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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 24


When maan nodded and scope geet in his arms taking her in the room while geet hold him from neck with one hand while her other hand cover her nose because of continues sneezing'

As dadima makes her way to KM to make khada for geet as she doesn't know where maan had kept everything in here 'and she can't even ask him now as geet needs him right now '.

Maaneet bed room:

Maan makes geet lay on bed and set beside her taking the tissues from the side he passes it to her while geet takes it and then it continues maan keep on passing her the tissues for few minutes and geet was highly angry, irritated and now she was getting frustrated too as she was dam hungry and her craving for pasta was still there as because of this cold she couldn't even finish her breakfast and enjoy the delouses pasta and here instead of doing something to stop this sneezing he was passing this tissues to her ''when maan again passes her the tissues while thinking what to do and waiting for dadima to bring khada for geet he relies that now geet was not even taking the tissues and looked at her ..her face had gone pale and her eyes were red and watery because of this continues sneezing and coughing maan passes her water thinking it may help to control her cough 'but when geet took a sip of it came out as she started coughing more powerfully' while maan was now getting highly worried for her and checked her forehead which was lil hot indicating that she has caught fever also because of cold may be he was not sure but he couldn't even show it to geet because he can see that her mood was now out of control and one word from his mouth to her and god knows what will happen to him he doesn't want to take any chance after the fight they had in kitchen he knows it will be really dangers for him'.because he knows that right now at this time she is lioness and he lion and lion also doesn't try to get into the her bed books of his lines when her mood is full as he too love his life and the peace in it'..

Dadima come there in the mean time and rush too geet offering her the khada while she just looks at dadima with a baby face frowning and with lil tears in her eyes because of continues coughing'.

When maan said to her that it's not easy to make her drink until she stops coughing when geet just give maan a look which can burn anyone alive for now when maan just his face the other side not knowing what else to do at this moment'while dadima having a tough time controlling her laugh seeing her grandsons look as soon as he received geet's glare''ohh the table had turn now she thought to herself as before it was vise a versa but now wow''

When dadima when somehow manage to make geet drink and help her to stable a lil as maan hold her in his arms while geet lay her head in his shoulder closing her eyes still coughing a lil while her sneezing was not stopping at all'..but her cough seem to ease down a lil while maan seeing this chance got the medicine from the side drawer for her cold and fever and give it to her before it gets worse and within few minutes geet was sleeping relaxing herself on maan's shoulder while he was holding her from shoulder from one hand while other was patting her head '.geet was sleeping comfortably in maan's arms while maan was lost in his care for geet while dadima was admiring them both''..hoping that just take care of each other like this whole life and the upcoming too '.

After some time dadima said seeing that geet was sound sleep '

Dadima: maan beta u take care of geet I have some work so I need to go I'll be back by evening if u need any help then call nakul ok and make her lay down on the bed now it will be uncomfortable for her to sleep like this '

While maan nodded at her and she left bidding bye to him '.


Maan made geet lie down and covered her with the bed sheet and seat besides her holding her hands in his he kissed her palm ''''

Then getting up from the bed he moves towards the window and calls doctor telling her everything and says her to come once and check geet to that to know at home only '''.

After some time the doctor come and checked geet and calls maan outside to talk as geet was still sleeping'

Doctor: Mr.khurana it's just normal cold and coughs but still it's not good for her as she is already week and now when she is pregnant it will only make her more week Mr.khurana I already told u that u have to be really very careful and take care of her at this time but I don't think u r doing u r duty properly already she is so week and now this how can u be so careless Mr.khurana'

Said the doctor sighing really disappointed with him'while maan just felt guiltier if he was feeling any less before'.and he replied to the doctor in a guilty and sorry tone saying'.

Maan: doctor I am really sorry but I promise from next time I will be really very careful and take full care of geet.

Doctor: I just hope u do so Mr.khurana'.all the best this is u r last chance because if now u be careless let just warn me it won't be good for any one nor u r wife or u r coming child as it may create many complication in her pregnancy'

Maan: thank you doctor'

Doctor: it's my duty Mr.khurana'

Said the doctor and left leaving maan alone in his thoughts'..

While maan enter the room lost in his thoughts and sitting beside geet kept his hand on her tummy and said'.

Maan: I promise baby I will take full care of u and u r mamma from now on I promise''


In all this maan didn't even relies that it was his first ever talk to the baby'.he just kept is hand their not at all removing it from their feeling the life inside it growing for the very first time and just one thought come in his mind that "how will it feel to feel the baby growing inside or how would it feel when he will hold the baby for the very first time in his life"'..he was just lost in his thoughts with his hand on geet's tummy thinking about their future together with the baby and was having a smile with a glow on his whole face while his eyes where having a amazing shine in them thinking about all this'not at all realizing this was his first step towards the unbreakable bonding between him and the baby'.which will only grow with time'


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precap: Teaser😈

Prev: PART 23 Next:Part 25


i know guys i am late but so sorry for making u wait so much but now as i am back and even my exams r over now and i will have full time so now i will give u regular updates for sure 😃next part tomorrow 😲 the teaser part till then keep guessing ,liking and commenting guys will be eagerly waiting for it sorry for mistakes guys hope u enjoy the update 😉

Edited by kkiddoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Cold se geet ka bura haal hua hai😔 nice to see maan taking care of her ... the baby talk was so cute...
Edited by Niharika.Nair - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update
poor maan scared of sherni geet 😆
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice to c maan bonding with the baby...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the update was nice
continue sooon
and congo for new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread dear

update was lovely

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved maans care n geets anger on maan
the plate is turned n dadi is noticing it..
loved maans thoughts with baby..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Cold se geet ka bura haal hua hai😔 nice to see maan taking care of her ... the baby talk was so cute...

so happy u liked it dear thank u 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

beautiful update

poor maan scared of sherni geet 😆
loved it

so happy u liked it dear thank u 😃

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