: Haa Haa... dramaybaz... Chup Kar...
Maan ignores all what is Tito saying and starts looking for Geet...
Maan couldn't find anywhwere and finally went upstairs...
He checked all the rooms but couldn't find her.. and then he could hear someone talking from a room and the door was slightly ajar.


Thankyou so much for liking and commenting on the last part. Hope u liked this one too...
So sorry for late update... i have my final exams upcoming so the updates will be irregular till end of may...
Also now the story will be moving to the main point where Maan and Geet will be coming to know about eachother... so do wait for that...
Will be waiting for ur feedback.

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