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komlika

@komlika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Hey awesome story

Poor maan

Btw did you write any other SS or FF??

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

i agree with Elfin (Hi Manna!). I was shocked by his words. It would hurt that she embarassed him in front of his colleagues but this is not a step of a man who loves her. Perhaps not as much as his ego...

Geet drinking when she knows he has banned it is the sign of frustration on her part of his trying to tie her down.

Loved the swing scene.

Nice writing 😃

Thanks for the update

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

oh god yeh kya hogayi geet ko really iam feeling very sad for both she is not able to come out of her childhood flashes.

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Awesome update...feeling bad for both of them..

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

hmm this is the step needed in this relationship between Maan and Geet...

wonderful update...

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

GEET CANT LET THE NIGHTMAREWS OF HER PAST RULE HER PRESENT

NOT ALL MARRIAGES FAIL - ONE JUST NEEDS TO BELEIVE IN THEM

SAD FOR THE WAY MAAN FIANLLY GOT TIRED OF WAITING AND BROKE UP WITH HER

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

awesome update...pls add me in PM list

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

i have added u for pm .plz pm me whenever u update ...and update soon ...

waiting to see how geet will realise her mistake ...and plz dont mske maan merry someone else in anger ...

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: kumari3
Thank you all for your awesome and insightful comments, very much appreciated! Will leave personalized thank yous as well. :)

thank u k return gift me long update de do 😛😆

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Wow ... this though seems short was packed with right emotions.. 👏

It all was culmination of all pent up frustration, rejection, insecurity and humiliation for Maan while the reverse for all the fears, nightmares and loneliness for Geet.

This is the way they head here onwards or they give it a thought and sit and clear out all the haze 👍🏼

For me its neither Maan or Geet at fault.. a relationship has tow dimensions like two sides of a coin with love and trust with equal proportions... they lack in this equality as each of them have their own shackles ... Geet having her bitter past and broken family while Maan always being the ace in everything achieved in life be it with family, friends or work so can't see this set down.

Beautifully woven together... 👏

Continue soon... would like to know where they both are headed now in this relationship 😊

Thanks for the PM, 😃