FOUR SHOT : CHOD KE NA JAANA final part pg 16 nov 27

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Superb updates. Loved the way the characters were interwoven into the story with the girls and boys showing different sides to the story. Fab job as always. Loved it.

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Superb update

finally everything was sorted out between all the couple

ofcourse maan's kiss to geet was best then the confession

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mani24

@mani24

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

hey di loved this new OS of urs it was so beautiful aur di especially our maaneet were hamesha ki tarah wonderful di the lines tht u have written were really telling us the whole story aur by reading it I just enjoyed it to bits di jaldi se apna net theek karo me dying to read ur other stories di eagerly waiting for the updates😳

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

I rly liked ur 4 shot.U wrote a nice story balancing all d 4 couples.loved d pics too.Liked maanet confesson.loved all d 4 boys & girls' friendship.but wish u cud have shown d other couples' reunion also in detail

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

wow lovely short story 😊
finally all the pairs had a happy ending 😊

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latecomer

@latecomer

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Great suhana with so many couple you still manage to rock...
loved them all...

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

finally read all the parts , lovely concept bringing all characters under one story

loed the story

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Awsome updates Suhi
all couples in one roof.. 😆
but you manage all very skillfully.
Maan accept the baby wow.
All found their right match and happy wala ending 👏
superbbb OS sweety