The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
I never liked Dev in any stories this much.. but i loved this dev-tara love story.. hatake hain..😉 Well Geet kaha gayee.. Maan ne kidnap toh nahi kiya..?😲 Nice part..

😃 You made my day. Thanks 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya
fabulous update !! tara on edge...trying to protect herself...and whom she remembers in such life threatening situation...her love...her life...her dev...!! as she felt being cornered ...all she could think was dev...and a chance to shower her love...show him... his love is reciprocated !! she had gone through soo much in the hands of that suraj...in the name of love...!! obession...insult ...fear...abuse...no wonder , she behaved that way with dev...!! whether that person following her was her enemy...or her protector...he had done well...!! waiting...

Thanks Kavya. She did say that she does not believe in love 😊 I suppose Dev needs to show her how to trust 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

That was amazing! I loved it! I don't know what else to say. My roommate probably thinks I'm crazy because of the faces I was making when I was reading. lol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: --Fairy--
Speechless So beautiful written loved it

Thanks Fairy 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
That was amazing! I loved it! I don't know what else to say. My roommate probably thinks I'm crazy because of the faces I was making when I was reading. lol

😆 Thanks Krishna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: gurti30
awesome dear
thank god she escaped. suraj is doing all this just for his stupid revenge and obsession.
i think man following her is some detective hired by dev
loved last scene the most. hope she will try to let go her fears and accept dev😊

A lot of people have let her down in life. It won't be easy for her.

Thanks for the support 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Tara escaped! Hate suraj! Hope she will accept Dev soon! Well written! update soon

Glad you are liking it😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity
just wht tara needed to knw how much important dev has become in her life superb dramatic twist to make her understand her own feelings👍🏼...evn though dev was not there with her physically he was aware of where she z and wht she was doing but can't say how she will react if she gets to knw abt being stalked by detectives dev has hired for her...but knwng dev i'm sure he z not going to let her go now...super lovely update and the song made it even more special if it was possible...lovddd it all😊
thank u soOo much for the update Avi!!!😊

That was not Dev's detective. It was a random person. Fear makes everyone seem scary. I love that song too and had requested it to be part of GHSP but they never heard me

glad you are liking it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: divya22
nyc part...
i wonder ki wo admi dev tha??
oh finally she lost herself in him...
hopefully sab tgik ho jayega ab jaldi se...

Thanks Divya😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: punam2712
APOLOGIES TO THE REGULAR READERS IN ADVANCE
BUT I WILL BE WRAPPING UP THIS STORY SOONER
DUE TO THE DECREASING INTEREST OF READERS.

AVI DONT DO THIS TO US
THERE ARE SO MANY OF US WHO WAIT EAGERLY FOR THE KHURANA BROTHERS TO SHOW UP FOR THE LOVE
DONT CUT IT SHORT - WRITE FOR US

TARA IS A STRONG WOMAN
SHE MANAGED TO ESCAPE THE TORTURES OF HER FAMILY AND SURAJ AND MADE A NEW LIFE FOR HERSELF
SHE WANTS DEV AND TO HAVE SOME MOMENTS OF HAPPINESS IN HIS ARMS
LOVED THE WAY SHE RAN TO HIS ARMS
DEV MUST BE SHOCKED - WANT TO KNOW HIS REACTION

LOVE THIS SONG - SHE FINALLY ACCEPTED HIM AS HER SAIYYAN

Will be posting Dev's part in the next one.

I understand your sentiments Poonam. It is not an easy decision for me either but even my friends are no longer reading my story. How do I stay motivated then?

Thanks for the support😃