The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 113

i love ur choice of songs n shaayri! Simply romantic n espclly the daabang movies chptr vow! Kya kahne,b👏

😳 hiai, hope feet ke inteezar ka fal meetha hi hon, ya msk angr and misundatndd?

Originally posted by: pureheart2012

i love ur choice of songs n shaayri! Simply romantic n espclly the daabang movies chptr vow! Kya kahne,b👏

Wonderful updates

Nice updates
Somya jaise logo ka kuch nahi ho sakta kyki inhe apne samne koi dusra najar nahi aata
Maan ye jaan gaya hai ki geet usse dur rahna kyu chahti hai ilove the way jis tarah maan geet ko ye samjhata hai usse logo ki parwah na karke khud par yakin karna chahyie aur jis tarah wo apni baato se geet ke chehre par muskaan lane me kamyab ho jaata hai geet maan ke khyaalo me khoyi hui hai wo maan ki ek ek pal ki kami ko mahsoos kar rahi hai kaash maan bhi
geet ki is longing ka ehssas kar pata ye brij to pura rravaaan hai wo geet ko drug inject karna chahta hai lekin kabir sahi time patr aake geet ko bacha leta hai maan londan jane se pehle geet ke saath kuch vakt bitana chahta taki wo apne dil ki baat usse bata sake geet aur maan apni chain ek dusre ke gale me varmala ki tarah pehnate hai and finely their kiss hayee maar daloge kya

Awesome stories... love the way you keep them going in parallel... 👏👏👏 Loved the part about 3 terms and conditions... Dev does come up as an excellent marketer... was able to convince tara without raising any suspicion... 😳
I was actually wondering why is the story named "The locket" - now i know why 😊... but now that i know -- I am a little disappointed...😉 Theres no locket in DevTara story... 😭 why such biased behaviour with my dev and tara... 😡 I do understand Maaneet are the main characters but why ignore the others...😆😆😆
I have finished 48, Will try to read the rest of the part tonite... will ping you for the password once i reach there ... hope ull be ol then 😊

Originally posted by: tmaddy

Awesome stories... love the way you keep them going in parallel... 👏👏👏 Loved the part about 3 terms and conditions... Dev does come up as an excellent marketer... was able to convince tara without raising any suspicion... 😳
I was actually wondering why is the story named "The locket" - now i know why 😊... but now that i know -- I am a little disappointed...😉 Theres no locket in DevTara story... 😭 why such biased behaviour with my dev and tara... 😡 I do understand Maaneet are the main characters but why ignore the others...😆😆😆
I have finished 48, Will try to read the rest of the part tonite... will ping you for the password once i reach there ... hope ull be ol then 😊

Dev Tara ko locket ki zaroorat nahi hai😆

I like darji and geet scene geet is waiting for her maan and maan has missunderstanding I love all the past there past is really amazing love maneet

So sad maan is thinking geet betray him but she was stuck in rain I hoe they'll clear this misunderstanding fast and dev and Tara challenge I think it ll be fun I love to read as usual too good updates enjoyed reading and I want to kill that brij and suraj