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Hi guys i have read many ff's of india forums so thought of writing one i am not sure if u all will like it or not but there is no harm in trying right guys...my ff will start from the seen of maan and geet engagement where our gc got ill and the script got change so i have imagine if it had not happened so what the story would be so its my thought of the part of the story would have been turn in to ...here it is guys plz comment and like and do tell me what do u feel about it even if it is negative ...so happy for all the support i got till now from all my lovely readers thanks to all of them for their support and love that i have reached here and opening thread 3 i just can't believe that we have reeached on the 3 thread of my first ever ff it would have been inpossible without all of u r guys support and luv ...thanks so much guys luv u all 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

IN THIS FF WE HAVE OUR OLD TEAM...

character sketch :

DADIMA

same as show sweet and lovely.

MAAN

Angry young man loves his dadima and younger brother dev a lot but hate naintara dev 's wife dew to her evil mind and he hate woman's expect his dadima bcz of his past he thinks them to be money minded and weak but at the same time he also respect them as thought by his dadima has his on rules and regulation strict from out side soft from inside . But one day his life change when he fall in love with a girl geet who work as his secretary whom he saved from her own brother respects her more after knowing her past love her a lot and takes care of her and her child as his own child for him its geet's child her past does not matters to him but wanna punish the guys who did this to his geet but cant voice it as geet said she has moved on with him and does not want to remember her past and maan can not she her sad remembering her past so he let it go as per her wish...for him geet wish is his commend .unknown to the fact that dev his brother is the person who had ruined his love geet life will he be able to punish his own brother for his sin will he be able to digest the truth...lets see...

GEET

same as show simple and bubbly love maan a lot .her family had abounded her dew to her past. Has only maan and his dadima who loves her like her own daughter and she to loves and respects her a lot .Her best friend is adi sir and pinky from her office but she knows pinky from her childhood as their father r friends .

ADI SIR

same as in ghsp.

PINKY

same as in ghsp

SHASHA

same as in show .

TASHA

same as in show.

dev

love his dadima and brother is married to nt love marriage but had done a great sin by spoiling a girl (geet) life and is guilty .He is a poppet of his wife.But is good from heart want to repaint for his sin by asking for forgiveness and is ready to go to jail if it is what it takes for geet's forgiveness.will he be able to forgive him self after knowning about maan-geet relation.

naintara

dev's wife selfish and money minded married dev bcz of his money .Hates dev flirty nature and can not trust him bcz of it.

merra

dev's collage friend secretly loved him in collage days still did has left him bcz of it after college. But hate him after knowning what he did to geet .Is helping him to come out of his guilt and get forgiveness from geet by finding her .she is doing this as a friend not bcz of love as she cant leave her friend in his bad times.

AND YAA OUR DEAR MR.MANCHANDA I REALLY LIKED HIS ROLE AND THE WAY HE TRUSTED GEET...

SORRY FOR MISTAKE...PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX

Thread 1

Thread 2

Part 29

TEASER

Part 30

Part 31

Thread 4

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Teaser

He was completely lost in his own world as he raced his car towards his destination completely oblivious to his surrounding. It was too late when he saw the truck coming right at him.. he turned the steering wheel completely in order to avoid the approaching death but alas BOOM... the car was totally shattered as the glass pieces pierced the passengers, blood smeared across the road...

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