ANJAANE EHSAAS part11 UPDATED

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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi here i am again my previous stories are not compeleted as well as not so successful but here i want to write a story i am giving the prolouge its up to u if u like please comment

prolouge

what happen when a 19 yrs old girl falls in luv with a guy for whom she did not exist.

what happen when a 17 yrs old boy falls in luv with a girl for whom her family matters d most and he did not even exist(as he think).

what will happen to their feelings.

CHARACTER SKETCH

MAAN(OUR MSK): LIVES IN DELHI WITH PARENTS ELDEST SON IN FAMILY BELONGS TO A ROYAL FAMILY & ONE OF RICHEST FAMILY OF DELHI.

GEET HANDA: LIVES IN DELHI BELONGS TO ONE OF THE RICHEST FAMILY OF DELHI BUT VERY CONSERVATIVE A BUBBLY & BEAUTIFUL GIRL BUT NEVER CROSS ANY LIMIT

ALWAYS IN A SALWAR SUIT.

RAJ SINGH KHURANA: SUCCESSFUL BUSINESSMAN STRICT BUT SWEET LUVS HIS FAMILY A LOT MAAN'S DAD MODERN BUT A BIT CONSERVATIVE

SHEWTA SINGH KHURANA:MAAN'S MOM SWEET & ADORABLE A LOVELY WIFE ,MOTHER & DIL

SAVETRI DEVI:(SAME AS SERIAL)MODERN ,FULL OF MISCHEIF

SHRIYA SINGH KHURANA:(OUR VILLIAN) LOVES MAAN LIKE HER OWN SON .A WIDOW HAS 2 DAUGHTER anwesha and tanisha

MOHINDER HANDA:(SAME AS SERIAL ) ONE OF D BEST BUSINESS MAN OF DELHI

RANO HANDA:A HOUSEWIFE LUVS HER FAMILY A LOT

GEET'S MOM

DARJI:(SAME AS SERIAL)

PREM SINGH KHURANA: YOUNGER BRO OF MAAN RESPECTS & LUVS HIM ALOT

VICKY SINGH KHURANA: YOUNGEST BROTHER

SAMEERA HANDA: YOUNGER SISTER OF GEET

HEER HANDA: YOUNGEST SISTER

part1-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3590186/anjaane-ehsaas-part11-updated?pn=2

part2-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83379688

part 3- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83530338

part 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83737430

par 5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83829452

part 6-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86007057

part 7-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86711492

part8-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87214263

PART 9A-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3590186&PID=88257478&#88257478

part 9b-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88840217

part 10-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90892132
part 11- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101961543

plz do comment if u like it and

will give rest CS later

Edited by giaa5678 - 11 years ago

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priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

its quite an interesting start
waiting for more

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giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

NO RESPONSE AT ALL IS THE STORY CONCEPT THAT BAD😭😡

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting prologue..

like is not working..

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prachi sinha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: giaa5678
NO RESPONSE AT ALL IS THE STORY CONCEPT THAT BAD😭😡

dear post ur ff link here u will get more responce

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/83048357

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting concept

nice cs

waiting for 1st part

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.OneDirection.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice Start ..
Will be waiting for mre

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giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

part -1

a man in mid twenties is sitting in balcony lost smiling in his own thought suddenly hearing a knock on the door he came back to this world which was worse than hell for him

servant:baba breakfast is ready all r waiting for u

man:hmm coming

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BV3mP8Lo4lU

Mann tera jo rog hai
Mohe samajh naa aaye
Paas hai jo sab chhod ke
Door ko paas bulaaye
Jiya lage na tum bin mora...x4

he got ready but he counldn't take his eyes of

the paintings of an angel yes she was his angel

Kya jaane kyun hai
Kya jaane kaisi andekhi si dor
Jo khenchti hai, jo le chali hai
Jo khenchti hai, jo le chali hai
Ab yun mujhe teri ore

his smile which only came on his lips by her

memories which were his only way of breathing

because his life left him alone long ago

he came to downstairs to dining table where his

his family was waiting for him for breakfast

an old lady:beta what is this u know children of

ur age are enjoy their life they are full of

mischeif & u r like a robot whose eyes & face

has no emotions i have decided u are going

marry

man: please don't even think of that daadima

dadima:why what is ur problem

man:i m done i m leaving

his family cried in their heart to see him the

boy who didnt needed any reason to smile laugh

now even show a bit of emotion other than his

angre what made him like this they wonder

Mann ab tak jo boojh naa paya
Tum wo pehali ho
Koi naa jaane kya wo rahasya hai
Koi naa jaane kya wo rahasya hai
Jiski saheli ho

here he entered in his style all wished him but

they again got a stern & plain face which they

are getting from last 5 years

(here come shasha and adi:same as serial)

shasha: gud morning mk

man: miss shasha m i ur pet or u don't have enough energy to take my name and a sir to it it not mk its MAAN SINGH KHURANA and maan sir for u got it get lost from my cabin and prepare for meeting

it was nothing new for the office staff but that hurts them to see a funloving innocent guy to turn into a ruthless ,arrogant man

(here in his cabin)

Main muskaau, sabse chhupaau
O main muskaau, sabse chhupaau
Vyakul ho din-rain
Kab se naa aayi naino mein nindiya
Kab se naa aayi naino mein nindiya
Mann me naa aaya chain
Jiya lage na tum bin mora...x4

maan:(st)why u left me i was a innocent & immature guy only why u turned me into a man whom i hate the most

suddenly his phone rang it was from his dad

dad:maan come home we have a important thing waiting for u

maan:but

dad:no if n but come home

maan:fine coming

with that he left for home

when he reached his home(KM) was decorated like a bride

maan:whats the matter is their any function

dad:yes today is ur engagement with SAMEERA

maan: what (with this he goes to SAMEERA who was standing their looking beautiful on her engagment)

maan: why u wnt to marry me

sameera :its the family decision & other than that i respect u & know u will be a great husband

maan:just shut uppp how could u marry me for whom ur di left all of us

all were shocked because non knew the reason of her departure from their life & neither knew the reason because of which their son turned a stonehearted person

sameera:how could that be di left us because she didn't wanted to

maan:the reason of her denial was me only

dad:so what u have to marry sameera

maan: sameera tell me will u be able to marry a person for whom their is no difference in day & night for whom the reason of breathing is ur di's memories who is living only becuse of ur di's promise for whom his life is worse than the hell who is waiting for ur di

all family members(handa's and khurana) were shocked with this revealition of truth they never knew

maan:u want to know come i will show u come

precap: start of their lovestory

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

prologue
nice...

CS
awesome...
is Maan younger than Geet?
and how is Shriya related to Maan?
Chachi?
cont soon dear...

sent the buddy invite...
and can u post the link when u update in this thread?
FF Daily Updates 6

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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: spvd
prologue
nice...

CS
awesome...
is Maan younger than Geet?
and how is Shriya related to Maan?
Chachi?
cont soon dear...

sent the buddy invite...
and can u post the link when u update in this thread?
FF Daily Updates 6

i have updated the link

thanks for ur comment

yes shriya is maan's chachi & maasi

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