The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 104

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ch 35
Damn!! Coming face to face with such absolute betrayal from your most trusted family, seeing the woman you love reduced to begging at your feet, hearing about your dead daughter(i still have my doubts about that one)no wonder he got a heart attack. I want a happy ending for these two Avi. I can't see any hope for them right now, but after suffering so much these too deserve some sort of happy ending😭, so nothing can happen to Chandan. I am keeping my finger crossed and reading ahead with faith.

Eeks!! That girl being dragged to the shadows freaked me out, until I realized that it is Dev and Tara.
God this is getting so intriguing.
Avi the romantic Hitchcock.😆
But what the hell!! Dev called brought Chandan to the hospital, he was operated on, got a stent put in and Brij has literally kidnapped him.😲
Poor Tara yaar. Denying her feelings time and again even in such extreme circumstances to protect the man she loves

Ahh!! Maan is such a sweetheart. He can't bear to see his Giit in pain. But I'm glad she found solace in him.
Geet is a very sensitive person and as such, a person she calls ma, or rather Maithima, seeing her destroying herself must have been so very hard on her.

Oho!! Maan's true love talk was so heart touching and something they bith are going to experience.😳


Huh!! yeh kya hua? So Kabir likes Megha.. not Geet?😕

CH 36
Oh God my thoughts exactly. Shahrukh bas nahi tha kya usse satane ke liye, ki abhi humara Dabaang boy ko add kar diya Avi ne. Poor, poor Maan😆

Not only a Kabootar but a male Kabootar at that. Remember the Kabootar's name was 'Handsome'🤣
Oh yeah Rahat Fatheh Ali Khan all the way.😃

Boy, I could just totally imagine this scene, as if it was happening right before my eyes.
No more please. Towel dance, muscle ki dukan? Avi, tears are still rolling down my cheeks as I'm typing this. That towel dance...unforgettable.🤣

Aww!! What a sweetie pie of a bhai😳

Kabir and Megha's situation made me think of Patrick Swayze's song, from Dirty dancing, "She's like the wind" I love that song.😃
I can't help but feel that Maan and Kbir could be really good friends if only Kabir let's the prejudiced blinders fall off his eyes a s far as Maan is concerned.

There is a feeling of "us" even though neither of us says anything on that level.

How perfect.😳
Private box. Ooh lala!!😉
And between Salman's movie and Maan, it is definitely Salman, Geet is thinking about. It is all about star power Maan babu😆

Hah!! he is keeping score against Salman and poor Salman doesn't even know about it🤣

Oh yeah the popcorn hold. I heartily approve of that one.
Haaye it is just palms and eyes meeting and I have goosebumps all over, yet again.😳

Such
beautiful emotions you have woven of first love Avi. So achingly tender. The deep awareness of ever move the other person's move, the sweaty palms, the hot and cold feeling... the uncontrolled desire to just touch and feel a little more of the other person...so, so lovely and nostalgic, I'm sure for most girls😳

Laxmi's muscle ki dukaan poster was totally dabbang😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
Ch 37
Shahenshah J got the royal ignore, from Mr. Dhabawal as Maallikaye phool was the sole focus of his admiration.🤣
Aww Shahenshah toh choclate boy nikla. 😆

Chocolate meri pappi unki...poor, poor Maan😆

Here he is trying to supress his baser urges of trying to kiss Geet and what not and the whole world is bussing her cheeks.😆

He is so adorable in his jealousy.
I see you brought a beautiful patriotic theme into the romantic mix
This is what i love about your writing Avi. How you seamlessly incorporate different ideas into the story, which if you look at individually, you feel taht these 2 could never be combined. But then you do it and it is perfect.😃

Loved that Flash Mob video you posted. I was laughing at how people were rushing forward. Apni janta ko tamasha dekhne ka kitna zyada shauk hai😆




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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh i dont have words now only this will work 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I feel so bad for I star. ..
Never end this story avi... I am addicted to your ff now... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
don't really know what to write... every word is loitering around in my head!!! chandan knowing the truth,NT's stubborness. maaneet convo maan saying true love never dies... on matter the distance true love finds you wherever you are... ah!! i knew it has to be Megha kabir's love interest, i couldn't think of geet somehow!!! I'm glad :) just one thought though i don't even know how to put this across dev-tara their in the most complicative situation!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome... i was all smiles through out this part :) :) so finally maan won over Salman ;) So black is indeed lucky for maan. All are Happy except for Kabir n Megha! Megha pretending to be happy!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my goodness... everyone is competing with maan from the khans to the dhabawala!!! purane yaadein taaza hogai with the dhaba scene :) thank you for keeping maaneet amongst us even even after the show is off air. superbly written :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
oye nakul has stuffed kidnapping idea into maan's brain unknownly though!!! Kabir Megha :) i could only smile. sometimes you can't stop yourself from doing the opposite ur mind says haina!! who was watching kabir now I'm thinking with hands on my chin!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avi yet again beautiful written!! for of the highlight of this part is geet-dev's convo :) Pari was a surprise to of!!! i always had one question which i forget to ask everytime i leave a comment dadi is a cid... didn't get to read much of dadi-maan i mean didn't dadi have a bit of doubt on maan's behaviour. Nakul is always confused with what happened to Maan Sir... i may be wrong in thinking so but it was just there at a corner of my mind!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
so maan thinks geet betrayed him!! who is Sameera? i know you mentioned her name before when dev visited for rakshabandhan but nothing more. Maan must not for get what he told about true love... because of those words she's still waiting for him!! I'm sure you have your ways n I'm will read them happily :) oh did NT get caught? why is geet not traceable?

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