ANJAANE EHSAAS part11 UPDATED - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

its a fabulous story
am all attention to know more
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
loved ur story awesone update waiting foe geets entry😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part3
flashback
8 yrs ago
raj:maan,vicky all of u get ready fast we have to attend a party of mohinder handa it is very important as he is my best friend so maan its my warning to u no mischeifness in party got it
maan:(st)do hell with the party god save me plz
i will escape from the party
raj: maan i know what r u thinking if i did not found u in party it will be very bad for u
maan: ok(with baby face)
In party
a princess glad in red suit was decending stairs
mohinder: meet my elder daughter GEET HANDA
raj: ur daughter is an angel
mohinder: ya i know (patting geet's head)
raj: meet maan my eldest son
maan: gud evening uncle
mohinder: u both go n enjoy
(with that geet left n maan also but maan babu not doing any mischeif how can that be😉)
maan: hey geet can i have the pleasure to dance with an angel
geet:(with hesitation)ya sure
saanson ko saanson mein Dhalne do zara...
dhiimii sii dharkan ko bharne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'en
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
aankhon mein hamko utarne do zara
baahon mein hamko pighalne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum

saanson ko saanson mein Dhalne do zara
chhuu lo badan magar is tarah
jaise suriila saaz ho
a.ndherii chupe terii zulf me.n
kholo ki raat aazaad ho
aanchal ko siine se DHalne do zara
shabnam kii buunden phisalne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
maan: geet
geet: hmm
maan: aap niche kyu dekh rahi hai kya mera chehra se acchi appko ghas lagi jo aap niche dekh rahi hai humari annkho me dekhiye plz
geet : bado se koi aise baat karta hai kya
maan: nhi karta par aap se toh kar sakte hai na
geet: app woh
maan: app wo kya haa fine appko mujse baat nhi karni kya jaiye apni friends ke saath hum ap se baat nhi krenge
geet: nhi aisa nhi voh hume sharam aa rahi thi isliye
maan:oh toh appko humse abhi se sharam ane lagi (with this he brought her close bi waist)
geet: maan chodiye koyi dekh lega
maan: dekh lene dijiye hume koi phrakh nhi padta
maan:waise ap kaunse collage mai padti hai
geet:xyz collage
maan: aap ka mobile no.
geet: ji
maan: hume nhi bataengi
geet: xxx
maan: hum raat ko ph. karenge humare ph. ka wait kariyega bye hum chalte hai dad bula rahe hai
precap:
flashback
sameera: di lagta hai aap kisi ke phone ka wait kar rahi hai
geet: nhi toh( her ph. started ringing)
guy on ph.: lagta hai ap humare ph. ka besabri se wait kar rahi thi
geet: maan

plz do like & comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
yippeee first one

awesome update

so this was maaneet first meeting

maan is really a flirty

geet is as usual sharmili

cont soon
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
omg geet is blushing so much😳 maan is so naughty he asked her no .me confuse whether geet is elder or maan😆.waiting for next update ...plzzz update soon .thank u for yhe pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
lovely update..where is geet yaar...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
so sweet maan called geet
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
lovely update
naughty maan..
blushing geet
loved it..
like is not working..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
lovely update!
the naughty maan was a real pleasure to read about
amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
part 3
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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