MG FF: Tremble - Complete (index on p. 1) - Page 13

Beautifully written once again. Waiting for the next part. Keep up the wonderful work.👏

nice update...but why the hell did she slapped maan???!!!...is it his fault that he lives her more than his life and wants to marry her and spend the rest of life with her...do continue soon.

Wow one tight slap! !!

Wow Geet's extra shots of alcohol made her forget such a big incident of the previous night and she got lost in past sweet memories.

How authoritatively Maan had tole her that Geet only belonged to him.
But Pinky's wake up call made Geet face to face with reality that Maan indeed had broken up with her.

Maan's way to distract himself is way too cute.I am totally,crazily in love with the parts where Maan is shown with a lil girl,be it his daughter or sm relative like Anjana.When Anjana said "youuurs" Awww that was so cute.love them.


And now Geet has slapped him!!!!!!!!!! Oopssy,now what?????

Wud Maan also react harshly or...


Gr8 part buddy.

Geet remembered their good memories and forgot last night. Pinky had to remind her.
Geet slapped Maan.
What will Maan do.
He got tired of waiting for her to get over her insecurities and broke up.

Hey sweety.
Your updates seem to end with an explosion everytime I finish reading.
beautiful update, starting from geets remenicense of old memories to the dranatic slap.
Both need time to understand one another, though the love is already immense.
Loved the update, so update soon pretty please.

@ daredevilisback - You are just amazing dear, many thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment for each chapter and for your extremely kind words! I appreciate that so much!! Big hugs!
😳
big wala...haddi tod wala...🤗

geet didn't remember anything from last night...
Maan got slap😲


really awesome...
it was completely different than what I thought...
waiting for next...
continue soon!!!!