KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)#2,NEXT THREAD ADDED

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

sorry in delayed response but i read it on your blog right away and didn't get on IF for a while 😕
anyway- loved the update. such a turning point for maan
here he truly understood the bond- i can't wait to actually read this change

btw, you hinted at it in this update about his transformation to his wolf avatar but i can't wait till geet sees that and i'm reallly looking forward to seeing her reaction to it...it's going to be AWESOME!!

edit:
one thing, if i can be so brazen to say, while i loved the change,acceptance of mate in truest terms, in maan which was beautifully written, i thought geet's acceptance of maan was little abrupt. why? because he saved her? that leads to forgiveness/gratefulness not love/acceptance. to me, it seemed a little too soon

Edited by rutu83 - 12 years ago

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Wht a wonderful, wonderful update. Long, crisp and true to its name'turning point' And trust me when u say turning point it came up with buttery softness rather than a sharp turn. Really awesome. This one is worth publishing, frankly. With a supernatural theme and such an exquisite description. This one is toatally worth being binded and sold as a book. Though the story started a bit less lusture compared to where it is today with too much plot weaving, the pace it has now taken.!! Phenomenal! Awesome.
'smell the pungent stench of fear, acidic that of unadulterated hate'

writing at its best!! 😊

Btw..I wud have really liked had Maan suffered a bit more for violating her. Personal opinion. Though being a beast, his dilemma btwn remorse and feeling nothing was captured superbly as well.

Edited by sarita21992 - 12 years ago

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

gr8 update bt is it the beggining of the actual story nw?

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Yeah since its conception is a supernatural I find human & beastly parts in equation ! I guess situations make a person forgive sins easily like Geet did for Maan . Nice part

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

uff their fighting is never ending !

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

what an update dear. brilliant!!!!!!!!

whatever he did with geet was not acceptable by any girl n then geet just hit him with a vase so that she can get away from his clutches but unfortunately the one whom she was running away was d only one who save her life every time

this incident had completely changed their views about each-other n now they both r heading to maan's family

let see how geet is going to adjust there

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Beautiful part

They both know each other's importance now =)

Their anguish was wonderfully portrayed by u =)

Can't wait until the next part!

N yea we have been aware that this would be a supernatural story and have accepted it as that so even if something doesn't make sense it's ok, however I don't think u have written anything thus far which could be completely illogical

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Brilliant update..
Geet hit maan n ran away!!! :O
But disaster queen fell in trap again!!!
Bechare maan kitna tensed ho Gaya tha...
does geet excepted maan?
Finally bechari ko kapre to mila...
Lolzzz...

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Though only time would tell, but I wanted to ask if Maan is different from humans when it comes to making love with his 'mate' and rearing kids? He is a wolf inside. And such stories generally have something like this, a monstrous side in the act. an abnormal gestation period of a day or week 😆 Geet is way too fragile, to handle such stuff.I am worried!