FOUR SHOT : CHOD KE NA JAANA final part pg 16 nov 27

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: meena..
awesoome dear
loved it
who cheated geet yaar
maan loving geet after knowing truth also
and other couples part i didnt read
u knoow why😉
maneet ka part is small yaar
waiting for next part
continue soon
waise wats ur age i need to decide whether i need to call u di or by name lolzz

omg di... I m 19 so tell me

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suhaaana

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~CHOD KE NA JAANA~

part 2

why it pains in LOVE ?????

was it her mistake that she was cheated by that spineless creature dev... Her family got her married and she just like any ordinary girl connected her life and dreams with him but what she got in return the betrayal of the lifetime by him... Geet was thinking how her life changed in these two months she had met her savior maan.. And now her maan sir.. He is her guide , teacher and a true friend who is helping her in every small path difficult part in her life but what is she doing by hiding the most important phase of her life.. She being a single mother and was hiding it the same...

geet was in maan's arm she was mutely crying he had affected her in the most worst way of her life .. Zindagi ban gaye hai wo... Aur zindagi ko chodkar jaana marne ke barabar hai...

maan was getting tensed and worried... She was continously crying hiding him in his embrace.. Worry etched his senses words froze in his mouth...

maan : geet.. Idar dekho...

but she refused .. It was just a nano second when she parted from him his brows twitched with worry as she started going away from him.. She was still crying and to his worry his geet was not in a position to take any kind of stress...

maaan : geet... Ruko geet...

geet : dur rahiye mujhse... Paas mat aaiyega sir.. Main bardaasht nahi kar paungi... Jaane dijiye mujhe ye dard ab saha nahi jaata maan...

thin line of tear clouded in his eyes.. Many things were changed from the day he had met her she has changed from a innocent naive girl to a hurt unwed mother..least he knew that his own sibling was responsible for her destroyed state...

geet was running aimlessly n the busy road she would have been knocked off if he wouldnt have pulled her , she was distrauted and lifeless in his arms...

he didnt said anything just look her withdrawn self in his arms and took her with him.. Words were no or less were definitely not for her.. She was on the state of loosing more than gaining something but she had to understand that past experiences and needed to let go inorder to embrace a coming happiness...

arohi had informed her parents that she will meet the lawyer at delhi high court but least they know waht she was upto...
arjun was angry and frustated.. He was alone his so called parents or say the masters who had brought him up were actually repsonsible for his mislead life...

arjun was sitting on the bar with his hands gripping the scotch... He was drinking since last two hours his eyes clouded with her mirage... Hoow they have fought how he had married her in the mandap kidnapping her groom he had actually proved that he was the son of the underworld don and had taken his revenge clearly from the commissioner on his dad's command by first kidnapping arohi and then marrying her... But least he knew that all this would have lead her to become his life
arjun looked at the glass and hold it , his words were slow and poisonous though but guilt filled...

arjun : arjun you love her.. Dammit you love your wife phir kyun wo sab jooth bola.. Why didnt you told her that it was all dad's paln tumne sirf usse shaadi ki thi aur phir pyaar karne lage... Why didnt you told her that you are the illegitimate child of mr rudra singhania... Kyun rulaya use arjun... Nafrat karti hai tumse nafrat...

maan took her to his room she was not in her right set of mind but he was... He very gently made her lie on the bed she was staring at him and when he tried to go away she didnt let him...

arjun who had also got to know about their divorce made a sudden call...

maan was standing in his study analysing her behaviour and worry... When his trance was broken by his cell..
it was a unknown number.. And he knew who would call him from chandigarh ...

arjun : maan... I need your help...

maan sensed some similar emotions in his voice...

maan : arjun come to delhi...

asad was preparing to leave to delhi he was having an important merger with khurana's in delhi.. Though zoya had left the day itself but he was still in a hope that some miracle would happen and everything would be fine least he knew that he need to put some vigilance and need to learn how to win his love...

simran was going back to singapore when she collided with someone... She was in her traditinal haryanvi clothes and heard the similar voices...

zoya : ALLAH MIYA whats wrong with you cant you see and walk...

simran looked at her...

simran : excuse me...

zoya looked at simran like she had seen any bhoot...

zoya : simi... Is that you... ALLAH MIYA ye kya ho gaya hai... Wait wait is that you are changed because of that gaanv ka rajveer... What do you called him.. Yes yes gaanv ka chora...

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Rajveer looked at his father who had been his strength till now had suddenly stopped talking to him..

rajveer : bapu madamji ka yahan se chale jaana hi sabke liye acha hai...

father : rajveer simi ki madad maine ki thi tujhse shaadi kawane me uski koi galti nahi thi.. Wo tujhse pyaar karti thi isliye sab kuch chodkar yahan rehne ke lie bhi taiyaar ho gai.. Aur tu.. Apne tau ki ek baat ke khtir apni biwi ko apne se door kar raha hai.. Agar nahi karta tha usse pyar toh kyun nahi ki kisi gaanv ki gawar chori se shaadi.. Simran tere lie apni saari khwahishen chodka aai thi.. Aur tune use apne se hi door kar diya...

rajveer was feeling giluty he actually loved his madamji to death but when his family and his tau's words are considered then he forget what is right.. He was still in a shock that simran the girl who irked him most first fell in love with him and then she dared to marry him lying to all that she is illeterate but the truth was different she was well educated and brought up in singapore...

rajveer : abhi toh madamji delhi pahunchi hongi.. Unhe wapas jaane se rokna hoga...

asad had landed in delhi unknown to him that miss farooqui was also her...
arohi was coming to the court she had made uo her mind to teach all a good lesson including that moron arjun...

maan was in the conference hall with asad all were tensed up with the project but maan was worried for geet and asd for zoya...

the deal was concluded with no inputs from both the sides the staff left leaving the two friends alone...

they would have been start talking when the intruder came... Arjun strightly barged in conference room...and saw his to friends who were looking at him confused...

maan : ye kya hai arjun...

arjun looked at two with no expression just worry...

arjun : tum dono ko mera ek kaam karna hai... Till i get a third man...

asad : arjun what are you doing here...

maan : he need help .. Par kya arjun..

arjun : kidnap arohi or she will divorce me... My life is messed up guys...

maan : and what should i do to keep geet... Kidnap her too...

arjun : haan aur nahi to kya...

asad : saare pagal ek jagah... He thought...
asad : guys i am leaving mujhe miss farooqui ko doondna hai...

arjun : kon teri secretary use kyun doondhna hai nai rakh lena...

maan : shut up arjun... Pagal ho gaye ho... Ya jyada pi rakhi hai...

arjun : tum dono kisi kaam ke nahi ho.. Ab raj aur uske tau se help leni padegi...

maan and asad rolled their eyes...

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next girls meet... Again pagalpanti shuru..

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tracks : ghsp original track

for rajveer and simran : they r from lifeok's show its similar like ddlj

asad zoya : QH . . . Similar to geet story..( gul's show)

arjun arohi : mixture of kmh 1 and kmh 2

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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

maaneet ke parts was fab

mera guess sahi tha

geet is cheated by dev 😡 and is pregnant just as ghsp😭

geet want to go away from maan😭

maan rok lo use

arjun-arohi getting divorce????

arjun called maan

how did he know maan??????

arjun-maan-asad going to meet😉

asad didnt stop zoya

why did zoya left him????

allah miya zoya and simran know each-other

zoya is too much

rajveer gaanv ka chora😆😆😆

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

rajveer left simran😭

i have to read the summary of this serial as i dont know about them😆😆😆

rajveer going to stop her😉

chalo kisi ek ka to dimag chala😆😆😆

maan-asad-raj-arjun r friends😆😆😆

geet-arohi-simi-zoya r too friends kya????😆😉😆

arjun giving ideas to kidnap their respective patner😆

arjun is going to take help from raj

girls meeting

cant wait

as all r bombs to dhamaka to pura hoga😆

zoya-allah miya(Sayari bala)

geet-hey babaji(chatterbox)

simi-modern gori

arohi-dhamaka

cont soon

commented on part 1 too

check it and do reply😉

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

how is asad-zoya story similar to geet????????????????

rajveer-simran like ddlj but raj is gaanv ka chora

raj from ddlj was not gaanv ka chora😆😆😆

dont mind just ask to clear confusion

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: IshitaIrani
how is asad-zoya story similar to geet????????????????
rajveer-simran like ddlj but raj is gaanv ka chora

raj from ddlj was not gaanv ka chora😆😆😆

dont mind just ask to clear confusion

qh of gul so kaisa hoga ... Simi is from abroad this time... Girls ke baare me will reveal in next part