The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 103

Originally posted by: Onir

Finally I have started reading all the pending parts here ... I know I'm super duper late but then glad that I at least started... 😃 Have been waiting so eagerly for some free time to catch up with all updates here...

part 39: I know I have 5 more parts pending 😊

Lovely part.. and indeed shades of love with varying depths... be it hurt, jealousy safety for the other, undying trust or ache from resistance... 👏 Loved it

Naina-Dev have a lot of self made barriers between them... especially Naina. I know she wants him safe but then pushing him away is hurting both more than what physical hurt would cause. I hope wherever she's planning to go she is safe... and Dev is able to safeguard her always.

Pari... what should I say... I guess I will reserve my judgement of her for later as I feel there's more to her and ... 😉

Geet and her trust on her love 😳👏 I was so happy and loved the lines form past that she has imbibed deep in her soul... true love is forever and that if your love is meant to be yours you will on day unite 👏 She has used Maan words for her and advised Dev similar to what Maan would have done for his brother... Dev was missing Maan but Geet somewhere was filling that place 😊

Enough of my bak-bak ... I have a lot of chapters to comment on 😆

Chapter 40... 😲😲 You really did leave it at a point where I just didn't want it to end

Originally posted by: dqno1

🤗 I missed this so much.

Yes, you have 5 more to read😃 and I will wait for you to catch up patiently.

Thanks Onir for being here.

I missed being here too ... for a moment I just wanted to read all but then I would never be able to comment 😆 And also I was feeling somewhat different today while comments... was feeling as though its been ages that I have commented 😆

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 40... 😲😲 You really did leave it at a point where I just didn't want it to end

Wow bin tere 👏 Indeed both brothers are in their own turmoil while their love are in their own misery and holding onto hope of true love. 😳

Dev is feeling uneasy... hope he reaches in time ... Naina. 😲 Oh my!!! Why on earth did she go there??? Suraj 😡 and his good for nothing goons 😡😡

Maan ... I guess the Locket was his last hope and he has felt rejected ...so much so that the bitterness has caused him to doubt his own words... " true love is forever"

I loved how you have centered it all around these 4 words 👏👏😳

Sameera...???? a new puzzle 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

I used the song to join both of their parts as it reflected the misery that they were going through.

I am glad you decided to read today because you will like what is coming..😃

About Sameera, it reminds me that there are teasers all through out which have more of the story so do read them too.

Thanks Onir.😃

Oh I skipped the teasers as I just wanted to skip all and just read all the parts 😉

ch35 - very emotional...commendable how u r keeping all the couples in the story moving and at the same time how their lives are getting intertwined with each other in some or the other way
ch36- dabbang Maan...chalo atleast he will not hate sallu now...love taakte rehte tumko song..too good a song and fits the update so well
ch 37 - rafta rafta dekho aank meri ladi hai
aankh jisse ladi hai woh paas mere khadi hai

love the dhaba outing...bechare geet ke romeos...maan ki aankhein hi kaafi hain unko bhagaane ke liye.

Originally posted by: newmoviefan

ch35 - very emotional...commendable how u r keeping all the couples in the story moving and at the same time how their lives are getting intertwined with each other in some or the other way
ch36- dabbang Maan...chalo atleast he will not hate sallu now...love taakte rehte tumko song..too good a song and fits the update so well
ch 37 - rafta rafta dekho aank meri ladi hai
aankh jisse ladi hai woh paas mere khadi hai

love the dhaba outing...bechare geet ke romeos...maan ki aankhein hi kaafi hain unko bhagaane ke liye.

Why is Maan feeling so dejected...who keeps letter in the bag?? He should have just directly told her!

Misunderstandings b/w mg :(( uff ... yeh pyaar

Maan and geet k bich misunderstandings... :( i hope these MUs gets clear soon...