MG (OS) : Inheritance of Fates - Page 2

awesome... so much pain... I like ur writing style...

Kya yaaarrr...
u again made me cry...
i thnk u like makng ur readers sad wid sad endings...(pouting) :(
bcoz u write mostly sad :(
bt neways i dnt knw y i luv it stil
its bcoz ur writng has magic...
i hope sumday u write a humourous ff as wel...
wud b dreaming of dat day...

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Very sad and painful story.

I know...

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

one more beautiful story from you ! but such painful ending... as it is in real life most of the love stories are tragedies...such deep love lost forever...difficult to bear it ...and your style of writing is fabulous... cannot resist ...can I expect a happy end story next time...

Thank you!!

nice story. but felt bad for geet.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Your writing stuns me every time. Beautifully written.

I had not heard the story until the Heer song came in Jab tak hai jaan. I loved the song and did some research to understand it.

The way you presented both their loves and the fate each pair had and tied it to Geet's fate was wonderful. The kiss by the ocean was amazing but the words before that were even more amazing.

I have become a fan of your words..

Thanks so much for this wonderful OS.

Avi

My favorite lines:

"This downpour torments the sea, instigates tides and provokes waves. One can establish the height of disturbance in that otherwise calm sea on arrival of rains but irony of the fact is that this very rain fills the sea, completes it in every sense, just like you complete me"

BTW ucompleteme was one of my userids 😊

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She looked at the shadow of hers casted upon the wooden floor, it was in his shadow that she had found her shade, she thought

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You walk by me without keeping distance still you mark a boundary and keep your heart in it"

"Who would have such self restraint, which man would do that?"

She questioned looking at his face lovingly.

"Any man that loves his woman"

👏👏👏👏

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Muaahh!

"Who would have such self restraint, which man would do that?"

She questioned looking at his face lovingly.

"Any man that loves his woman"

Originally posted by: yappingduck

that was one beautiful OS👏

Thank you darling!

Originally posted by: sdlife19

such a lovely but the most painful story
she was right she has inherited the fate of heer and sahiba being geet in all

Thank you dear!

Originally posted by: Shefali16

Kya yaaarrr...
u again made me cry...
i thnk u like makng ur readers sad wid sad endings...(pouting) :(
bcoz u write mostly sad :(
bt neways i dnt knw y i luv it stil
its bcoz ur writng has magic...
i hope sumday u write a humourous ff as wel...
wud b dreaming of dat day...

Sorry...!

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

nice story. but felt bad for geet.

Thanks