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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god the truth is out now and she hedared that
it was really painful to know that and geet
she is kid how she can bear all this hope her dad will console her this time
how cheap geet maa is hate her she always thinking about her need
me wondering if she dont wanted geet then why she given birth to her
to make her suffer i really feeling soo bad for geet

her father cont even left her but at same time cont take to his arms
how he can bear all this his own wife betrayed her
it was such thing how can man do that his point is right

this time only geet's dad can conslole her

still geet mon thinking that she didnt have to act shit hate her
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous updtae dear:)

waiting 4 nxt :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too emotional...poor geet suffering for no flaut...a child can never choose his parent...rina ,she's so cruel how can she? stone heart women...now how geet wud take this??? plz update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago



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Chapter 9-The last strand
She sat in her dark room,on her bed,all cuddled up in a corner. She didn't know how much time had passed,she didn't feel anything,neither pain,nor sadness,not even the physical pain that she should have after sitting for so long in same position without moving...bt she felt none.
She just sat there in that dark room,with an empty head,empty eyes,&...
...empty soul...
Her eyes twitched when the first ray of sun fell on her eyes. Then as if she was jolted to reality,she scrambled up from bed & ran to her mother's room.

She was sitting on the sofa with a tired look. The whole night she had to be awake because of suraj.They had spent the whole night beckering & now Suraj wanted to get out of it,so went for an early walk...
Geet went towards her mom with timid steps,with each step,her heartbeat rose more...in fear.
Mamma,she called slowly.
Rina looked at her with utter disgust Subha subha mu (face) dekhake din kharab kar diya She barked on her face.
M...mamma,k...kya app logone kal raat jo kaha ,wo...s..s...sach hai?
Oh,how she wished that her mamma will say no,even if she says with anger or abusing,she won't mind...bas...
Yes,saari batien sach hai ..
nahi..
u are not suraj's kid
nahi
Tu Brij ka saga behen nahi hai
bas karien
U are worst than a parasite in gutter
mamma...she whimpered
all hate u
chup karien please
u are not legitimate,tu nazayej ...
AAA she screamedin angush with her hands covering her ears ,she couldn't take it anymore..yet,she had to ask one last question.
AGAR ITNI HI NAFRAT THIS MUJHSE TO WHY DID U GIVE ME BIRTH???
Geet screamed crying,probably for the first time in her life...
As if i wanted to..hmp,i wanted to abort u the moment i knew i was pregnant,bt the doctor said i couldn't ,it will risk my life. The truth is geet...
she came closer to geet & stroked her cheek softly,then bending to her ears she whispered...
In my life,You are like a bone stuck in my throat,neither can i rid of u ,nor can i consume u...constantly bothering me...
Geet jumped out of her reach & looked at her with tears flowing from her eyes...she felt nauseated ,she needed air,she ran out of the house in that semi darkness of 5 am

She ran ,she didn't know where she was going,the only thing she knew was that she had to get away from this, get away from pain,get away from this truth,get away from light.

******

Man ! early morning jogging surely feels good here, huh! Maan thought to himself.
Maybe i should try this often.
Maan couldn't think more as he saw geet run past him.
W..wh..what the...what geet is doing here at this time,is she jogging like me?
Then a flash of her crying face running past him burned into his mind.
No,it wasn't the case,was it?! She isn't...OH SHOOT!!!
He ran after her as the realization drawn after him ...she was crying,maybe something has happened...wo apne appko kuch kar na de,he thought while running after her.

After a while he could see her,entering a 5 story house.
Thank god,maybe it's one of her friend's home...maybe she wanted to find solace when she was definitely upset about something. Main vi na, kuch zyada hi overreact karta hu.
He shook his head & smiled & turned opposite direction to return.

****
Geet smiled ,maybe from the first time from the depths of her heart,as the air tickled her,touching her,soothing her.
Ab mamma papa ko koi pareshani nahi hogi meri waja se, she smiled as she jumped off the 5 story building.
****
Maan turned the opposite direction to return home.
Hold on a sec,isn't that house barren,then to whom she went...he turned back immediately only to see in horror ,her jumping from the roof...

Precap- Warming up to him
Sorry for continuing the same precap,i really needed to add this part,bt i assure you guys, the next part..WILL SIMPLY MELT UR HERAT INTO WARM FUZZINESS.😃

Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet asking rina about truth rina accusion geet crying maan seeing her standing on roof trying to jump



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Posted: 11 years ago
She attemped suicide!!!!!!!!😲She actually jumped off the roof of a 5 story building😲 I dont even have enough cursing word that b***hy filthy charachterless woman.She's not even worthy of being called a woman let alone be a mother.

Maan was there but he cudnt guess the girl wud jump off d roof.Now wud he save Geet,she has already jumped!!!!!!

Pls update fast,I m getting despartae to know.
Edited by sweetsampa39 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i hate that women she is not geet mother she is just the lady who give her the birth ... only for her pleasure she slept with someone what is geet;s fault in it?
i m sorry thats my thinking ... thats the bestest concept i have ever gone through... do update soon...
me waiting eagerly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh no...i didnt expect Geet to take such a drastic step...but i guess the pain was too much to handle...looking for a longer update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
horrified end of part geet jump poor soul
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesumly touching...OMG!!!geet tried to kill hrself...continue sooon

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