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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: ardentfitzcy
Nisha di bade din baad deedar huye aapke..
Kabhi kabhi aati hai aap
Jhalak dikha kar
Phir tanhai chod jaati hai

Ye toh batati jaaye kam se kam
Haal kaisa hai janab ka

HUm Hai Iss Pal Yahan

Jaane Ho Kaal Kaha😆

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#892

Originally posted by: Susegad

HUm Hai Iss Pal Yahan
Jaane Ho Kaal Kaha😆

hum mile na mile

rahegi sada yeh
pyar ki dastaan 🤗

running and giving zor ki jhappis

Nisha gir gayi 😆

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: dqno1

hum mile na mile

rahegi sada yeh
pyar ki dastaan 🤗

running and giving zor ki jhappis

Nisha gir gayi 😆

Nisha giregi toh it will be like Atlas dropping Earth off his shoulder.

Door door tak goonj uthegi, prui dharti hil jaayegi🤣

Phir bhi I never say no to jhappies.

They are the awesomest freebies that I adore.😳

So here's one right back at you🤗

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ramarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#894

beautiful update ji!!!!!!!!!!
just what i was waiting for😆
maan asking geet to go out with him...dreamy😃

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fantasy..4me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#895

GO OUT WITH ME😆

UHH Maan asking Geet for a DATE😉😳...HAAYE So Sweet.😳

Tanvi is geet's online friend DREAMER😊 first shooting star n then dreamer ... does it take to much to be this creative??????😲

Tanvi is such a lovely character fun loving sweet ,love her chemistry with Geet . She is aware about Maan n Geet "KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI" secret😉😳.

👏 for u.LOVE U

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Some lines form Lord Alfred Tennyson's, A Lover's Tale that are so very befitting for Sameer and Naina.

My heart has never ached more than it has for this doomed tale of fictional lovers.

Where Love could walk with banish'd Hope no more?

Love's arms were wreath'd about the neck of Hope,
And Hope kiss'd Love, and Love drew in her breath
In that close kiss, and drank her whisper'd tales.
They said that Love would die when Hope was gone,
And Love mourn'd long, and sorrow'd after Hope;
At last she sought out Memory, and they trod
The same old paths where Love had walk'd with Hope,
And Memory fed the soul of Love with tears.

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xolfiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Amazing story I just loved it thank u for continuing I thought its going to b incomplete :(

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: Susegad
Some lines form Lord Alfred Tennyson's, A Lover's Tale that are so very befitting for Sameer and Naina.

My heart has never ached more than it has for this doomed tale of fictional lovers.

Where Love could walk with banish'd Hope no more?

Love's arms were wreath'd about the neck of Hope,
And Hope kiss'd Love, and Love drew in her breath
In that close kiss, and drank her whisper'd tales.
They said that Love would die when Hope was gone,
And Love mourn'd long, and sorrow'd after Hope;
At last she sought out Memory, and they trod
The same old paths where Love had walk'd with Hope,
And Memory fed the soul of Love with tears.

👏

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#899

Tweesha is in so much pain

Vicky trying to confront her to get it out from her but she is not one to say it out so easily

loved the water scene

him seeking her when she is under

her fight back and hurting him

wonderful symbolism of their actual fight

you write beautifully

on a tangent, but nonetheless, Waterfalls are such wonderful places

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#900

Vicky and Tweesha= Visha or poison?

Are they poison for each other?

I hope so coz only poison heals poison and right now she needs to be dragged out of the deep hole she is sinking into.

The shock of knowing about Naina's death, the huge void that it is going to leave inside her, even inspite of the fact that Naina was no longer a part of her life, the inconsolable grief that she is experiencing, it is all building up like venom inside her. And she is spilling it out through her words and actions.

I love the fact that he is not just standing there and taking all that she is dishing out. Even though he does not know the reason behind her crazed behavior, he is not walking away. In fact he is giving as good as he gets, barb for barb. And that to her is his charm.

She will push him to the brink and die if he walks away. She is pushing him with everything inside her, coz she needs to know that he'll be there no matter what.

She is raw right now and he the only solace.

I want to see where and how you take it from here.

I can't even begin to imagine Vicky's reaction, but I hope to understand him a little more from his reactions to her.

Edited by Susegad - 10 years ago