SS : Raison d'etre (Chapter 13 - P 63) 25/03 - Page 21

Originally posted by: palindrome

Awesome chapter...

Girl,you are hell bent on making me teary today..Your new story had best friends and here too,Geet and Pari's conversation was so so so heart warming...I am missing my best friend more intensely now...

Anyways,Sometimes we ask for choices in our life and sometimes,we hate them..😕 I can understand geet's situation here...

Hope she would find a way where her brain and heart both would be happy with her decision...I know Veer is her brain's choice and Maan is her heart's choice...😊

Thank you so much for updating it regularly...

Did I tell you lately,how splendid your writing is???

No..???

koi na,baad mein keh dungi..abhi mood nahi hai...😉😆

It wasn't intentional but due to the demand of stories I have written BFF's bonding in both the stories. Sorry for making you teary
About choices...true. Sometimes they might be made by us...but we ourselves might not be able to embrace them with happiness.

Haha you need not tell how my writing is sweety. Your love for this story says it all. Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice part... still confusion of veer - maan persisits...this wait is killing me...why am i soo impatient??😕 thanku for updating😃😃😃

I hope next part clears your confusions. Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: ammu5

sweet convo... loving pari... thanks for the PM

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Awesome part dear :D
Loved the convo between pari and geet.
Geet plucking flower petals was too good lol.
I also feel geet is putting some limits for her equation with maan. But true she cant afford to dream of her boss now.
Aww happy family with the kittend lol.
Cant wait for more :)

Haha thanks for liking the part and for the response. Keep reading :)

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Geet is dreading to think Maan as in lover's shoes...

but she loves him because she didn't say no to Pari's question...😊

but yeh Veer beech mein kyun aa raha hai...😡

I think his character will make Geet realize her love for Maan...

I am having this feeling that Maan may be related to Geet and seeing her with Veer will trigger feelings in him...😕

but don't know hum to pehle se yahi soch rahe the that the boy may be Maan but u gave us shock by making another boy to be her date as Veer...and now I am dreaming like this that may be they will realize their feelings for each other when the feel of distance comes between them...u will axe this dream also...😔

waiting for next...what is Maan's feelings about Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

I am so sorry. I didn't mean to axe your previous dreams too.

You are right in one way. Sometimes we need people to enter our life so that we will realize the value of people who already exist.
Maan's feelings shall be revealed super soon :)

Thanks for the warm response.

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

wonderful update..love the amount of love and respect geet have for her father..love pari suggestion of kitten😆😆😆..oh god..amazing..pls cont soon..

Thanks for liking the story. Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: yappingduck

its always fun to have girl to girl convos, coz they can blabber everything under the sun, without making any sense...thats the advantage of being girly...u arent expected to make sense when u get together with girlfriends and bitch, cuss, giggle, blabber together
geet is being pragmatic ...when she says that maan is beyond her league and she is happy honouring her dad's wishes...and giving a try to her dad's choice...the story is progressing at a perfect pace...and yes i love this pari and her suggestion of dumping doggie boy and adopting a kitten and making it go family way 😆

Yup. The best part of being with your girl friends is no one makes sense and every one knows it yet no one cares. We make silliest of silly jokes and laugh for hours together. We crib, bitch, cuss, gossip and we reveal almost all of ours and others' secrets too when we are in a sleepover. 😆

Now that you reminded me of it all, I long for a girls' night out. Where are my BFF's numbers? Let me go hunt my mobile now😆

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

nice update..

love geet n pari convo...

like is still not working...

Thanks for reading and enjoying :)

Originally posted by: Onir

Pari-Geet convo was so funny, girly yet showed how close & well bonded both are.

Even I usually have the same query (Though I don't believe in this petal thingy to get answers..) That which is the answer the name accompanying the last petal or the one uttered after it.

Geet knows Maan since four years but got to know him one on one during this lunch. She has seen his softer side before too. So this liking & attraction is not something she realised now but is aware of it since some time. Yet she knows her bounds & is willing to make choices depending on her father's wishes. Lets's see what's more in store here. I will wait for you to reveal this Maan-Veer scene.

Loved Pari's logic about rearing a kitten family as having men in life leads to complications 🤣

Waiting for the next. 😊

You have the same query? I do too. Hence I never murdered a poor flower to have answers for difficult questions😆
You hit the nail on the head with Geet and her feelings. And thanks for liking kitten family idea ;)

Thanks a lot for reading :)

Originally posted by: punam2712

loved both geet and pari and her name for geet - geeks

pari hit the nail on the head when she asked geet if not thinking about maan is delibrate

geet knows her limits and doesnt want to dream beyond them

but she doesnt know that heart chooses its own path

i have a feeing veer and maan will turn out to be brothers

Yes this heart never listens to logic. Let us see when will she realize this. Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

amazing
Lovely update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

beautiful update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

Thanks for the warm response :)

Originally posted by: farzu3008

awesome update. loved geet and pari friendship. hoping for maneet moments now

Thanks for the warm response. You will get them soon :)

Originally posted by: hermoso

It was chothu update 😭 pari is real saddy , plz make yash understand ki sumone loves him so much . loved pari and geet moments ,its always so soothing have friend with u who shares ur sorrows, happiness and are with u in every step of ur life . loved it but give lambaaa wala update

Yash needs a whack on his head bby Pari for him to realize. He would realize soon BTW😆

I can't promise on length of updates because I imagine the chapters as scenes. So it actually narrows down to how long the scene is :) Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: sree10

GReat update and thaks for answering my question. I like the way u reply to all our qns and remarks.

Great going my friend

Thank you so much for the appreciation. :)

Originally posted by: ambeern

awesome update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: idunno

i love this ff somthing diffrant and very well written,please continue soon.

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: valli30

awesome update

loved it

Thank you!

wohooo so another update is on the way i suppose...waiting eagerly

superb ss...
loved it...
car scene was awesome... n m sure evn maan feels for her...
n he really meant those words...
song selection was superb

just loved it . the flow of the story is so beautiful and lovely u wont realize that the update is over . i loved car scene and song choice is beautiful and apt for situation. I agree with palin comments and absolutely u r an splendid writer with ur words and u r weaving a dream to feel those emotions .continue soon 🤗

Oh I'm sorry to read this latest update so late. Anyways better late than never. 😊

very very well written... Fell in love with the way you've written. Loving it :)

Originally posted by: aanya84

awesome update👏 . geet has this depth element in her thoughts and pari on the other hand is so impulsive ,i think thats why they are best friends (oppo attracts😉).i loved the female version of devdas (pari) i will pray to god that she gets her paro soon (yash)🤣.u still left us on the cliffhanger about the mystry of maan and veer .plzz update soon and thank u for the pm ...waiting 😃

Yes they indeed are opposites but still they balance each other out. haha Paro is such a nut head that s(he) needs a lot of realization, and lot of push for that😆

Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

I am bowled over by this chapter. Drunk Pari, her dramatics, the underlying sadness, calm and understanding Geet, her simple answers and their sweet talk! Beautiful :-).

Thank you. It is so heart warming to see praise for an update where there is no presence of one of the leads. Thanks again.

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

What is the name of your new story? I couldnot open the link you sent as I am surfing through mobile.

SS: Can love happen twice..??

And thankyou Palindrome for providing the link :)

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Beautifully written! Pari knows Geet! Geet admires Maan! She does nt wanna dream abt things beyond her reach! She loves her dad n respects Suraj uncle! so will abide by their decision! update soon!

Yes Geet is a person who thinks from her brain rather than her heart. Let us see if her determination would be shaken ;) Thanks for reading,

Originally posted by: LaughingBarbie

superb

Thank you!

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

awesome and very interesting story, beautifully written.

will wait to read more.

Thanks for the warm response :)

Originally posted by: april12

oh man how did i miss this update before?

anyways

awesome update

pari-geet girl talk

geet stuck between 2 choices (or should i say 1 choice and 1 person too far away to even dream)

loved this question aksed by pari "Do you just admire your boss or do you limit yourself to admiring him on purpose?" don't know why but i felt like i could relate to it even though i'm not sure (wah? now i'm confusing myself)

what is there in her future? maan! but how does she get to him?

Haha don't be confused babe and sorry for confusing you. Recently I was reading a fic in this very forums and I connected with the male lead and was hurt at something the female lead did. I had no idea why did i connect with him. 😆

It happens sometimes😆

Don't get confused. And enjoy the story ;)

Originally posted by: gudmeet

read all the chapters at one go

very very interesting story and so very well written

all the characters are amazingly presented

maan geet lunch date was awesome

and their desserts were really out of this world😆😆

looking forward to the updates

Hey welcome to the story. Glad you enjoyed their desserts :)

Originally posted by: maanugeetu

awesome update-chapter 5.

the girl talk is lovely and refreshing.

beautifully written.

plz update soon.

Thanks for reading and liking :)

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

'sigh'..

i loved the last part of the last update most..

kitten and grandmothers..

nice story...

Haha thanks for liking it girl. And thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Mind Blowing part.
Missed ur SS dear.
Beautifully written. :D
I absolutely adored their moment in the car.
Both shared their aspirations awww.
Wow maan singing thats has to be the best.
Love the veer zaara combo hehe.
Awww geet is crying :( she has fallen for maan but cant fulfill her dream as veer is her destiny. :(
Hope maan turns out to be veer. Or veer has a gf and he breaks the alliance lol.
Cant wait for more.

Oh God, you made me giggle mercilessly at the bold-ed part😆

Let us see if Veer has a GF at all😆😉

Originally posted by: palindrome

"ABHI..." na jao chod kar...!!!!

ke...

mere dil kaise lagega yahan..😭.😭

Mai jahan rahu, mai kahee bhee hu, teree yaad saath hai
Kisee se kahu, ke nahee kahu, yeh jo dil kee baat hai
Kehne ko saath apane ek duneeya chalatee hai
Per chhupke iss dil me tanhaayee palatee hai
Bas yaad saath hai, teree yaad saath hai 🤗

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ilRv-1GJAY[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

The song. I loved it, loved it how it
was incorporated in story.
Aswesome as always!

Thank you so much. The song is something I never get bored of :)

Originally posted by: ammu5

car drive was beautiful n maan singing for geet was simply superb... good to see u back.

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the warm response :)