new SS-DANCE PE CHANCE part 6 /pg 12/ 31 dec

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Hi, i m new to this forum and I m crazy for Maaneet😳. I have read many FFs and SSs on Maaneet. While reading them the writer inside me came out. So, i tried to write a story on our adorable Maaneet. Hope you all will like it. Criticism and appreciation, both are welcomed.
So, here is my SS- DANCE PE CHANCE 😊

😊 DANCE PE CHANCE😊

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CHARACTERS
Geet- 1st year student of B.Tech(EEC) of NIT college'.bubbly' oh sorry sorry bubbly word is far away from her dicitionary'.full of pagalan is right'talktive'oh!!! Only in front of girls'but introvert whenever it comes to boys'simple with perfect combination of beauty and brain to hoga hi NIT me jo padhti h'.

Maan- 1st year student of B.Tech(EEC) of NIT College'stubborn'oh his dicitionary starts with this and ends with charmer..owner of geart physic..

Shashank- best friend of maan'same in maan's college..down to earth'polite'he is with maan from childhood..

Preeti- best friend of geet since 6th 'bubbly, sweet..she is just adorable..

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PART-1

Geet- daadiji I won the dance competition..( she won solo dance competition held in her college)

Daadiji- congrats geet ( hugged her)

Geet was so excited but then she made a pout.

Geet- daadiji, principal told me that I have to participate in national level dance competition(NLDC)

Daadji- congrats, that's great'so what is the problem.??

Geet(lowered her lower lip)- couple dance hai . I can't dance with a guy (she is full of pagalpan but when it comes to daadi she behave as a small kid)

Daadi patted her cheek- sweety you can't give up on this chance..jindagi me aise mauke bahut kam aate hai .So you should grab the opportunity rather than making excuses and you know your principal Geet , he never accepts a no from students..you have to follow his orders at any cost ...

Geet knew she can't deny the fact'her principal is hitler'he never took a no from any person..he had a discipline in college which have to be maintained by the students at any cost '

Next day in Principal's office..

Principal - You can't back out now (in a stern voice)

Guy- but sir I have some urgent piece of work at home

Princi- I don't want to hear any BUT'S and IF'S'do u get that maan. I have a prestige to maintain..

Maan knew there was no way to escape but he have to try for her brother's wedding's sake.

Maan- but sir!!!before he could complete princi gave him an angry glare...he was not afraid of his angry look..he is maan singh khurana afterall'but he knew principal will never understand him..

Ok ..said maan half heartedly

Princi- Ok, geet handa will be your partner in NLDC..

Maan- partner??? His eyes widened In shock..he thought it was a solo dance competition.

Princi- yes..this time NLDC theme is couple dance..he smirked.

Maan- but sir!!!!princi again gave an angry glare and humare maan babu ke pass koi option nai bacha..bas is geet handa ki kami reh gayi thi..he murmers to himself.

He left the cabin in anger..just then his friends met him near the caf..they said hi to maan but he was lost in his dreams!!!!oops you can say cursing the principal.

Shashank shrugged him off..

Maan- sadly Hi guys

Shashank- what happened yar?? Tu itna khoya hua kyu hai??

Maan- with a sad face ...nothing shaku , bas sadu ke room se aa raha hu

His gang got excited- kya bomb phoda sadu ne???

(vaise sadu princi ka nick name hai)

Maan- couple dance performance in NLDC'

Everybody gasped hearing maan..they all knew maan and his behaviour toward girls..he didn't like to dance with any girl..in fresher party also he denied every girl who approached him.

Shaku-wow!!!! Then why are you upset??? Kahin tu ladki ki wajah se to nahi...before he could complete maan gave him an MSK glare..

Maan- MSK is not concerned about girls yaar but what about Dev bro's wedding

Shaku- in ordder to lift maan's mood ok maan...lets have party to celebrate dev bhai's wedding..

Maan blinked couple of times and stared at Shaku confusedly..

Shaku- arey mera matlab tha shaadi fix hone ki khushi me.

They all went to caf and grabbed their pizza .

Shaku- so ,whose your partner? concentrating on his food.

Maan- someone called Geet...he paused...Geet Handa..

Karan( one of maan's friend)- in full excitement 'geet handa as The Geet Handa of our class..

Maan and shaku looked at Karan like they have seen some ghost .

Maan- acha humari class me koi geet handa bhi hai...trying to remember .

Karan- dude tujhe basketball se fursat mile tab to koi dikhe'she is beauty with brain..she topped 1st sem..simple sober girl.

Maan- no, I can't remember..shaku do you know her???...before shaku said something...leave her I don't want to hear about her.

Suni

Part-2(page-2)

Part-3(page-4)
Part-4(page-5)
Part-5(page-7)

Part-6(page-12)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start👏. love maan being a sadu😡 continue soon waiting😊
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Beautiful start dear
so maan and geet going to dance together
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shruti_rai, sporthy_smile28, sun4u, gurti30, smallville, thnx for liking my SS...it really encourages me 4 writing more..
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@ sun4u - thnx 4 commenting...and yes maan is sadu now but soon u'll see many more colours of maan as well as geet..
@gurti30- thnx dear and yes they will dance on many occasions in this SS...
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nice start dear...👏 continue soon...
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geetkamaan, Hanishadevi, lehr, shah10, thnx dear 4 liking and commenting 😊it really encourages me ...
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😆DANCE PE CHANCE😆
PART-2
In the evening, in boy's locker room'.
Geet's whole gang was present in the boys locker room.

Geet- arey theek se kaam karo na'and do it fast'

Preeti(worriedly)- are u sure yaar..???...if sadu(Princi) finds out this we will be dead'

Geet- in full dramatic way'u know me..i m Geet Handa'dar mujhse dur bhagta hai main dar se nahi ...

Preeti rolled her eyes- I know'I know miss GEET HANDA'.but are u sure'

Geet( angrily)- yes I m sure preeto'.i am not gonna spare RAJ'

Preeti- but ye itni badi baat bhi nahi hai'.u r over reacting geet..

Geet said more angrily- Diya mam scolded me because of this RAJ'he has to pay for his deed'

Girl- Geet he just lost ur assignment'seriously u r over reacting..

Geet with full emotional drama- haan haan assignment mera lost hua hai'Diya mam ne mujhe daanta hai'.tum logo ko kya farak padta hai'and with that she started shedding crocodile tears'

Whole gang- ok fine u r right'RAJ did a blunder'fine???

Geet continued sobbing while congratulating herself in her mind for such a great acting ...

Just then they heared door knob clicking' and everyone hid behind the lockers..

A guy came in the room'he was wearing only shorts 'he looked hot with drops of sweat on his bare back 'all the girls started drooling at him but they couldn't see his face ...

He came to the locker room to take shower after basketball practice'he opened the bathroom door and then'

Girls heared the sound of splash'and all started laughing..they all came out and saw a guy standing dipped in blue paint'he was fully dipped in blue paint from tip to toe..his toned body looked like someone painted him..paint was dropping from his head and jaw on his chest..

They all gave hi-five for the achievement and again started laughing'

Geet- while laughing...finally I got my revenge'

Girl- he looks funny'bechara Raj'

Geet- now he will know that one should not mess with GEET HANDA'next time he will remember me before losing someone's important things'
Preeti carefully looked at the guy'

Preeti tapped geet on her shoulder- I don't think so he is Raj..

Everyone looked at Preeti and then at guy'.

He was fuming in anger'and glared at them

He removed paint from his face'.and when the girls saw his face their face became blank..geet looked at her friends ..they all looked horrified'like they have seen a ghost'geet turned to face the guy and jumped back suddenly'she gulped the saliva in her throat and did a quick prayer to her babaji'hey babji please mujhe bacha lena iss se murmers to herself..

Geet puts a brave face and said- wo mere doston ne'and looked around to see them'there was no one behind her'she started scolding them under her breath'she turned to look at him and saw him near'

Geet blinked her hazel almond eyes 1000 times in a fraction of second...

Actually geet has planned to take a revenge from RAJ who lost her assignment and for this they did some research on Raj where they found that every evening Raj plays basketball and then comes to locker room for taking shower and change of dress ...
So as per plan she hanged a bucket of blue paint on the top of bathroom door so that when Raj comes and opens the door the paint will fall on him '
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geetkamaan, Aakshitha, kabslocks
thnx for liking my SS...it really encourages me 4 writing more..😊
plz do comment dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u are such sweetie pie yaar..even with few likes u cont writing..i really reaspect u..wonderful update..i think the paint wan spill on maan,,wrong guy..geet is gone yaar😆😆😆..pls cont😆soon..

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