Ch 29
Maan and Geet are so adorable. Their whole current relationship is like the game of petal plucking.😆
He loves me, he loves me not.
and
She loves me, she loves me not.
Each incident is like a flower. Sometimes he ends ups with an extra petal of misunderstanding, called she loves me not, sometimes she ends up with that extra petal. Their emotions are so tender and so very uncertain.
Distance makes the heart grow fonder, but it also tries to sow seeds of doubt.
As it is their relationship is not on a solid footing. Now there is this new Megha. Yeh kaun hai.
Megha ka situation toh clear ho gaya lets see who else comes in.
Geet is so cute hiding behind the pillar and peeking at Maan. 😳
There is so much intensity in their love, even if it is an almost silent love. The restraint that they show towards each other, only underlines it more.😳
Woh Maan ka Geet ko rang lagana and then having her do the same to him, shows burning emotions behind the restraint.
The brother got hi on alcohol and had my heart pounding, now lets see what this one does with bhang in his system. In fact it's inebriation for both of them this time. Geet is hi on bhang too.
Should I say bring on the firewoks?😉
Precap looks very very interesting
Ch 30
Rajdhani pe chadke, Geet is tryimg to make a fruit and milk shake while making sure the doodhwala smells good for his wife, while wearing bolo nahi Polo. That was the gist of the chapter.🤣
Maan ke romance ka kabada kar diya. She is so close, his heat is racing, she is giving him mesmezing looks and kissing his collar bone, rajdhanis are mutiplyig right and left ...and...dhadam...Oye Shyamlal the doodhwala. Oh god I laughed so hard I think I cracked my jaw. Taras aa gaya mujhe bechare Maan par.🤣
"ladkiyan aissi hi hoti hai Maan. Chote chote sapne, choti choti aashayein."
How true is that. It reminded me of Kenny Rogers, 'Buy Me a Rose.'
The lyrics are just everyday common place things, but the overall gist of the song is the reality.
He works hard to give her all he thinks she wants
A three car garage, her own credit cards
He pulls in late to wake her up with a kiss good night
If he could only read her mind, she'd say:
Buy me a rose, call me from work
Open a door for me, what would it hurt
Show me you love me by the look in your eyes
These are the little things I need the most in my life
These small bits of very relatable, casual observations that I find in almost all your updates is what I absolutely love about your stories. These are the things that keep us firmly grounded, even as we float in the air with the larger than life romance.😃
I loved the Giit equation and the fact that she realizes, that the way he calls her is special.
Holi ka nasha, yeh nazdikiya, aur uff yeh beqarari. I loved how you wrote the whole romance between them. You most certainly are the queen of romance.😳
Yeh update padhke toh mera jiya dhadak dhadak gaya.
Ch 31
Haaye Phantom of The Opera and Gerard Butler😉... who Raoul?😆
Never understood how she could choose whitewashed Raoul over the complex and ruined man...and I'm not talking about his face here...He just fascinated, well except for his homicidal tendencies.🤢
I love, love, love "Music of the Night"
If there is a song that caresses like a lover than it is this one.
Also love the Phantom of the Opera version by Sara Brightman and Antonio Banderas.
Banderas gives a sexy spanish flavor to the voice of the Phantom.
Gosh I could gush on and on, but I think I'll shut up about POTO now and get back to the update.
"Suraj hota hai toh Tara nahi dikhayi deta, hai na. Wrong match. Suraj Tara. Wrong. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta".
Aww, he is so darned adorable.
But damn is Suraj supposedly the Phantom? Nooo... I refuse to accept that.😲
Ahh!! Tara!! How sad. For all her outward brusque mannerisms he is a nurturer by nature. It can be seen in her behaviour towards Geet as well her thought process of protecting Dev. She is also one strong woman.
Damn Suraj the creep, now he's eyeing Pari. Dev may have shades of Raoul, but this guy is definitely not the Phantom.🤢
But even Dev is a far richer color than Raoul. He is a well rounded dynamic character. He has strong family bonds too and that can be seen from the way he wants to go to the to rejuvenate his weary soul.
When you feel too much, you feel so very vulnerable and Dev being unable to show his face to even his twin, as she shares his innermost feelings, shows how very deeply he is feeling. I loved this small detailing Avi.
Ha!Ha! Ha! I-Sta and Maan is trying to figure out who the hell is I-sta and then Nakul ading the Dhobi's wife to the mix. Oh God!!!🤣
So Dev has finally met Tara's Chandan Papa.
Yay!! So you do like the Phantom better. I knew our Avi would never be a Raoul shipper😆
You mah Dahling have been redeemed.😆
Ch 32
Haaye the chapter ha barely started and my heart is already going Va-Va- Voom. 😳
Our little Giit is finally crawling out of her shy shell and making a bold move-----at least for her----- Tauba tauba tauba!! Inn dono ke feelings ab kabu mein nahi reh pa rahe hain.
Yes Maan definitely, maybe, pehapssome Karelas might help you😆
God why is she so adorable!! Khud apni pol khol di. Bechara Maan ab karela will also not help him.
Ooh hot feelings and cold showers and and poor Nakul.😆
Haila Kabir😲
I knew he was going to come back after the Mussoorie introduction.
Is he going to be a positive or negative character...I wonder.😕
P.S Naureen's sher was beautiful, as always😃
Ch 33
Ok, let me start by saying, I've always been prejudiced against Chandan. But now I am doubting myself and giving him the benefit of doubt. A poetic man who named the company so very intriguingly with his wife's name can't be that bad a person can he?
Loved how they are talking about the mother and daughter, unknown to each other.
Both are making a last ditch effort to gain something precious. Loved how you used this situation ot create a bond between them. Just superb👏
Oh my God I can clearly smell the foul play as I am reading this further. Damn Brij for destroying so many lives.
So there was indeed a lovely bond between Tara and her stepfather.
Damn that is one messed up sad past story they all have. He is fully redeemed in my books. I hope he will somehow find a way to win Poonam back.😭
I love this bull dog attitude of Dev's. he never gives up. He is now trying to play the "J" card on Tara and looks like Geet is a accomplice 😆
I love the word play Avi. 'Devarji'. Nice foreshadowing right there😆
Ch 34
Ah no!!!!! God damn it!! This chapter is was very close to my heart. I know somebody who has gone through such abuse from her husband and the sad part is, even after all these years she is still with him for the sake of her kids.Every time i see that man I just want to kill him. He is a so called very respected doctor in the community. Ha what a joke.
And fiction so very often emulates facts. I hate the impotent Brij in this chapter, but it is her husband that makes my blood boil and digusts me completely. So she, Maithili is Kabir's mother.
Do you know I once read somewhere that parent's rarely name their daughter's after Sita, coz they don't want them to bear a life of suffering as Sita had. I wonder if you named her Maithili unconciously or for this reason.
So the angel is Geet. I should have known. A jaded person like Kabir would naturally be attracted to the goodness in Geet. This shows that his character is redeemable and that he has good in him too. I am hoping to find Kabir a positive character.
Maan is tron between duty and Love.
Haaye one of my absolute favorite songs. Just absolutely perfect for TL ke M&G. 😳
Aur adrak wali chai and ek doosre ka jhoota had my heart pounding. Haaye Avi aisa gaana select karogi aur aise kisse likhogi toh humara kya haal hoga zara socho.😳
The first half made me mad, the second half just soothed me and I melted completely.😳
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