The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED

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Aditi.kesari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1041

I am yet to read the story. but before reading this thread first I want to tell u how wonderfully u captured person's feelings and the way u r portraying characters it's like as if u have been there witnessing all the story and writing it.Amazing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1042

omg i seem to wanna read more and more of this ff

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1043

Shattered dreams-Perfect title to the chapter n apt. Song 👍🏼 I love the song very much 😳 It was nowhere near confusing 👏 Each n every scene was beautifully carved Avi 👏
Thank goodness Chandan got to know the evil side of his Pammi bhabhi !
Dev's alwayz there for his I-star through his detective 😳 He came as a saviour 😳, only Avi knows what would have happened if Dev wasn't there 😆
Geet is so affected by Maitheli's condition-any girl would ! 😒 Thankfully Maan's there for her 😳 I loved the whole scene of his comforting her n answering her queries patiently 😃
And so, Kabir special someone is Megha 😲 aur maine kya socha tha ! 😆
Kabir's character is appealing me to lyk him 😳 Megha is already very lovable 😳

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1044

Maan ya Salman 🤣
Maan 0 Salman 1 🤣 It was hilarious to see Maan competing wid Salman 😆 😆 😆
Wishes Do Come True 😃 Saare Khans r giving tough to Maan 😆 Loved that, Shahrukh, a geek 😆 I feel lyk zabaan chirhaaaing to Aashu 😆 Tere Mast Mast Do Nain is already ka favourite 😃 its A Salman+Maan combo na 😉 I love the whole movie Dabang wid Maan n Geet 😉 😳 The silent confession , the unspoken acceptance 👏

Kabir-Megha poor couple 😭 Kabir wants to protect her from getting hurt n Megha wants to be his companion. Feeling bad for both 😒 I hope the true love unites them too 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1045

Dinner Date at Dhaba 😳 Loved it 😃 Maan even got jealous from the kids 😆 The dhaba wala was tharki 😆 Pics were sone pe suhaga 😳 Rang De Basanti is one of my favs too 😃 Loved it how u mixed the romance wid the patriotism 😃

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1046

Suraj Hua Madhham ❤️ Again a favorite of mine 😳 Haayeee what a beautiful dream Avi 😳 n equally beautiful description 👏 The perfect picture wid the perfect fingers I just noticed the chapter's name, Differences !
I loved the when Kabir just lashed on Megha for not eating , though he should have been a little calmer but loved how he just called her n scolded with right 😳 Sometimes the fear of losing someone we care about makes us behave illogically ! Truely n Rightly said 👏
Love is so stubborn sometimes, doesn't let u go against it, that's what's happening wid Kabir, u described his torn n broken personality beautifully Avi 👏 That was so lovely 😳 the silence can b so meaningful at times 👏
How he just came, fed her n left widout a word 😳 But who must b there watching him ? 😕 Can it be Maan ? 😕 Nah ! maan would have pounced on him seeing him climbing off from his Sister's window 😆
Thank goodness Geet cleared her confusion n didn't make any issue on all that she heard 😃

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1047

Tara is continuously pushing Dev off her life How heart-broken was Dev when accussed by Naina ,I felt for him 🥺 Naina is also right in her decision, being is vicinity of Suraj's kind of men-which girl would want her loved one to b harmed Their little office window scene was so cute 😳 until she ruined it wid those words Dadima witnessed it all 😲 😳 😳 Em not at all liking Pari 😡 Dev's pic was bindaas 😉 😆 Dev-Geet convo was stirring confusions but then, resolving them too 😳

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1048

Bin Tere bhi mera fav hai 😆 Is it a co-incidence ya waqai me hamari choice itni milti hai music me ? 😃
Okay coming back to chapter, well,its superb ! Naina caught 😒 Geet also not in reach 😒 Dev was witty to take commisioner's help in need 👍🏼
Maan's Pov in picture 😊 so, the misunderstanding there must b surely she wouldn't have missed the party just lyk that , there must b a reason to it
Though I don't lyk Sameera but I know Avi's not love triangles type, right ? 😉 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1049

Originally posted by: Koolsmile
Maan ya Salman 🤣
Maan 0 Salman 1 🤣 It was hilarious to see Maan competing wid Salman 😆 😆 😆
Wishes Do Come True 😃 Saare Khans r giving tough to Maan 😆 Loved that, Shahrukh, a geek 😆 I feel lyk zabaan chirhaaaing to Aashu 😆 Tere Mast Mast Do Nain is already ka favourite 😃 its A Salman+Maan combo na 😉 I love the whole movie Dabang wid Maan n Geet 😉 😳 The silent confession , the unspoken acceptance 👏

Kabir-Megha poor couple 😭 Kabir wants to protect her from getting hurt n Megha wants to be his companion. Feeling bad for both 😒 I hope the true love unites them too 😳

Did you see the pics Lakshmi made😆

I love this sequence in the show😳

So glad you liked my version of it too😃

Naureen🤗 kya batau how happy it is making me to see you liking my story.

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1050

Originally posted by: dqno1

Did you see the pics Lakshmi made😆

I love this sequence in the show😳

So glad you liked my version of it too😃

Naureen🤗 kya batau how happy it is making me to see you liking my story.

Lakhshmi ki pics nhi dekhi maine 😕 I loved tere mast do nain sequence too 😃. your version is totally different n bht lush tha 😳 Em not into liking extreme romance, I've always loved the cuteness n sweetness Maaneet held in their relationship 😳
I m loving Locket, absolutely 😃 You're just amazing Avi 👏

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