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Dilsay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

thanks for the PM dear ...
loved the update ..
this shock was needed for Geet ...lets see how you would make her agree to the marriage and how would Geet manaofy Maan 😉

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Now that was sad,really sad.The update started on a chirpy note with a cheerful Geet trying to make Maan agree to go to the beach party but ended with a break-up.

The dream of Geet's past was really hurting,a 9 year old having this kind of mentally torchered childhood, is bound to be weak on emotional fronts and will have demons of her past haunting her.And then Maan's pressure to get married [which was not wrong fm Maan's POV] forced her to take the shelter of drinks which proved her doom.

On the other Maan with a normal mentality cud never understand Geet's turmoil,he was frustrated with her continuous denial even after so much cajoling fm his side.And then he saw her drunk and blur out those words which hurt his ego,resulting in this drastic decision.

Dont know whats in store for future but hoping that both Maaneet will try to understand each other's situation.

You have fantastic word power which can make our heart feel all the emotions that U want to display.

Fabulous part buddy.

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

😲
I lost the track of this story...
Now I'm sending u frnd rqst...
I don't want to miss beautifulll story...
Ok...late me read part 2...

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Part 2 :
Marvellous update dear..
This is just amazing...
So painfull...so emotional...
when maan was actually jealous of adi..
jealous feeling says his craving for geet...his craving to see her as his wife...
very nice yrr..
That feeling of maan...I loved the most in this part...
awesome😊

Edited by daredevilisback - 11 years ago

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daredevilisback

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Part 3:
This is just beautifulll...

Maan broke up their reationship😲
feeling so sad for both them...
even geet has her own reason...her fear...
story is getting more interesting...
really can't wait now...
plz continue soon!!!!!!

You are awesome yrr...
From now on u'r one fav writer of mine...

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

I guess my reaction to the update would be in minority.

I understand Maan's frustration and helplessness over Geet's reluctance to get married.

I understand Maan's embarrassment over Geet's antics while drunk.

But I cannot appreciate a man who breaks up a relationship with the woman he loves so much when she is under the influence of alcohol and not in her senses. The reason being she was unable to defend herself and she was half partner in the relationship they had. She must have her opinion as well.

I know this is fiction, but I want to say something here.

We, traditionalists still believe so much in the institution of marriage that may be we do not consider any other alternative.

Maan wants to get married.

Geet doesn't want to get married.

End of story.

Geet did not break up with him because he was forcing her to marry him.

So, how fair is it for Maan to break up because Geet doesn't want to get married?

And if he broke up because he was embarrassed while she was drunk, I cannot respect him as a partner.

You protect the woman you love when she is not in her proper senses, not break up publicly.

Disappointed in MSK.

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

hi thanks 4 da pm n sad update! Past well incorporated! Geet's decision has hurt Maan! Her words hurt him! He ends the relationship! Poor Maan! Geet shld nt have sed that! update soon! She was drunk! Bt Maan shld nt have done wt he did in front of everyone! Well written

Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago