The Locket (8), MG FF, thread 9 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 109

Avi... the 1st thing i do as soon i i woke up is to read ch 33 inside my covers ofcourse tat one advantage reading ff's on phone ;) so dev is all set with his target now. geet is full of innocence. i suddenly have this urge to read an update with all 4 together!!! I'm sure you would have written but don't know how far or how close am i to read it!!! oh now NT feeling someone's eyes on her, is it dev or someone else is watching her!!!

kabir!!! i did not think something close to what u've written abt him. maithily so she was the victim of that disgusting man called Brij. according to me men like kabir dad r as disgusting as brij... anyways tat's about kabir. maaneet i see there's a lot of improvements ;) so few more wks n maan would take off to London. i hope he would be able to speak his thoughts to giit for once!!!

cant wait to read more on the next thread

me sad maan n geet not together one in london n one in india

Maan wid Salman's touch 😃 I mean mere rang me rangne wali 😉
Finally she came back, off with all the tensions 😃 though initially Megha added to woes but then the reality popped up leaving her shocked n then made her expressingly-lovey-dovey 😳 Maan was equally stunned as her, but for different reason ! Of being rewarded of her glancce at him which later turned into perfect gaze 😉 The unexpected hug on the stairs was beauty ❤️ Pictures were the cherry on top 😉 He made her feel completely new about her own self 😳 Megha is such a sweet entry , I lyk her 😃

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak Gaya ❤️ 😉 Kya fit chapter tha, majja aagaya hugsss 😃
Was laughing lyk anything 😆 Raajdhaani was never expected to come into view lyk this 😆 😆 😆 Dudhwala shyamlaal wearing Polo 😆 It was romantic n its own sweet way 😳 i literally laughed throughout 😆 Do teen sentences were to mind blowing lyk "Ye shyamlaal ne shaadi kyun ki meri holi bigaad raha hai" 🤣 n this "Quiet thi to bilkul normal lagti thi, Maan tumhe pagal ladki se pyar hogaya hai"🤣 🤣 🤣
the poetry fitted so perfectly 😃 the credit goes to u, as u selected it 😃
Laughing riot yet romantic n cute 😳
To be honest Dev n his I-star were missed 😳

Chapter 31 : Lovely as alwayz.. The detailling was perfect ! suraj is such a 🤬 the typical bare baap ki bigri hui aulaad 😡 I hate such men wid all the power I've in me 🤬 nevertheless !
Some good happened too, lyk how it gave strength to Naina when she saw them beating Dev 😳 Love gives such power to raise the voice against the situations n people u r afraid of 😃 👏 Then she felt safe being in his vicinity. Loved when Dev said, "Suraj Tara wrong" loved the whole feel Naina had ,hearing this 😳 Dev"s Adorable 😃
I simply loved the bonding between the twins 😃 The need to protect his younger brother n to solve his problems was beautiful to read 😳 Their relationship sounded so beautiful to me, lyk they depended on each other when in problem 😃 Loved the cen when both the brothers were sitting back to back n then Dev poured it all to his loving brother 😳 Dev meets Chandan 😕 lets see what's in store !

cant wait to read next update

Chapter 33 😃
first of all, what a perfect choice of poetry Avi 👏 It wouldn't have been more perfect 😃
Aye jaan-e-tamanna, rooh-e-rawan,
Ek paak mohabbat hai tumse,
Is waqt khudara dur raho,
Jazbaat ki neeyyat theek nhi Wah ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ I couldn't resist mentioning this 😳
coming to the mushy mushy Maaneetilicious chapter [:$
Geet's condition reminds me of a song line Rang biranga paani pi k, seedhi saadhi kudi bigar gai 😆 She wouldn't believe-if told- what all she did when intoxicated 😆 already dreaming 😉 He must b looking the handsomest of all in white kurta 😳
Em all the more fan of Maan , lurvveeesss him 😳 after the library encounter 😆 The toughest tym for Maan, till date 😆 Karela Karela Karela 😆 😆 😆

O mere dil k chain 😃
I liked it how Maan decided to confront her n then leave all for her decide 😃
Sneezing Maan would b so cute 😆 😆 May b I've lost it 😆
Ghair ka jhoota...fab dialogues Mazaa aagaya 👏
cute cribbing of Geet n Maan was amused 😆

coming to Maitheli I felt bad
Her character was beautifully defined Avi 👏
Lemme say Avi, when u take itt in your hands there's never a confusion left for the reader 👏 Bechara Kabir , all his childhood plus youth is ruined by his own father 🤬