The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 110

words are yours 😃

This whole character of Maan and his words are inspired by your poetry 😳

Meri story mein tumhara bohut bada contribution hai Naureen 🤗

iss se zyaada aur kya maang sakta hai koi 😃 am blessed!🤗

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part 29-geet and maan reunion scene was beautifully written(it was 1 of my fav maneet scene from the show)they potrayed maans longing and geet jelousy very well.i felt sorry for megha when i came to know that she is orphan,but happy that she has maan as her brother.thank god geet's misunderstanding is taken care of.loved the way he made geet put tilak on his forehead and on her cheek(haiii)

dev is a true devil.he made his brother drink bhang even when he is in another country.excellent song choice.

part 30- Bhang is a preparation from the leaves and flowers of the cannabis plant, added to a beverage during Holi in northern India.

Not recommended by the author.(this line is like watching a smoke and alcohol warning on the screen 🤣)

my fav lines in the update-

"Maan, train aa rahi hai. Hum kahi ja rahe hai?"

"Rajdhani hogi. Kitni fast hai. Dhak dhak, dhak dhak(lol only geet can come up with such words,she is so cute)

#Haan Geet, tum aas paas hoti ho toh Rajdhani aati hai#

#Quiet thi toh bilkul normal lagti thi!! Maan tumhe pagal ladki se pyaar ho gaya hai kya?# 😆

#What!! Does she really not realize that she spent the last few hours in my arms? Everything we said, everything we did?#, 😲

sab maan ke pyar ke dushman banrahehe.bechara he cannot peacefully enjoy his time with his jaan.pehle Ms.Iyer phir pinky ab shyamlal.rofl.bechara nakul is off the hook for now.excellent song choice for the update

part 31-OMG the first part was nail biting suspense.thank god naintara escaped from that devil.naintara truly loves dev,she does not want brij or suraj to know about dev.so to protect him she is acting all indifferent.felt really sad for both.

loved the brothers bonding scene.finally dev spilled all infront of maan.maan as a true brother listened to dev's words and try to find the person responsible for it.maan and nakul scenes are a fresh breath of air in this serious update.their conversation is always hilarious 🤣

part 32-OMG what happened to our bholi bhali bambi yaar.in her intoxicated state she spilled all her desires infront of maan.i loved the line u wrote how does she know it's polo her darji only used old spice 😆

poor maan kya se kya bangaya yaar hamare bambi ki chakkar mei.is he the same shy saint who we were familiar with in the begining of the story.she will be the death of him.

my fav lines in the update-

Wait! How did she know it was Polo? Darji only used Old Spice! 😆

Sudhar ja Geet!! Tujhe na sheher ki hawa lag gayi hai. Kya kya sochne lag gayi hai. Besharam!

Poor Nakul had been banned from entering his room. (us bechare ke kya galti)

He had even stopped listening to the morning radio show, when the first song in the morning was "Bheege hoth tere, pyaasa dil mera". (no one would want to hear that song first thing in the morning.geez what is the world comming to 😛)

Currently he was trying word association, replacing the word Geet with the word karela. (bechara kya se kya hogaya)

Karela, karela, karela... he kept mumbling to himself but the pink lip gloss was beckoning him. Just once.. 🤣

part 33-felt really sad for chandan.he blindly trusted his brother and bhabhi.he is not a bad person,i am sure brij must have spiked his drink which led to disaster.i really don't want poonam to hate him that much.he is also in desperate need of love.hope they clear the misunderstandings.

looks like our devu is back.i so missed him and his singing.finally naintara know the relation between dev and geet.geet is such an innocent cutie pie.

part 34-OMG kabir's dad is really sick.felt really sorry for maithili.she went through a lot.sumeet is a disgrace to call himself her husband.he did not fulfil any of the marriage vowes.

kabir is really having a very hard time.hope he does not go in the wrong direction.

maan and geet part was very well written.finally our maan is becoming bold in expressing his feelings.haiyee our jhalli geet and her talking to her babaji and herself.excellent song choice for the update.my fav line in the update-

What was with her and cramped spaces?

"Hai O Rabba, chai ki zaroorat hai par peene ke badle sawal jawab dekh lo inke. Waise bhi yeh Delhi walon ko kaun samajh sakta hai, hai na Babaji 😆

thx for the updates,loved it.

Its so true distance does brings two hearts closer and here the distance made both of them craving n longing for each other. Despite Maan being unhappy that she dint call him he is happy to know that her Darji is fine and his help from Dr.Siddharth has lessen her stress and she has scored well again with the help of notes. But also fears that she may not come back again n had left him seeing Megha at her place n couldnt help but wonder whether their journey was just this much. And I really wonder what will be her reaction when she will finally come to know that its him all along helping her without expecting anything return. And then when she actually returns both just keeps staring at each other noticing all the small changes in their appeacrances. And that hug actually felt like back to where both belong, in each other embraces, their home. And now that she doesnt have much worries in her plate, neither about Darji's health nor about money which was sorted by Dr.Sidhharth againw ith his idea of keeping their rrom for rent she doesnt mind noticing him to heart content and feel him around her and gives all the details to Sona ma'am without hesitating with Maan's presence and Maan having no other way to know about her keeps standing n eavesdrooping there shamelessly. And m so glad that Geet finally felt those feelings in her seeing Megha in her place in library and also in Maan's place. But the innocent soul she is she for once decides to keep Maan first for once n distance herself from him for his good but little does she knows that he craves for her one glance over him and that one hug has given more hopes and dreams for seeing them together. Her not knowing Maan n MSK are same person is actually good cos may be then the situations would get more complicated and she would bring the difference in status b/w them which Maan doesnt care about and enjoyes being just her Maan. And the timing Geet came to know about the actual relationship b/w Megha n Maan was perfect. And the moment she comes to know the truth she her gives herself a chance n right again to look at him to to her hearts content and take in all his features. The feelings which were once alien to her she is now feeling them only cos of the one Maan who has touched her so deeply by his actions n gestures. Jealousy, possessiveness, belonging and more over feeling of being a Woman of her man. And the song gave a whole new emotion to the update n made it more beautiful. Holi though is festival of colors is always festival for lovers too, says many people confess their feelings on this festival and many hearts comes closer. The gesture by Maan by making Geet put the tikka on his forehead n his hestitancy of touching her n so he colored her with her own thumb just touched my heart. That was 'the' moment for me in the whole update. And Dev's mischieviousness had got the better result i guess, unknowningly played cupid. Geet n Maan both talli cos of the thandai n the chui mui Geet dared to throw color at Maan's face. And haayee that bahon mei uthana by Maan was dreamy again.

Holi update was like a laughing roit to me. It was more than hilarious n i was giggling or either grinning till the end. Gosh the innocent Geet dint even know what effect she has on him n he was on a ride completely. When she said that she dint want to be put down cos of the drawziness she felt i had the same thought Maan had, bas chala toh puri zindagi Geet ko bahon mei rakhega with no complaints. It was true she hardly speaks and when today when she did cos of the bhaang effect she made me nuts. His fast hearts beats giving her the feelings of her being in rajdhani or asking him about his perfume for her dhudhwala which concerned Maan more than herand he instantly grew jealous of stinky dhudhwala too which was cute of Maan, or she hearing Polo as bolo bolo, her advicing him for having 2 fruits daily, and unkowingly speaking about her dreams about having a man who will take her on bike rides, help and take care of her which Maan had already done to her since start which she wont acknowledge in her conscious state just gave away of how innocent she is and possess a heart of a child. And the desires n craving she evoked in him with her innocent gestures n actions and every time he controlled it just made me respect him more. He felt the urge to do everything a man in love will feels but he also knew that she should be respected n without her acceptance he wont it. Him tieing her dupatta his wrist and later kissing on her forehead giving up on his desire and feeling like a thief touched me. His every actions, care, concerns, thoughts just make me respect him more. The way he made his staff run for Bournvita and get her Pizza which is a weird combo but tell himself that he should get used to it says he has already given so much into this unknown relation. And the moments which she doesnt even remember have given him some new hopes n dreams n some sleepless nights which he is ready to have happily. And at last the Nakul tadka was just amazing, banda shocks him by wishing back and like a obeydient lover asks him to give him 2 fruits daily. And safely keeping his kurta which has her lipstick mark along with the piece of her dupatta which she has tied around his head n having just gives away how much he cherishes each n every moment with her. The ending was perfect him dreaming of her n making her song of his life just like her name was really beautiful. Every moment n dreams of his are coming true just like some reward for his all waiting, craving, longings n unconditional love he showers on her.

Woah what an update n so long too. Though i wasnt aware of that Phantom Of Opera but after reading the bit detailing u gave at the start of the update i absolutely loved the connection u showed it with this update n Dev-Tara story. Suraj is the finace with whom Brij wanted Tara to get married n he burned her with the lighter he carries every time. Such a leech and wonder what he would do with Pari now? And loved how Tara runned from the clutches of Suraj and hide in Dev's car trunk. She is all ready to fight her demons alone but will not let a scratch harm her Dev n in this if she was to push him with her coldness she dint hesistant for once. Even though pushing him away and breaking his heart yet again she couldnt help but feel pain for giving him this pain but then she again chides herself saying that this pain she can endure but the hurt Suraj n Brij might cause him once they comes to know of his presence in her life. But even in all panic i loved how she kept her cool and thought logically and came to a conclusion that finding her is not that easy n she just has to keep Dev away for his own good and him despite of trying to forget her n keeping distance for 28 days, one incident all his defences were down n he like a protective lover ran after her saying she need not worry n he is there to help her out and but Tara being Tara rudely pushes him n he couldnt help but feel hurt n decides to spend time with her family who loves him and would welcome him. And that Suraj n Tara are not a match and the smile it cause on Tara's face was really cute, even in his bit drunken state he speaks logics which her family couldnt even think. The scene b/w Maan n Dev was beautifully written. Maan saw what even Annie couldnt in spite of Dev n Anni being like same in nature n more jovial. The quite Maan saw the pain in Dev's eyes even in all the crowd and brought him home n got him to speak his heart. I so loved it when Dev asked Maan to turn away n then shared his pain in bits n pieces which of course went half out of head of Maan's yet he dint wait for a second and immiediately made calls for all the details from Adi and Nakul. In all this painful update Nakul really came as a breath of fresh air, his sillyness brought a smile but irritated Maan further n he finally hung up on him when he knew Nakul was of no use for him. And finally Dev Khuarana is back with a bang, one play and he bounces back n is ready to take all for his lady love n dertiminded to make her his. Now that Chandan has met Dev the story is getting more interesting.

Okay so her unconscious mind gave her the dreams of the happenings in Maan's office and the things he did with her only in her dream it was she who did all that, from touching his head, moving hands in his hairs, toching cheeks n chin n finally when she came to his lips she had the same thing running in her mind which Maan had n controlled the urged too. And then all her blabberings n chiding herself for shehar ki hawa lag gayi n besharam n all that n blushing remembering about her dream n his features of how he looked in his kurta just made her more cute n innocent. She for the first time had the same desires in her which a normal girl would have after being in love. And if Geet is having dreams Maan kaise piche reh sakta hai? He toh even remember every innocent acts of her to make him go bonkers toh of course his dreams would be a lot more X-rated. And again Nakul had to be the one disturbing him, this makes me really pray for him that whenever Maaneet gets married in this FF Nakul knows not to disturb his Maan baba. LMAO. And OMG the Bambi took all his avoiding as hers doing all those touching sessions with him. Even when she is not at fault she is went to say sorry just cos she couldnt take him averting his gaze from her. And okay i was surprised to know that she knew that Maan's eyes followed her since the first day of her college. But then to think of it why he wouldnt avoid her? Where ever that poor man goes reminds him of Geet. And of course the office where first he had dreamt about having a dance with her in b/w his meetings when they were like strangers, he has now spent the best holi and some real unintentional intimacy there so how would he to be keep his cool n act normal? One look at her face and his gaze goes to her lips n he lose it again no wonder he kept her name as karela still that dint work. And he who once dying to spend moments in one room with her even with her avoiding him was now was finding it difficult to perform a small act of picking his bag n fleeing? All thanks to Holi n his dreams, poor Maan. She was really testing his tolerance to control when she came n did that little act of hers to be even. She is the epitome of innocence in this FF and torturing Maan with all her gestures. Ab pata nahi banda kabhi apne zindagi mei soh payega ya nahi after this day. And i guess in all this the one who suffers the most is Nakul who doesnt even know why is he getting blasted at.

Dev is truly a charmer no one could actually be sad if he is around. He is one who spread positivity around in spite of he himself being sad. The small interaction b/w Dev n Chandan and again Dev saying 'Poonam ka Chaand' n associating the name like no one did before just makes him a more intellectual n shows how sharp he is at knowing person, though he doesnt know the history yet he got the name of the company like no one did just like he said Suraj n Tara are no match cos stars are seen when Sun has risen. The way the characters are getting linked n interlinked says there is going to be some firework in further updates. And i dont know why i do feel bad for Chandan but i also feel he deserved it. His intention may be to protect Poonam from her own mother who was getting her married to some old man but what he did is unforgiveable too. Thoug i wonder how come he suddenly turnen into an animal that night n raped Poonam when he was going to promise her a life which she would have gradually lived happily with? Did Brij spike his juice too with whatever his caner contents? And Pammi is equally to blamed for all the problems b/w Poonam-Chanchan as she kept giving him all wrong informations n filled his brain with all non sense. But still how he be so blind to his surroundings n never once guess the intentions of Brij n Pammi? I simply refuse to believe that one can be so stupid n could be manipulated.

And here Dev had turned the tables again by making his presence feel with everything he do. Tara again under Dev's team, her table in his cabin and if this was not enough he has started to come in their apartment every evening with Geet and make her see that sides of his which was still unaware of. Him playing with kids, making food, singing songs is again breaking her resolve n dreaming t spend such moments with him are again taking place. Good going Dev i so love u for that. She couldnt even help but lean back on him when he came from her back to do something on her laptop. She is again getting in the spell of him and in the attempt to be away from him she ended up getting things done by Geet. But Geet being the innocent soul she dint understood her but m glad at least she came to know that Geet-Dev are like brother sisters and that Dev veerji n Deverji connection was smart. Unknown to both of them Dev is actually going to be Geet's Deverji.

So this is the story behind Kabir for lying to Geet cos he was in a need of money. Desparate times called for desparate actions. And if my heart cried for Poonam, Maithili's story was no less painful. Her own husband was like a mad man beating her, dounting her, keeping a track on her, and wanting her to be the best in everything she does n still finding faults. Him beating his own son when he scores less marks in his studies was enough to say what his mentally was. Never did he tried to help his son out, ke baba what are the issues with studies n let me clear it out for u nopes but only knew how to go n beat the boy n his mother that he started getting spoiled completely. And i wonder what happen with Maithili out there in College was Brij's doing? I dont know why but just the thought occured knowing he roams around college to get his next prey. And even here the innocent Geet that she is easily forgave Kabir for his lies n in fact helped him out regarding his mother n indeed became the Angel of not only his mother's life but his too.

Same with Maan too, desparate times, desparate actions. The one who was avoiding her for all the dreams he was having of hers, now fears he may lose her if he really doesnt try this time to get her to talking, spending time with him, knowing each other as dadima has reminded him of going his parents dreams. The restlessness within him when he thinks on what she thinks about him n what all she feels about him got the better out of him. And even in all this restlessness he just took my heart away for putting her first even in this desparates times. I liked how he said she would set the pace of their relationship and she would decide what n how they would proceed if he at alls confess his feelings to her. He is a Gem truly. And Maaneet moment was sooo dreamy, it was like i was really watching a fairytale happening in front of me. Geet who was angry at him for avoiding her couldnt help but worry when he came sneezing along with Prof.Shetty and on prof. advice Maan did chance pe dance and asked where he would get Adrak wali Chai all knwoing she herself carries thermos wih her in cold season. And liked how authoratively she took his hands n made way to pantry n got him tea from her thermos n he did nothing but stare at her like always. But Maan aajkal jyada smart ho gaya hai, he wanted to have his chai from his beloved pyaar se n so he tricked her n she innocent like always was fooled too n in matter of second started her blabberings about Vitamins n Orange n Maan stopped her by pulling that cup from him by putting his hands on her, bande ke advances badh gaye hai, good. And i so agree, she is no less confusing, baat karti hai toh she stares at floor n baat nahi karni hoti toh she talks non stop, jhalli Geet. And what a question by Maan, superaaa. If he cant drink her jhootha as she is a gair then how did she drink the same tea when he too was meant to be a gair for her? I liked how Maan put her in fix n this reminded me of show again when Maan eats food from Geet's plate in outhouse scene. Haayee kya din the woh, outhouse scenes were the best moments for all maaneetians. And then when he himself explained that when she could drink his jhootha tea how could he not after all they are even by her saying only was again 'awww' moment. He himself asked the question n himself answered it too though his own questions were unanswered yet he felt them answered with the eye talking n her blushing when he hold her dupatta n came to closer to her n both drawning in each other's eyes and the pics did all the magic. Grrr that prof broke the dreamy scene but m happy for Maaneet.

-Sanjana!