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Posted: 12 years ago


NOTE:-
All who wanted to know ages of my characters...

Geet- 15 ( Remember, pinki told that geet is 1-2 years older than them,it HAS A REASON, i will explain that later in the story )
Pinki- 13 (well all girls of class viii are between 13-14 years)
Yash- 14
Rohan- 17
Maan- 26 years ( It has a looong history too)

Chapter 4-Sacrificed,for whom?
What time is it? Is it night? or day? She couldn't understand. She was feeling fuzzy & sleepy. Wait there was someone sitting by her bed..who is it? My head is feeling so heavy...i can't open my eyes...

Suraj Handa,sat there by HIS DAUGHTER's side,tending her - changing the damp cloth on her head, he patted her to sleep. He looked at her face, so innocent,like a child - very rarely did he face her..

That's why..only to avoid her, he often made trips, he immersed himself in work, so that he didn't have to face her. No , he didn't hate her...it's just...

Kaun hai..geet asked in a feeble voice, then recognizing the figure sitting next to her bed,her eyes widened & she immediately sat in bed- Papa! app aa gaye, app mere room me aaye..app sach main mere room me aye..!!
She sounded so ecstatic, so innocent,so happy that it pricked him..was him avoiding her that much clear!! Was she really that eager to be with me!! He felt a surge of warmth in his heart,he wanted to hug her & say, ha papa aa gaye...
he looked up,only to meet those eyes...
His eyes went blank...his HEART went blank.
He averted his gaze & stood up, geet, it is late night, go to sleep.
He almost ran out of the room.
***
He came to his room,avoiding his wife Rina ,facing his back towards rina, pushing himself away from her,to the furthest corner o bed he went to sleep, bt only in name...for the last 16 years, sleep didn't reach his eyes.

Rina St. Aj vi aise hi so gaye, ye sab teri waja se ho raha hai geet! maine tujhe janam dekar hi galti kar di. Agar tu na hoti to suraj ko kavi Bikas ke bareme pata hi nahi chalta..
***
FLASHBACK
Dr: Congrats Mr handa, ur wife is pregnant.
Suraj H : Oh !! I am so happy!! Thank u rina

He held Rina's hand.
Dr: Bt ,Mr. Handa, u are not taking care of her properly. U have to be careful specially when it's her 3rd month.
Suraj H : WHAT??
Dr: Yes she is 3 months pregnant. You both didn't know!! Waise aisa kavi ho jata hai,bt ...
Suraj couldn't hear any of the old man's rambling as the world around him started to spin & he looked at his wife silently...she was bending her head down.
Suraj took her hand & stood up..dr, i am taking the reports & meds, & i will contact u later.
****
PRESENT
Suraj st. Kyu rina! why did u do this to me, Why did you made me like this? Only for ur deeds i am punishing that innocent girl. No matter how much i want to love her as my own ,every time i look at her eyes, they remind me of ur deception.
They remind me, of that innocent man whom u deceived along with me. Now look at me,I can't even breath- u made me unable to do so. Kya karta..kaise chod deta tumhe,mere pyaar ne tumhe mujhe chodne nahi diya, & the memories of ur betreyal render it impossible to live with u...he closed his eyes remembering the events.
***
FLASHBACK
At handa house
Ye kya hai Rina? Suraj asked in a low tone.
Wo..
I WANT ANSWERS DAMMIT!! I CAN U BE 3 MONTHS PREGNANT WHEN I WASN'T HERE FOR PAST 4 MONTHS!!
Rina fumbled & then started to cry..I was ra**

His eyes softened immediately, he went to gather his VULNERABLE wife into his arms,why didn't u tell me this when i came back..this whole month?
I..I...i was afraid that u will leave me.
No i won't silly,Bt tell me who that rascle is, I WILL KILL HIM, his eyes blazed.
Wo,he doesn't live here, he was here for fewdays..&.....she again started to cry.

Suraj felt bad for doubting his wife...Rina..I am S..
The bell rang.
Who is it at this hour! Suraj thought as he opened the door.
A man was standing there with a big bucket of flower.
Yes...
Oh my god! u are Back! Finally i can do the much needed thing.
Suraj was puzzled.

The man kneeled infront of him.
I love ur SISTER RINA ...i want to marry ur sister.Please give us ur blessings.
WHAT!!??
Don't worry, u can take as many exams as u need, i will pass all ur exams. Bt let me marry ur sister.
Suraj couldn't understand ,he took him in his study.
Rina was in the bedroom, so he couldn't see them.
So..Suraj started...How do u know rina...
****
Rina opened the door of the study room..only to find BIKAS & SURAJ talking.
She was horrified. HER TRUTH WAS OUT!!!!
Suddenly both looked at her.
Both stood up. Bikas looked at her with angry tears & left...Uttering just one word...CHI!!
Suraj was as calm as a sea before storm.
After locking the door he asked in a low voice...SO..would u like to rephrase ur STORY??
****
FLASHBACK ENDS
****
The bell of the handa house rang..
Rina was irritated...UFF! ek to subha se geet ke friends aake halla macha rakha tha, avi gaye..b kaun aaya hai?
It was 6 pm.

She opened the door only to see a very handsome man standing infront of her.

suddenly her tone changed as she asked sweetly..yes..
Wo, i am here to meet my student Geet ,she lives here, right? Maan asked
Ah yes,come in,come in.
I am sorry to bother u mrs handa.
Oh,not a problem at all!
Actually i came here to check on her health. I hope she doesn't have serious illness.
Oh no, she will be fine! Wait, i will make u tea.
It's ok mrs handa,no need to do that.
No it's cold outside & tea would be perfect.
Bt..
It will take just five minutes,u be comfortable..think it as ur home she almost fled to the kitchen.

Maan sighed. Then his eyes started to rome for his student..Pata nahi kaisi hogi.
His eyes fell on a door left ajar,he could see someone sleeping there...
he went there..as he thought, it was geet..bt why is her face is so red, her face looks like a red baloon now!!he thought chuckling.
bt his smile vanished the moment he kept his had on her forehead to check temperature.
OH MY GOD!! SHE IS BURNING!!

Precap- Want to see maan as geet's nanny taking care of her??😛


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Edited by Shilalipi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Oh now we know why rina hates geet and suraj avoids geet
Geet is not suraj's kid
Rina cheated him
Now maan is here to see geet at the handa house
And she is burning in fever, we know Rina doesn't take care of her
But how can he be her nanny with Rina in the house? I mean he would expect her to take care of geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
bi... rina decived both her husband and bikas and cursing geet please punish this bi... geet fever expecting love but anyone not loving her maan coming to see geet



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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update chi keshi aorat hai geet ki ma apne husband ko hi apna bhi bana diya waiting 4 next sorry dear like button is not working
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Posted: 12 years ago
I feel really sad for Geet, she has to go through so much =((
I hope Maan rescues her from this hell soon!
Geet's mom is a b****
Her dad is sweet but she is still deprived of love =((
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rina a cheap person...how dare she sweet talk maan...stay away...poor everyone around her...maan pls tc of geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye maan uske ghar gaya use dekhne...i wish mere sir itne acche hote...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
thnks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


very interesting...

Rina so cheap b***h...

now she is attracted to Maan also I feel so...how her tone changed and she just wanted to make him comfortable knowing that he is Geet's teacher... Geet her daughter whom she detest so much...she will be polite to her teacher unbelievable...

Rina cheated both Suraj and Vikas...but does Suraj's love so blind that he still loves her and keeping her with him...he should have kich her out of house and keep Geet with him as his own child...she is so selfish...she don't realize her mistake that she cheated her husband but she is angry on Geet that her ministrations came out in front because of Geet's birth...so basically she is a characterless woman...

Maan has come to Geet's home to inquire about her health...does he feel something about her or it is just routine enquiry from his part...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update
Love it
Poor geet..
Hate rina

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