FOUR SHOT : CHOD KE NA JAANA final part pg 16 nov 27

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

CONGRATS for new story...

don't know about other 3 couples...yah I know their serial but never seen other than Maaneet...but as u say I will take them as random couples...

continue soon...

hehehhe thanks di

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice concept

waiting for its updates

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Rumana Begum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Mind blowing start dear...

Loved it a lottt...

Congrats for new story's...

Eagerly waiting for next...

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow dear you shave so many of these stories
how do you come up with so many of different ideas
i just dont know the last pair

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome concept
looking forward to read it
know only maaneet and arjun arohi

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meena..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: suhaaana
kyunki maaneet ko screen space kam milegana

aise hai to tumhe main zaroor pitaongi😉😆

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

~CHOD KE NAA JAANA~

part 1

why do it always hurt seeing your love going away from you.. If she cries than it hurts if she shouts then it pains but if she backs out from the relation than it pains most but why... Love is a feeling that grows with time and understanding but the understanding and compatibility what about the things which are necessary to get her...

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they were the weirdest persons on the entire planet that there spouses say... If he was fire than she was ice or if she was fire than he was hers ice to cool her down...

four young and mature couples .. They were happy in their life... Maan and geet in delhi , arjun and arohi in shimla , rajveer and simran in haryana and asad and zoya in bhopal... But they lacked what the thing is called compatibility...

maan always had found it difficult to express himself his words were glued to his mouth but she , she cannot stay without saying .. A complete chatterbox.. Maan ki geet that he fondly calls her.. Though her past experience had left a bad imprint on her life still he was there for her... He knew that she is pregnant with someone's child she was being cheated and now working with him.. He didnt knew how did he fell in love with her geet.. The girl he met at hoshiarpur the first time was actually the last time that he had lost himself to her but as it says the realisation comes later...

maan was at the darga he was confused with his emotions and those feelings but seeing her it was cleared she had came just for him.. Her condition he had recently came to know the day she had mummered in her sleep about the betrayal she faced but she still stopped saying herself the name of the culprit... His emotions and feelings didnt count till she will not acknowledge the amount of pain she is bearing..

maan sir... He hear her shouting.. She was huffing and her face was filled with swaet.. His concern and all the insticts instantly wake up seeing her running like maniacs.. She was pregnant and was running like this.. He looked certainly in rage which was masked with his concern filled eyes.. Maan hold her hand and pulled her towards himself... Tear forming in her eyes made him scare and aware of her pain...

maan tried to soothe her pain but she sobbed and sobbed... Her eyes instanntly locked with his and she hid herself in him like protecting herself... Maan got what he wanted his hands enveloped the girl who was there for him trying to protect her...

geet : kyun chale gaye aap... Bataiye mujhe .. Boliye naa. Jaante hain kitni pareshaan thi main...

maan : geet chod ke toh tum mujhe jaa rahi thi na...

the words froze and she just hid in his embrace...

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it was deadly cold in shimla she was crying holding herself.. Their lives were dishelved.. Arjun had lied to her .. He didnt even tried to think about her why did he.. He wasnt a criminal no he never was but why did he had to lie to her...

arohi cried she hid her face in her palms crying on his sacrifice and her family's betrayal.. Her daddu did all.. He had made her believe tht arjun was not the perfect man for her he was a criminal...

arjun crying loudly...

arohi : mera arjun bekasoor hai.. Ma papa aapne galat kiya hai.. Main arjun ko aapne aap se dur nahi jaane doongi.. Arjun you cant leave your arohi like this.. She looked at those divorce papers and tear them off...

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she was modern and cultured but he was traditional and reserved...
zoya looked at her fiance he was mr akdu ahmed khan and for her , jahanpanah..
asad looked at zoya who was going away from him she was right he doesnt have any right to call her his.. He was already called off their nikaah and now she couldnt have faith on him... She will go away from him , bahut door, chod ke chali jayegi...

asad looked helpless he was having no clue how to make her believe that it was all for the best.. He tried to catch her but she jerked his hands crying...

zoya : mr khan its all over... Ab aapko mujh jaisi ladki se nikaah nahi karna padega .. ALLAH HAFIZ mr khan... Bhul jaiyega ki koi zoya thi aapki zindagi me kabhi...
asad : zoya ruk jaiye aap aise nahi jaa sakti.. Aap mujhe chodkar nahi jaa sakti zoya...
but she left...

******** haryana ka chota sa gaanv..*******

(rajveer and simran)
rajveer looked at his wife clad in traditional wear she had tricked him and married him..
raj veer : madamji.. Aap yahan se chali jaiye.. Main aapse pyar nahi karta aur agar tau ko pata chala ki aap wahi simran hai jiske karan me singapore se yahan aaya tha toh bahut kuch galat ho jayega..

simran : rajveer main jaanti hun ki mujhe aise jhut bolkar tumse shaadi nahi karni chahiye thi par me tumse bahut pyar karti hun islie jaa rahi hun...

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next part link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3663398/four-shot-chod-ke-na-jaana-final-part-pg-16-nov-27?pn=6

next destination DELHI
readers review awaited

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago