KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#2,NEXT THREAD ADDED

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

awqeaome

grt part

sab theek ho gaya

ant bhala to sab bhala

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

asum update
Just completely speechless honestly ..
What a turning point..
Finally Geet accept Maan nd now they r going maan's place.
This is d bestest update in dis ff...

Edited by Kawan - 11 years ago

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Awsommmiiieee i already said na 1c he shwd hr beast at best with somthing physical on hr he'll feel guilty n turn more considred not all mushy-mushy datz not him but ya prefrbly undrstnd hr value more & dat hesitation in him wud b gonne...i luvd it yaar it strtd with traumtizd geet which only made maan xtrmly guilty & den she hit him n ran off but back of hr head it only screamd dat she did wrng & whn he woke up all ready 2 punish hr...well wht she did was on pure panicd scard instincts...well chalo n itz equalz he gotta his li9 & she hittd him so equalz topic closd n glad he did dat too...hr stuck in swamp & saving hr made him realiz da true meaning of mate...dey r all set 4 his home twn & geet too somwhr accptd him unconciously i guess n now trying 2 adjust with things...she gotta idea of how rich he is...mwah shree u rock! Nxt chp sooon..:) #PS: My usual ques i'll txt u in fb..;)

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samidsamid

@samidsamid

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

awsm updt...n long 1...love d way...u shw...so many emo...lyk htred.fear to loose sm1,guilt..realisation..n all...it ws power pack epi...

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Just loved it geet try to escape but sucess nahi hoyee maaneet in maan hometown waiting 4 next

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geetmerly

@geetmerly

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

good chp

well written

wait & see how geet will accept the new home

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

ossum update

that was a roller coaster ride

hatred changed totally

n began to accept the realisation..

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

awesome part
geet tried to escape but cant
you have shown every emotion so beautifully
maaneet going to maan hometown

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

I still hate Maan for what he did

Geet is awesum

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Superb update

The way you have described about Maan state after last incident was perfect..

the way he realised tat she is just not his mate but has become a part of his life where he cant think his life without her..

and than geet faking and coming into his arms and hurting him to such an extent tat she runs away

she ran but she was even feeling guilty

but i liked the way maan came behind her.. forgetting tat she hit him

as he wanted to save her and see her safe.. and he did.. as last

and their transformation.. their love grew more.. and they came closer

now waiting to see how geet copes up with his clan