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.Tulip.

@.Tulip.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

vry satisfied wid d update ... painful bt its kind of needed

may b some space cud help thm wat their closeness cudnt do it fr thm

awesome chapter... luvly writing👏

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

i m feeling so bad fr both... bt honestly... geet has to face her fears... n move on...

i wish she wud hv tried ... it wud hv been easier fr both..

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

😲 this is exactly how i m after reading the part...never expected that...feeling very bad for maan...she let him down very badly this tym,... can u plsss update the next part sooner😳😃 eager to know her reaction when she gains her hosh back...😡 dumb girl , geet...

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

relationship is over 😲

ohh geet idiot what did u do

plz dont make maan marry someone else ...i cant bare ...

plzmake geet understand her fault and maaan pain ...

she needs some brain .and a hard push .plz next part jitni jaldi ho do ..and want long update

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Now this was something expected

Good one! !

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Can I just say that I loved the ending the most *evil grin* 😆

At least Maan told her only and didnt make a fuss about the whole thing, still I wonder whether he will keep up to what he said,because knowing him, I would say that he is ready to do anything for Geet so I will rather wait till the next update to know what exactly he has decided 😆

But in a way this was really needed, I agree that she has had a painful past but like I said it doesn't mean Maan will be the same, who why generalise xD

Lovely update Kumari, waiting for next update ^__^

P.S the baby bump scene of Aarti and Yash even I love that, they both were cute ^__^

Thanks for the PM =))

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Ohh i loved it sooo much!!
Maybe this is wake up call for geet to realize not every men are the same..i know she suffers bcoz of her moms past but she has to think abt maans sir desires too... btw, i just looove it when she says maan sir, and he responds sweetheart, very cute!!!
Again feeling sorry for Maan but also for geet,. poor kid was traumatised..
So alchool acted like truth potion here, geet let out her frustration and now it costs her love, she lost him...superb written update, i could visualize maaneet reactions in last scene..just superb!
thank u for pm :)