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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh kaun aaya roshan ho gayee mahafil kis ke naam se
Mere ghar me jaise suraj nikala hain shaam se

You were sorely missed Doc🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


hum toh WOL ke deewane hai😆

Aap ki Mari apni Aapa ko yaad kar rahi thi

Kab lautegi yaha?😃

WOL ke talabgar toh hum bhi hain mohtorma.😳

Kitne din ho gaye Mari se baat karke😭

Keeping my fingers crossed. Won't jinx it by saying soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

For a moment, just a moment, she had felt everything slip into oblivion, even the music around them fade away, the people around mixing into a blur as her head fell back against his chest, her hand, entangled in his grip resting on her stomach.


Isshh!!!
I am completely inspired after seeing this😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
42. Decisions-
Had she not cared, their story would have been a lot different...
Lovely line summarised it all 👏
The way he came to support her while trying to stop the diya light from extinguishing was beautiful... as she was trying to make decisions again to go away and remain her aloof, but him coming there and helping her in her task just showed how you always need someone to be there for you. She's been all alone for far too long, trying to manage every turmoil in her life, somewhere she's stopped being the Geet her mom wanted her to be ... as she feels whomsoever's life she steps into gets them burned with her concern... but here he helps her thaw away the coldness that she was trying to show him by being the light which she herself ignited in him unknowingly after so many years. She has removed him from his loneliness and now he wants to be there for her.
Loved the whole scene where he holds onto her bangle first where she feels the hot wax melting depicting he is causing her loneliness to melt away ... and then him embracing her with his warmth and soothing her hurt with his fingers and letting her make decisions but yet understanding her unsaid words through her concern for the bleeding wound of his... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Yeh kaun aaya roshan ho gayee mahafil kis ke naam se
Mere ghar me jaise suraj nikala hain shaam se

You were sorely missed Doc🤗

Hey Nishaji 🤗
I missed being here...
How are you? how's your holiday going on??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

42. Decisions-

Had she not cared, their story would have been a lot different...
Lovely line summarised it all 👏
The way he came to support her while trying to stop the diya light from extinguishing was beautiful... as she was trying to make decisions again to go away and remain her aloof, but him coming there and helping her in her task just showed how you always need someone to be there for you. She's been all alone for far too long, trying to manage every turmoil in her life, somewhere she's stopped being the Geet her mom wanted her to be ... as she feels whomsoever's life she steps into gets them burned with her concern... but here he helps her thaw away the coldness that she was trying to show him by being the light which she herself ignited in him unknowingly after so many years. She has removed him from his loneliness and now he wants to be there for her.
Loved the whole scene where he holds onto her bangle first where she feels the hot wax melting depicting he is causing her loneliness to melt away ... and then him embracing her with his warmth and soothing her hurt with his fingers and letting her make decisions but yet understanding her unsaid words through her concern for the bleeding wound of his... 😊


I am going to take a print out of this, frame it and put it up. No body brings symbolism as much you do. I do not know the scene was this beautiful because I didn't write it this beautiful. You made it so. Oh my god, how much i missed you Doc🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Avi,
You wonderful woman! What are you doing to all of us!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

It was the strange intuition of being observed, and she had to focus on covering the earthen lamp with her right palm, to save the now flickering flame from being put off by the nasty wind.

A strong palm closed the other side of the lamp, making the flame to obtain stability and she need not raise her eyes to see who it was.

She knew who it was, her every raised heartbeat spoke the name of that one person that she woke up in the arms of.

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Posted: 10 years ago
43. Nursing his wounds-
I love this passionate and amused Maan. 😆 His one liners are deep and I can't help feeling so great about it. He hits a cord each time.
He somehow always tends to hurt her through some form of heat 😉 and then he is the one who comes to comfort her with his warmth.,... bechari Geet will die of warmth. 😆
Anyways... This update was all Maan. ❤️ He's too good... AND the last line just blew me completely "Don't care for me so much, cause when I do... I can't stop" 😲 Lovely. Just shows how he craves for Love ... his whole life he has lost so much and so many dear ones that he's afraid getting close only to be hurt later... but as Tanvi said before you can't help when your heart desires something.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.


I am going to take a print out of this, frame it and put it up. No body brings symbolism as much you do. I do not know the scene was this beautiful because I didn't write it this beautiful. You made it so. Oh my god, how much i missed you Doc🤗

Oh!! Really you serious??? Kuch bhi Shika. 😳
I've said this millions of times ... you write beautifully, and I just comment based on what you make me feel by your writing... so you are the root of it all. Take a bow girl!! Clap
I missed you my Love ❤️ 🤗

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