The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

part 42
awesome...
thank God Naina is fine and is with Dev...
was that the BG?
but she was so scared...
that Suraj is a bas****...
and Brij a swine...
Naina wanted to see Dev and the kiss was too good...
hope Dev gets to know her at least now...
cont soon dear...

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: dqno1

I forgot to mention about the picture how lovely the reflection looks. Loved it.

Songs of Locket...lol

I suppose I am carrying my love for music to extremes 😆

Glad you are liking it. It makes me write more.

About the green part, I think I am leaving more and more readers behind with so many stories here.

Let's see how it goes .

Thanks Lakshmi for your support😃

now a days i have become a pic maniac, i suppose...😉 recently i learned creating or should i say manipulating pics... and by each pic am learning more... this reflection thing i did for the first time and it took me a much time to get this output.. am happy that u noted it ... thanx dear...

now am thinking what next to do😆

green part... plz dear ... take this story the same way as u had imagined... dont cut short it... thats my only request... i know decreased likes and comments dishearten the writers, but still plsss...

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Aviii mein aagayi... hugs tightly her dqno1 ... no more kattis...

How Is you meri pyallliii puchki... ...

Hmm I dint read the last update... reason bcoz Tara... I have seen her as bold and strong women... even now she is... but I can't see her pain... nor I have sooo much strength to visualize the pain she had gone thru... these merciless ...inhuman acts.. make me violent...and I Wil surely bang someone...

But u r an awesome writer... don't just give up... and yeshhh I can completely understand when u wont get the feedback and effort u put would seem waste... but darling... we are always Der... and always adore u... and be with u... so doubt even think of quilting or so called quiting...

But anyways... decision is urs...

Love u avi... kisses..hugs... and love for u... :-) :-) :-) <3 <3 <3

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: sona-rai

OMG 😲Where's my Janu😳
I want Him with Me😳😆😃

Janu nahi Manu hoga... chalega😉

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
ek kahani line pe aayi...
ab dusre ki baari hai...

Par ab Geet kaha chali gayi hai...

Kahi Maan ki yaadon maine tho nahi kho gayi

😆 Ab Dev se Maan ke baare mein baat kar ke nikli thi .. pata nahi kya hua hoga?

Akeli jaan, Delhi ki sadak, Daadima so gayi medicine le ke, no one at home to call aur purse outhouse mein bhool gayi hai... Kahi koi black Mercedes mein toh nahi aa raha hai...😲😲

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
beautiful part...glad she escaped from suraj's men...poor soul...could not go against her family wish and had to engage with suraj... how disgusting suraj is...he wanted her to satisfy his revange and then he will throw her away...ufff...glad that she came to delhi & got job at KC...
she was fearing of guard dev sent for her security...

loved the last ...her pouring her emotions scaring she will loose him forever...

hope now she will answer his all questions so that he can do something against suraj and she can meet her father...

Thanks Madhuri. Glad you are enjoying it. As brave as Naintara's character's character is, shouldn't it make sense that she is the one to slash Suraj?

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: spvd
part 42
awesome...
thank God Naina is fine and is with Dev...
was that the BG?
but she was so scared...
that Suraj is a bas****...
and Brij a swine...
Naina wanted to see Dev and the kiss was too good...
hope Dev gets to know her at least now...
cont soon dear...

I can't seem to end Dev Tara story. Have thought of something. Hopefully all of you will like that too.

Thanks Deepa.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

now a days i have become a pic maniac, i suppose...😉 recently i learned creating or should i say manipulating pics... and by each pic am learning more... this reflection thing i did for the first time and it took me a much time to get this output.. am happy that u noted it ... thanx dear...

now am thinking what next to do😆

green part... plz dear ... take this story the same way as u had imagined... dont cut short it... thats my only request... i know decreased likes and comments dishearten the writers, but still plsss...

That was the first time? Very nice Lakshmi. Your adding that saying in there also made my day. You should post it in Geet creation gallery. This one and the Maan vs Khan's wala also.😃

I am trying Lakshmi. Dr. Khurana's story had over 200 readers. This one not even 100 most times. Even that I was fine with as long as my friends were with me but now most have left IF.

I am not a quitter though. I have a stubbornness to finish what I start so I never leave anything halfway. Plus you are here to motivate me..😃 That means a lot. 🤗

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
Aviii mein aagayi... hugs tightly her dqno1 ... no more kattis...

How Is you meri pyallliii puchki... ...

Hmm I dint read the last update... reason bcoz Tara... I have seen her as bold and strong women... even now she is... but I can't see her pain... nor I have sooo much strength to visualize the pain she had gone thru... these merciless ...inhuman acts.. make me violent...and I Will surely bang someone...

But u r an awesome writer... don't just give up... and yeshhh I can completely understand when u wont get the feedback and effort u put would seem waste... but darling... we are always Der... and always adore u... and be with u... so doubt even think of quilting or so called quiting...

But anyways... decision is urs...

Love u avi... kisses..hugs... and love for u... :-) :-) :-) <3 <3 <3

Kittu🤗

How are you dear?

Don't be worried for Tara. My Tara is strong enough for every woman on earth😆 She will get justice for herself. She has a man who loves her and love gives us wings and strengths we had never imagined. Too bad that Tara does not believe in love😆

If you feel sorry for anyone feel it for Dev. He fell in love with HER!! What else she will put him through only Avi's mind will come up with..😆

Thanks for reading and all the love. Missing you also dear.. 🤗