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DontPanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: yappingduck
can i cry😭... plz plz plz let maan be veer😭

Why are you crying buddy?😕

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

beautiful
Wow
Loving this story so much

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

I think I would have posted my comment sooner if not for the song... haiyee... that took me back.

The song for all lovers who never feel that time with each other is enough... dreamy..

Loved all of it.

She is in a dilemma on the cusp of a relationship yet somehow not quite sure of it until he sings.

They are an adorable couple each giving up a little on their dreams for others.

I believe good things happen to good people so hoping their story turns out from good to great.

Your writing always leaves me stunned and wanting for more. The expressions, the scenarios, the song even all weaves a spell on me from which I don't want to come out.

Thanks for updating.

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

haaye it was so so so so very lovely update dear

and u r spoiling us with ur updates dear

don't know whether I should be happy or sad abt that?

but for the present enjoying ur updates so much dear

veer zaara oh dear

they were such a lovely couple

just like my maan geet

by the way

why do I think that maan may be maan veer khurana instead of maan singh khurana for a change?

anti lullaby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what an idea madamji

all the cds will sell like a hot cake dear

and all the moms will shower him with so much blessings for such a noble deed

waking up their kids in the morning

it indeed Is a very tough job

car ride and antakshari

love it

loved geet's childhood dream of becoming painter and all her reasons

and this maan will definitely solve the mystery ( palin's 😉😉😉😉)

u also have a sense of mystery in ur work

da vinci used it in his painting and u r using it in ur writing

would love to read a hard core mystery from u

I am sure it would be really really great

and the song

oh it is so dreamy

and suited the situation so well

I am a fan of old classic hindi movie songs

wow yaar and the way u put it into ur story

enhanced its magic

and coming from maan's mouth

was an icing on the cake

superb superb supeb update dear

thank u so much for updating dear😊

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

hooo /...and u r really back...thanku sooo much...glad to see you back...😃😃

i love that song ...now i lov it more ... never found this song sooo beautiful before...very very apt...ryt now i want to listen to that song...😃😃

coming to the update, i badly want maan n veer to be the same...but the suspense still remains...y does she find it difficult to talk to him freely, ...is she that affected by him??😳😳 well, that good anyways...hope you ll post the next part sooojnnn...thanx a ton for sharing this story dear...you write beautifully😊😊

and loved the way maaan spoke to her n shared his personal things... o am lovin it am lovin it !!!!!!!😃

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

loved the song and the fact that maan sung for her

but now she is ina dilemna

she opened her heart a little and maan has entered it

how will she let somebody else in and oust maan

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

song is beautiful

nice update

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

awesome update

lovely maaneet moments in car.

loved it

continue soon

Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

wow beautiful update. the song was incorporated very well in the story. car drive and them talking about their childhood inspiration was simply superb. waiting eagerly for next