FOUR SHOT : CHOD KE NA JAANA final part pg 16 nov 27 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: IshitaIrani


<div>why asad left her😲

that will say in next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
maaneet portiom was superb
geet cheated by dev and going away from maan
arjun arohi getting divorced
arjun asad maan meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
what is wrong with them
letting their girls get away from them
wait what a plan
kidnap yes but then what will you guys do
hope the girls come up with better solution man
cause these guys are hopeless for sure
aww that was fun for sure
cant wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Everyone is searching their partners.. 😆 But Maan ke paas Geet hain.. When someone is close to u , U just ignore them & when they go away.. U came to know their value.. Asad,Maan Arjun convo..Nice one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Everyone is searching their partners.. 😆 But Maan ke paas Geet hain.. When someone is close to u , U just ignore them & when they go away.. U came to know their value.. Asad,Maan Arjun convo..Nice one..



heheh i know thats the main thing they need to realise
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: chavvi16

what is wrong with them

letting their girls get away from them
wait what a plan
kidnap yes but then what will you guys do
hope the girls come up with better solution man
cause these guys are hopeless for sure
aww that was fun for sure
cant wait for more



thanks chavvi will update next part

today only
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57


oho saare boys are planing to kidnap their girls...

so Maan knows that Geet is pregnant...

awesome update...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
~CHOD KE NAA JAANA~

part 3

maan was looking at arjun with sheer anger if geet was not enough to make him amd than this guy is making him to loose his self control and hit himself...
maan : are you mad or what you are thinking to kidnap your own wife and may i may why this idea is right now revolving your pea sized brain.. No wonder arohi is giving you divorce..
asad : guys , are we all having same girlfriend /wife problems... He was still in a fix waiting for arjun to stop his banter and maan to cool down.. He is actually having two master piece in the name of friends and the third one is still missing..
arjun : maan , maine kam se kam shadi toh kar li tere wali to tujhe bhav bhi deti.. Dekh kaisi shakal bana rakhi hai...aur ise mr asad ahmad khan ko dekho apni secretary ko dhoondne bechara bhopal se aaya hai.. Are yr itna kaam kyun karwata hai bechari se ki use manane aana pade...
asad : for god sake arjun zoya is my fiance not my secretary.. I was about to get married to her...
arjun : maan dekh he is himself so confused pehle he was chanting miss farooqui miss farooqui ab zoya ho gayi.. Arjun came towards asad and put his hand sympathically on his shoulder ..
arjun : dekh asad we all know that these girls are always bound to get us in trouble par inke liye apna mental balance khona achi baat thodi naa hai..
asad was getting frustated he looked at maan who signaled him to carry on.. He wont be changed..
asad : now dont blame me arjun if i will support arohi for divorcing you.. Tujh jaise half mad ke saath rehte rehte she will be mad for sure i will definitely support her...
maan : guys you carry on i have to leave geet ka koi bahrosa nahi hai kya kab kar de and she is very probe to mishap..
arjun : ab ye geet kon hai.. Teri bandi..
asad : now answer this nutshell maine kaha tha dont sent him back to his family look what they have done.. No wonder they are making him scapegoat in their illlegal dealings.. Arjun do you know that your father is using your name while doing all the underworld dealings when you are innocent.. And whom you married daughter of chandigarh commissioner wo bhi jhooth bolkar no wonder she is angry.. I am surprised that she didnt killed you till now..
maan : agrred atleast we are having genuine problems that our girls are troubling us but in your case you are making her to leave you.. Why dont you stay here and start your own business .. Best business scholl ki degree hai tere pass dammit you are a MBA ..
arjun : but i cant leave dj (arjun's daadi)
maan : why dont yu call her here.. Daadima bhi kuch hojayengi dj se milkar...
asad : i am going to meet daadi and dev too before leaving...
maan's blood boil listening to dev's name... Asad and arjun looked at his change of expressions..
arjun : dont tell me that tere us bhai ne phir kuch kiya..
maan narrated the part of his gambling and debt.. How daadi supported him and he had a fight with her.. Later he cleared all his debts...
asad : maan there's something dev is hiding for sure.. Wo itna shareef nahi hai..
arjun: tera ye bhai ek number ka k*** hai.. Dekh lena he must have been in wanted list too..
maan : i dont know guys but the best thing that happened with me at hoshiarpur was geet... But she is complicated aur bas mujhe chod kar jaane ke bahane dhoondti hai..
asad and arjun : jaroor tere gusse ki wajah se..
maan looked at duo they were after a long time were discussing their personal lives.. And now he knew that his friends can defintely help him..
maan : haan nahi pasand thi wo mujhe par she is not like others.. She left her family kuch toh hai jise wo chupa rahi hai.. She doesnt know that i know that she is pregnant.. But isme uski kya galti hai...
arjun : saale uski nahi teri galti hai that she is pregnant no wonder tune usse shaadi se mana kiya hoga ya kuch kaha hoga... Sharam nahi aati tujhe.. Arjun was going on and on.. Maan glared him but he didnt had any effect..
asad : arjun stop or i am going..
arjun: mujhe nahi isse kuch bata ... He had made a girl pregnant and now when she is going away from him he is making efforts to stop her.. Abey kya kiya hai.. Dont tell me you used your power to get her.. Bechari..
maan : ho gaya ya kuch baaki hai.. Tujh jasie dost hona toh dushman ki toh jaroorat hi nahi hai..
maan : i dont know whats her past but she was married.. Aur phir kya hua kisi ko nahi pata..
arjun : then ask her na..
maan : like she will tell me.. Yar i have saw those feelings in her eyes par she is not accepting.. I want to marry her have her and her child a secured life ..
asad : will you accept her child maan..
maan : wo bacha geet ka hai.. Isliye i have already accepted the baby..
arjun and asad smiled..
arjun : phir kis baat ki der mana le use.. Hamari bhi bhabhiji aajayengi...
continued below
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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geet was managing the files in her cabin.. She looked at maan's cabin he was still absent .. She knew that he was having a merger dael with Mr khan of bhopal.. So she stayed away from him knowing his temper and her clumsiness.. She didnt want to be responsible for loss in his career and in KC..
geet : babaji main maan sir se jitna door rahun utna hi acha hai.. Unka paas aana na unke liye na hi mere liye acha hai.. Geet looked at the time she was having an appointment with the doctor for the first time.. But she needed to inform him at first he is her boss and she need to make him know the reason too..
geet : ab maan sir ko kya bataun.. Geet kept her hand on her stomach to gain some strength.. She wiped the tears which were about to flow of her eyes.. She knew that betraying him will break him if she bears the pain of seperation than its fine but seeing him suffer she wont be able to forgive her... This is love which makes you to think of him before your self...

geet went out of the cabin and searched for maan.. She met adi in the middle who was getting freaked out as maan had told him to get the deal papers ready today itself..
geet stopped him and asked..
geet : adi sir maan sir kahan hain.. Mujhe kahin jana hai.. I need half day today..
adi stammered as he did..
adi : ge..et maan sir is in conference room with the client ..
geet nodded before she could go adi told her that the meeting is over..
geet st: Geet meeting toh khatam ho gayi hai toh tu sir ko bata sakti hai.. Take permission and go...
geet entered the conference room and saw the three men sitting in the room looking tired , she was confused. Maan saw geet she was staring at asad and arjun and jealosuly seeped in the great MSK .. First sign of loving your lady.. He immediately came towards her and covered her view..
geet : sir hatiye dekhiye clients are looking tired let me ask for refreshments.. Maan looked at his friends and ask them to sit upright and straight.. They imeediately did..
maan : geet what are you doing here.. Kuch kaam tha..
geet : haan..before she could say anything arjun came and pulled maan aside..
arjun : toh ye geet hain..
maan : with greeted teeth..
maan : arjun haan ye geet hai.. My SECRETARY... He completed before arjun could do something..
asad too came to rescue maan ..
geet : woh sir i need to go somewhere i need half day..
maan : geet where are you going alone come i will drop you even i am leaving dadima ne bulaya... And even asad and arjun are coming..
asad : yes , maan so me and arjun are leaving will meet you at mansion.. He quickly escaped making maan and geet alone and a frowing arjun...
maan : come lets go geet.. , geet came to her senses.. And immediately back out..
geet : nahi aap jao mujhe bahut kaam hai.. I will go after some time..
maan : geet as far as i know i am your boss and without me here what are you going to do..
geet was having no chances to escape today.. But she have to for her baby..
geet : sir please i am not a child whom you will look after... I can take care of myself.. Maan knew there wont be any chances or reasons he could stop her..
maan : fine but be at mansion at 5 there a deal will be signed at outhouse office i want you there.. And geet with your disaster prone antics you actually need a babysitter..
maan left making her to understand and later fume..

later geet was coming from the hospital she couldnt meet the doctor as the appointment was cancelled when she was returning she ws not feeling well and looked around to find something or someone but she coulndt when two hands hold her.. It was arohi from one side and zoya from other they looked at each other and made her steady ..
simran offered her water and geet was now feeling good...
geet looked at the person to thank . When she found arohi with two other girls..
arohi had recognised geet and she looked at her and hug her friend..
arohi : kaisi hai aur aise kya kar rahi hai akele geet...
zoya /simran : arohi how come you here...
geet looked at other two girls and thanked them the four make their way towards a nearby cafe.. Geet was looking scared and timid though it was more of the effect duw to her lost appetite..
arohi : geet , meet simran and zoya.. Ye dono mere friends hain we were togther at newyork bataya tha na maine.. Geet hardly registered anything and smiled..
arohi : and she is geet meri best friend but we lost our touch..the girls smiled..
zoya : ALLAH miyan.. Wow now i got a new girl to be called as friend.. Geet i am zoya farooki..
simran : hi geet i am siran.. You can call me simi..

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next last part pg 16
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

omg di... I m 19 so tell me

im 21 so no di😉

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