The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 106

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 35-poonam and chandan part was heart wrenching.finally chandan saw the true face of his bhabhi.thank god Dev called and he was hospitalised immediatly.

dev and naintara part was a bit scary in the begining.i think brij and suraj are sure that naintara is going to visit chandan at the hospital and they can get her.yayyy dev saved her.she is soo stubborn.i think this time dev is not going to let her go with out an answer.

maan and geet part very well written.i loved the way maan answered geet's question.

kabir and megha part,i was glad that kabir let go of his emotions.even if it was for little time,he needs it.hope megha finds out about his problems and stands by him.
excellent song choice for the update.

part 36-loks like kabir is megha's hero,saving her from ragging on the first day of college.kabir is fighting his own demons and does not want megha to be effected by that.their face off was heart wrenching when kabir bluntly asked her to stay away from him.felt really sad for both.try as he may to stay away from her,still he was waiting for her at the theater.sad that megha missed seeing him.

loved geet and maan part.their love story is slowly progressing.they are getting comfortable with each other.lol maan keeping score of himself and salman was hilarious.
excellent song choise for the update.

part 37-lol maan and harpreet locking horns was hilarious. when pinky confronted maan in the earlier updates,he said that he wants to be just maan and not some maan sing khurana and today geet fulfilled his wish to be just maan .my fav lines from the update-
Chocolate meri, pappi unki!! Pappi chor kahin ke 🤣(lol maan getting jealous of a 4-5 yr olds)
the boy who comes with the food is looking at her for longer than he needs to. I glare at him and he quickly leaves after serving the food on our plates. 😆
Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi! (my fav line from the show)
excellent song choice.loved the video of flash mob in mumbai.

part 38-my my our jhalli bambi is dreaming about maan and that too a song sequence in egypt(not bad)
the way geet asked maan about choosing the restaurant and the way maan answered her question was very well written.hope these differences did not scare our bambi.

kabir and megha part-no matter how much kabir is trying to show his indifference,he always ends up doing what his heart wants.hope megha understands his turmoil and support him.i wonder who the man was, watching kabir.
maan and nakul part always make me laugh.my fav lines from the update-
I am walking back and forth in my room when my nemesis Nakul peeps in.(now maan is being too rude to our sweet nakul)
"Maan Sir, aap kidnapping ke baare mein soch rahe hai, hai na?" He starts falling in beat to my forward march, walking beside me.(only nakul can come up with such thinking)

part 39-wow what an update.looks like pari is not that innocent.she not only sensed the aloofness of dev and connected it with naintara,but she lied about talking to daadima about the event.
what is naintara up to.hope she doesn't end up in suraj trap.
OMG loved the conversation between geet and Dev.the way geet answerd dev question was too good.very well written.the song expresses the pain dev is going through.excellent song choice for the update.

part 40-omg naintara is caught by suraj men.dev's uneasyness and his intution that some thing is going to be bad was soo true.felt really sad for maan.i really don't want him to change.hope soon maan finds out the reason why geet could not come to the farewell.

thx for the updates,loved it.

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Posted: 11 years ago


hello Avi 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
dev-tara parts r written so brilliantly.. the song u chose is very much in sync with plight of dev
megha -kabir part is well too.. hope thy realize their preferences n get along soon
n ma maaneet loved them to the core.. everything is so beautifully n brilliantly written
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me feeling very bad 4 maan... But there may b surely a reason 4 her nt cmng... Lookng 4wrd 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously what all Chandan had gone and done? One night of his mistake cost him his life n Poonam's grief forever. Its really sad that he was so bloody blind in his family's so called love n image. Brij n Pammi kept filling both Chandan n Poonam's ears with all sort of wrong information n they believed it. Though i do felt for Chandan today but m angry at him too for all the obvious reasons. It was really hard to see Poonam begging for Tara her only happiness n someone who she can call hers n oly hers as rest all were snatched from her by Chandan, Brij n Pammi. Dev's timing was really good though for calling Chandan else Poonam still wouldnt have been able to do anything n Pammi nor Brij would have helped her knowing all long that Chandan might come to know their real faces. If the faces of his family n the touture they did on Poonam was a shocker, him knowing that he was actually a father in real sense unknown to him which his own family killed it just cos she was a girl would have cut his hearts to pieces.

I was actually glad that she heard him taking Chandan's name but the of course the rest of the things he said scared me. He suffered heart attack n yet he was taken by Brij in just a day? So did Brij come to know that Chandan now know their real faces? And why did he send Suraj n his heechman to Dr.Siddharth clinic? Back to D-T, so it was Dev who hired detective behind Tara when she felt someone is keeping an eye on her for weeks. Wonder what will be her reaction when she comes to know about it? But then se should be glad that this same detectivegiri of Dev has saved her life n nick of the time. Tara is stubborn that is for sure but it would be interesting to see how Dev makes her speak n share her past with him. Liked how he stood like a pillar for her when in other hand she is trying to keep him away from all this mess to save his life.

So Geet saw the harsh reality of life through Maithili n her suicide attempt had shaken her beyond limits. Maan's restlessness n urge to protect her n finally when he couldnt see her sobbing n breaking down n hugged her to himself was so touching. Man truly never cries but here seeing Geet shed tears endlessly he couldnt help but feel his own eyes getting moist. And her question related to Love n his answer to her n that true never dies remembering his parents was so beautifully written. He instantly feared that she may have feelings for Kabir but the moment he saw she was waiting with genuine confusion he let go off his own fears n helped her out. I love how he immediately promises himself that he would never do anything which Geet wouldnt like or hurt her. Like here he promised seeing her tears he will always keep her happy n in Mussoorrie trip he instantly promised he wont drink ever as she dint like smell of it. His character is really growing on me.


Its Megha who is Kabir's angel and one more couple in the tale, wonder what story they will offer.







OMG this Maan gets jealous of every aira gera, ab Salman ko bhi nahi chodha ufff. But haayee i liked how he tried insulting Sallu gained some angry glares n at last made the girls with the surprise. He is such a momma's boy, the small glimspes we got related to Maan-Mother duo were adorable. And this Kabir story reminded me so much of Geet's helplessness. She too tried pushing Maan when she had responsibilities of Darji n his health. Same here Kabir too has reponsibitilies of himself n his mother n now after thinking that Megha is Maan's sister he would atually keep distance but seeing Megha all shattered n hurt, hurt me. When he will come to know she is an orphan he is gonna feel more worse of himself.

Who wants to watch Dabangg n Salman when Maaneet jaise couple is around. Maan's character n the lover boy in him just makes me grin like anything, he again wore black hadh hai. His dreams n silent competition with Salman n not allowing the person who brought the refeshment invade in the private room n disturbing them or him just watching Geet ignoring the movie completely n trying getting her attention when he feels she is giving Sallu some bhaav by holding her hand in popcorn tub, every single gesture were adorable beyond limit. And banda sach mei bold ho raha hai, tried kissing her hands but shy Geet dint let him n i liked how he immediately stood up to go thinking she might be feelings discomfortable but Geet surprises him by holding his hands n munda happily weaves more dreams with Geet. His assumptions has always been wrong n khotta always misunderstands Geet, no wonder he did that with Dev n Geet too in future. Anyways toh Geet forgot Sallu miya n only Maan has filled in her senses n he wins over Sallu too by getting Geet to have a dinner with him. I feel like dancing on this, Sallu bhi kya yaad rakhne ki cheej hai? Maan is the best. But Maan ke liye toh Dabangg has become his most favorite film n why not after all Geet ke saath ki pehli film hai that too in a private room with all the romance over flowing from both the sides.

So Kabir did came but Megha dint notice him, sad. Feeling terrible to see these two souls fighting over their feelings for each other cos of the situations they are in.






If Geet is epitome of Innocence then Maan is epitome of possessiveness. He cant even take a normal dhabewala flirt with his Geet. My fault if he can feel jealous by an harmless actor toh yeh toh dhabewala toh saamne aake besharmon ki tarah chance maar raha tha, how can Maan be quite at this? ROFL That bill spliting thing was so much like Geet, perfect with her character which makes her really unique. Maan bhi happy by being accepted as only Maan n not MSK n more over he himself choses to be like Maan n not MSK with his Geet and that is what is more special about this relationship. But i liked how he used his godhe se bhi tez dodnewala brain n tricked Geet n dint let her pay. And uff iski possessiveness is becoming a serious matter now, munda is not happy with the pappi chor bacche too. Makes me wonder will he have problem when his own kids will kiss his Geet? Silly i know but kya karu Maan makes me wonder many idiotic things. Anyhow that Lassi scene was superb n with pics it was all the more special. And Maan feeling that he should have brought Geet to more private place was actually romantic. Banda is really finding it difficult now to control on his desires which are increasing each passing minute. He finally wiping that kids kiss this time just had me laughing. And at the end the dance just with a perfect song made independence update more interesting.






The way Geet came to know about the differences b/w their statuses n influence was something i really dint imagined this way to be. That one reality check for Geet n everything has crumble down n she is forced to see the differences b/w them which he never even considered in the first place. She doesnt even know how much Maan craves n wants to be a simple n normal Maan who loves his girl dearly for what she is n only she can make him feel special which none can even if they bring the world down at his feet. Thought she had withdrawn she still couldnt help but dream about Maan n remember the dinner date but the prespective to look at it has changed completely. And there goes Maan's restlessness seeing her withdrawing suddenly but this time he dint assume things n may be cos of that he was still happy n dreaming.

If the differences b/w Maaneet is the status, nature n being nice n compassionate is b/w Megha-Kabir. True he felt something crush in him when he behaves rudely with her and then to add to his worry n guilt overhears about someone being suffered from Mild Stroke n he assumes it to be Megha n then feels relief knowing its not her but someone else n it soon gets erases as again anger rushes in for her not eating for two days but the way he ends up lashing out on her was really too much n no wonder he compared himself with his own father who was this harsh n spat words like daggers n was even worse. He keeps giving her pain n she keeps healing even a small scrape.

Now i like this Maan more who comes n straight away ask her with authority and clears the confusion n misunderstanding he is having in his head. Knowing Geet is a shy person she wont do it so of course its him who have to keep taking that step n loved how he genuienly cleared her confusions over the differences of their statuses and in return ended up getting her smile back with his jokes n singing around. Wish he was this way when he saw Dev n Geet together. Anyways now he has got limited time to spend with his Geet as London Uni ka bulawa aaya hai. And Nakul tadka at the end was awesome.






Tara again tried meeting Chandan n it seems she n he had really shared a good bond in past but this makes me wonder did she not know what he did to her mother and also that her mother hated him once? Will she too hate him for what all he did to Poonam? And i really really felt bad for Dev, even after her being so stubborn last night he came n stayed calmed n normal with her n dint showed his hurt but Tara had other plans n she pushed him away with some super harsh words n lashed out completely. But she isnt wrong at her place if she thinks she is just saving Dev from falling into the pits of hell. And in this she dint even mind him spending time with Pari thoug it did prickered her heart but she is ready to take all that given he is safe. That Pari is becoming a danger now, she needs to see the real world n come out of her princess land, she is so getting on my nerves for being a total chipkoo. And in all this he even ignored the feeling he got when the detectative said that he wont be able to keep an eye on Tara uppar se Tara has some other things on her mind.

Dev n Geet's little talk gave a positive feeling to the otherwise upsetting update. May be cos it has Maan's words i dont know but i liked how Geet though being shaken a bit still kept faith n trust in Maan's words n his love which he never confessed but his eyes which spoke volumes to her were more than enough for her to keep going. And Dev noticing Geet quite n aloof in their otherwise cheerful moments says how much he cares for her. Wonder would he feel Maan connection in Geet's words or he will let it pass again?






So Dev was reminded of Maan when Geet spoke those words. Glad he called the detective agency again n got to know that none are keeping track on Tara. And this worried him n even after keeping calm n composed face his anxiousness gave away in front of the commissioner and took his help to find Geet. So he has two people at his hands to find out now, Geet n Tara. Wonder which place did she go to just make a phone call to Devika Masi? Am i missing something here? Where exactly is she that she got caught by Suraj's heechmen?

What did Maan assume now? Yeh banda mujhe pagal kar dega sacchi. I dont what letter he is talking about but i do remember Adi talking to Pinky over phone that there was some problem while returning from Hoshiyarpur to delhi for the party n so they couldnt reach it n Maan assumed that she dint love him? Khotta kahika, ullu ka pattha. More than his assumptions what is hurting me is his hurt n what all he went through for those 2 long years killing the innocent Maan who use to stand for hours in rain just to see her. Kya kar diya hai Maan ne? Its sad that the words he himself gave to Geet saying Love Never Dies failed to keep his belief in them n contrary to that Geet survived only on those words of his. Wah re. Sameera the name itself makes me dislike the character already as this name is in every second FF of Maaneet n me being a possessive Maaneet fan end up disliking her even if she is a positive character in some FF. I know that is super stupid of me but cant help. Hopefully she is good here. What relationship she is sharing with Maan will see. He may be hurt n think his Geet betrayed him but i dont think he would fall in love again so may be Sameera is just a friend?






-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
^Sanjana: I wish u could see the wide grin on my face when I read your comments. You notice everything! It feels so good to find someone whe reads with as much interest as I have written.
Thank you so much🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved every bit of this thread
be it maan and geets dhhaba romance or nakul giving advice of kidnapping
pari is not so innocent as she looks but then love makes it bad or good
maan thought that geet betrays him and ther she is all waiting for him to return,curoius to know what happened between them
tara is found by surajs ganag again,how stupid of her to roam alone like this and that to night when she knows about the danger
hope dev saves her in time
kabir loves megha and here i thought that he loves geet but thank god nothing of that sort happens
kabir is pushing her away because of his condition
i dont know what is this pushing away and all be it tara or kabir
why not for once both couple sit and talk and clear all these confusions
avi you had amazing choice in song selections for each update
they just fit perfectly with the situation
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally chandan came to know what his family did to him
kabir 7 megha like each other...but kabir avoiding her
dev have kept detectives to follow nt
maan in london...thinking geet betrayed him...eagerly waiting to know when he gave the letter & locket
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love to read the whole part of this thread
Akhir chandan ke saamne apni family ke true face aa hi gaye poonam & chandan convo was heart wrenching
Brij aur suraj ko lagta hai ki tara chandan se milne hospital me aaygi aur wo usse trap kar lenge lekin thank god dev ne uske piche detective laga rakha tha aur wo sahi time par tara ko bacha leta hai
Geet & maan part was awesome jis tarah geet ke sawalo ka jawab maan deta hai succi is maan mujhe paagal bana diya hai
Maan was jealous to salmaan he was very possasive about geet kabir megha part was too good
Nakul aur maan jab bhi aate haste2 pet dard hone lagta hai aapne jis bariki se har kirdar ko likha hai har seen ko picture aur song ke saath pesh kiya hai aapki taaif ke liye mere pas sabd nahi hai you are such a amazing writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello Avi... I am really sorry for not reverting to your previous reply... Also, I apologize for not commenting for so long... I got a little busy and used to read your story through my cell phone while traveling to and from work... I hate to type from my cell phone and today that I opened up my lappy after three weeks... I am happy to comment on all the posts that I have read all through these weeks...
I just finished reading Chapter 40... Again I would say --- Fabulous Story Writing... The emotions, the story, the characters and their story... the way it progresses it keeps you bonded... 👏👏👏👏 Just love the way you write...
Untill now I was able to read all the parts... Looks like I havent reached the part where I would need the password yet?... Or did I miss any part?

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