The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED

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suyoha

@suyoha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1101

hmm all parts are nice

dev meeting chandan and dev coming back with new zeal

chandan is not aware of the games played by pammi and brij

i was right that brij tricked him and he is responsible for that night

chandan is not aware of tara not being in home,what happens when he came to know

geet is so sweet and innocent everyone is her fan be it maan ,dev or even kabir

geet has the capability of turning a bad into good

maan and geets budding love story is awesome,now that geet is free from her responsibility she can give a chance to maan

i love ther chupke chupke romance

devs and maan interection about tara and then maan calling home to know about the girl and maan and nakuls talk is hilarious

now when dev is trying different way of coming closer to tara hope he gets success in that and tara realises it that its only dev who can save her from those monsters

Edited by suyoha - 11 years ago

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pureheart2012

@pureheart2012

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#1102

😆finally devdecdd, love nakuls caring caharacter😃 oh and maans control!!!!! Haiye, aagey kya hoga!!

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1103

Kya mast updates tha👍🏼

Liking this nakul 😆 bechara maan pareshaan hogaya hai iss nakul se

Dev trying to forget nt...but can't...he told maan about i-star in drunken state...maan assumed it as ishita ...nakul told dhobi ki biwi🤣

Dev & chandan convo was good...

Poor kabir ki mom

Maaneet part tho

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1104

All parts are awesome
Dev ka chandan se milna kahani ko ek nayi disa me le jayga
Chandan ko brij aur pammi ke plan ke bare me pata nahi hai usse to ye bhi nahi pata ki taara ke saath kya ho raha hai
Geet itni innocent aur naive hai har koi uska deewana ho gaya hai
Ilove the way jis tarah aapne geet aur maan ki ankahi baato discribe kiya hai
I love the seen b/w maan & dev both brothers bonding are amazing
Nakul aur maan ka convo hosh uda dene wala tha

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#1105

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-
Kya mast updates tha👍🏼
Liking this nakul 😆 bechara maan pareshaan hogaya hai iss nakul se
Dev trying to forget nt...but can't...he told maan about i-star in drunken state...maan assumed it as ishita ...nakul told dhobi ki biwi🤣
Dev & chandan convo was good...
Poor kabir ki mom
Maaneet part tho

Thanks Padma😭

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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1106

maan have cold and geet could not resist helping I don't think in cold we drink orange juce but adrak ki chai I love to drink when I get cold and the maithlys character is imotional I like all the diifrent storys of diifrent charactes in this story and I get really imotion reading it and it leave an impact for long time your story is very diffrent I love it.