FF- DAGGER- curve to painful memories pt-8 dec 29 pg-42

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi friends..i have started a new FF...have been thinking a lot to start one, and there it is..finally started it.

i write a poem for u guys about the journey of maaneet in this story...this story tells about how sometimes past memories curve ur heart brutally and engraved the memories to bleed the heart and to feel the pain through ur whole life...i will just ask you guys to read incase you liked it.


DAGGER- curve to painful memories...

Want to search a light

Deep down there is a fight

Fight to search a light

Don't know how I crossed the path

Path of pain and remorse

Path of dreadful memories

Memories which haunt me day and night

Deep down there is a fight

Fight to remove the pain

I know there is a light

Light of a soul

Soul who is pure and bright

Don't know how I crossed the dark night

Dark night full of dreadful memories

But there is a light

Light of hope

Hope to feel the love

Love which is not touched by me

But I m happy

Happy to feel the love

Love which is a soul

Soul of two bodies to become one...

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I m happy

Happy in the world of love

Love which is a soul

Soul of two bodies to become one

I m happy

Happy to feel the pain

Pain of love

Love which is now a mere word

Love which never existed

I m happy

Happy to lose the hope

Hope to feel the love again

Hope to feel the pain again

Deep down there is fight

Fight to see the light

Light which looks bright

Want to search a light'

love
Suni
Please do give me your support, will be waiting for your response. Please do hit the like button and leave a comment, it means a lot to me...Criticism and appreciation, both are welcomed.
hey guys if u like only then i'll start this one...otherwise i'll dicontinue it here...plz tell me ur views and suggestions also...


NOTE- HEY GUYS TELL ME UR VIEWS ABOUT THE POEM ALSO...I M WAITING...
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PLZ JOIN ME ON MY BLOG...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story dear
its interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing...
CONTINUe soon!!!

Can't wait for story ...
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congrats for the new story dear
its interesting
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congrats for the new story dear
its interesting
nice start
continue soon😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start
continue soon
Plz update your ss and os also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm, congrats on the new FF ! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the concept loved the poem can't wait to read more congrats on the new ff thanks for the pm
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congrats for starting new story...

very interesting...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congo on new story. I really like ur stories and wish u all luck . 👏 for ur hard work

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